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Pace, Megan. "Traditions." Sept 16, 2014.

The purpose of this essay is to explain my family traditions.I only took about two
days to start and finish the whole essay. The intended audience would be anyone reading
about family traditions. The strengths of this essay would be layout of main points. The
weaknesses would be choosing better grammar, punctuation, length of paragraphs, and
add more information. If given a re-do, I would upgrade this whole essay and start over
with a better outline.

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