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Caruso ENGL 1102 13 February 2012 Osama bin Laden: Life and Death Osama bin Laden, the most notorious terrorist over the past two decades, saw his life come to a crumbling end on May 2, 2011. The Federal Bureau of Investigation had a 25 million dollar bounty for his head. He was the founder of the terrorist group Al-Qaeda that was responsible for the attacks on September 11, 2001. Osama bin Laden claimed full responsibility for the attacks on that dreadful day and his death was an assurance to the American people that our country was strong and will continue to fight for freedom as long as this country stands. The number of American causalities on 9/11 was 2,977. Bin Laden successfully brought down the Twin Towers, a part of the Pentagon, and another plane crashed in a field in Shanksville, Pennsylvania, supposedly headed for a target in Washington D.C. Thankfully, the plane that crashed in Pennsylvania, was prevented because American patriots decided to stand up and fight theses extremists. Bin Laden claimed the attacks were the Americans fault because we allow freedom and allow Israel to do whatever they want. He also said he wanted to help the Americans know how to prevent another attack and thought that President Bush was weak and didnt know how to protect his own people.
Comment [A4]: The introduction is very well and informs the reader of the main idea, possibly include a little more research to strengthen the paper as a whole, overall though the paper seems to be headed in the right direction. Comment [A3]: Is this the main idea of the paper? Comment [A2]: State what the target was? I think it was headed for the White House. Comment [A1]: Reviewed by: Aaron Crumbley No questions from writer.

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