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ChristopherColumbusisaverycontroversialfigureinAmericanhistory.Currently,thereisanational
holidaythatcelebratesChristopherColumbus.ManypeopleareveryproudofChristopherColumbusand
believehedeservestobecelebratedforhisaccomplishments.Otherpeoplebelieveweshouldgetridofthis
holidaybecauseChristopherColumbusandhismenhadaterribleimpactonthenativepopulationsofthe
Americas.ChristopherColumbusDayshouldnotbecelebratedbecauseColumbusandhismenkilled
innocentpeople,hedidnotdiscoverAmerica,andheenslavedhumanbeings.
First,AmericashouldnotcelebrateColumbusDaybecauseColumbusisresponsibleforkilling
possiblymillionsofinnocentpeople.WhileChristopherColumbusmaynothaveactuallykilledanyone
himself,hegavetheorderstohismentokilltheTainoIndians.ChristopherColumbusdidnothaveany
goodreasonstokillpeopleastheydidnotthreatenhim.Thekillingofinnocentpeopleisunacceptableand
thatisexactlywhatChristopherColumbusorderedhismentodo.DuetothefactthatColumbusordered
thedeathsofinnocentpeople,AmericashouldnotcelebrateColumbusDay.
Next,itwouldbeamistaketocelebrateColumbusDaybecausehedidnotactuallydiscoverAmerica.
ManypeopleassumethatColumbusdiscoveredAmericabuttherewerealreadypeoplelivinginthe
Americaswhenhearrived.Apersoncannotdiscoveraplacewherepeoplealreadylive.Additionally,there
isalotofevidencetoprovethatColumbuswasnotthefirsttolandinAmerica.Mosttextbooksarguethat
LeifErickson,aviking,wasthefirsttolandintheAmericas.Itdoesnotmakesensetocelebrateandhonor
thepersonwhodidnotactuallydiscoverAmerica.
Finally,AmericashouldnotcelebrateColumbusDaybecausehehelpedstarttheslavetrade.Oneof
hisfirstactionswhenhearrivedintheAmericaswastotakeslavesandsendthembacktoEurope.Many
peopleconsiderColumbusactionsasoneeventthatreallyhelpedstarttheslavetrade.Theslavetradewas

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oneofthedarkesttimesinournation'shistoryanditcanbetracedbacktoColumbusactions.Itwouldnot
besmartforAmericatocelebrateamanwhousedhumansasslavesandhelpedstarttheslavetrade.
Insummary,AmericashouldnotcelebrateColumbusday.Columbusisnotagoodperson.Hegave
theorderstokillthousands,perhapsmillionsofTainoIndiansthatheencounteredwhenhecametothe
Americas.ColumbusalsodidnotdiscoverAmerica.Itdoesnotmakesensetocelebratesomeonewhodid
notactuallydiscoverAmerica.Further,theslavetradecanbetracedbacktoColumbusandthatisnot
somethingweshouldcelebrate.Overall,Columbusisnotthetypeofpersonthatshouldbecelebratedinthe
UnitedStatesofAmerica.

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