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The Do’s and Don’ts of Expository Essays

(According to Mrs. Miller’s 3A Class)

Do’s Don’ts

 Five paragraphs (no more, no less)  One big paragraph as your essay
 Three supporting reasons for your  Ignore the prompt and write
main topic (one for each body something off-topic
paragraph)  Leave out supporting details
 Introduction (Engaging Beginning  Write about something unrealistic
that Hooks the Reader, Thesis  Use slang, dawg!
Statement)  Write about inappropriate things
 Conclusion (wraps it up, restating  Forget to use FRIES
the thesis)  Bore the reader with a super
 Use proper punctuation and boring introduction (YAWN)
capitalization  Confuse the reader
 5-7 sentences in a paragraph  Use someone else’s ideas as your
 Indent your paragraphs own (plagiarism)
 Use FRIES (Facts, Reasons,  Forget to indent
Incidents, Examples, Statistics,  Use extraneous details, rambling
Sensory Details) (chasing rabbits)
 Make mature word choices  Start sentences (or proper nouns)
 Use proper spelling and grammar with a lower-case letter
 Write ONLY about the prompt  Misspell words
 Plan before you write  Start sentences with because, and,
 Write from your point of view or, & but
 If you title your essay, make it  Write sloppily (scribble-scrabble)
interesting  Leave out transitional words
 If you KNOW a topical quote, you  Write SUPER BIG or super small
may use it
 End with a boring conclusion
 Elaborate, elaborate, elaborate!
 Write in a disorganized manner
 Stay on task
 Write incomplete sentences
 Head your paper in the proper
(fragments) or run-on sentences
fashion
 Use anything other than 1st person
 Vary your sentence structure
point of view
 Write about what you know!
 Use the same reason twice
 Write in complete sentences
 Write uneven paragraphs (2
 Write neatly
sentences, 8 sentences)
 Write a narrative /story

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