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The purpose of this essay is to share with my audience one of my true values in
life. It shows how the hardworking individuals in my life have influenced the way I look
at life. The intended audience would be someone that reads, "This I Believe" essays about
personal moral beliefs. The strengths within my essay is punctuation paragraph format
and idea organizations, and grammar use. The weaknesses would probably be fixing the
small punctuation problems, but other than that this essay is concrete. If given a re-do, I
would not change anything other than grammar and punctuation errors.