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    This document contains a validation video consisting of 5 scenes involving conversations between characters Tom, Victoria, Ralph, Marie, Sophie, and Mike. The summary provides: - Scene 1 takes place at an airport where Tom engages multiple people in conversation about their appearance and compliments them. - Scene 2 shows Tom attempting to get Victoria to smile for her passport photo, but she refuses. - In Scene 3, Tom tries multiple times to get Victoria to smile by offering her gifts and asking her on a date, but she continues to refuse and run away. - Scene 4 features Ralph and Marie, who Tom photographs as a nice couple after they agree to pose. - The final

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    This document contains a validation video consisting of 5 scenes involving conversations between characters Tom, Victoria, Ralph, Marie, Sophie, and Mike. The summary provides: - Scene 1 takes place at an airport where Tom engages multiple people in conversation about their appearance and compliments them. - Scene 2 shows Tom attempting to get Victoria to smile for her passport photo, but she refuses. - In Scene 3, Tom tries multiple times to get Victoria to smile by offering her gifts and asking her on a date, but she continues to refuse and run away. - Scene 4 features Ralph and Marie, who Tom photographs as a nice couple after they agree to pose. - The final

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    Team 1 Underlined Mistakes

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    This document contains a validation video consisting of 5 scenes involving conversations between characters Tom, Victoria, Ralph, Marie, Sophie, and Mike. The summary provides: - Scene 1 takes place at an airport where Tom engages multiple people in conversation about their appearance and compliments them. - Scene 2 shows Tom attempting to get Victoria to smile for her passport photo, but she refuses. - In Scene 3, Tom tries multiple times to get Victoria to smile by offering her gifts and asking her on a date, but she continues to refuse and run away. - Scene 4 features Ralph and Marie, who Tom photographs as a nice couple after they agree to pose. - The final

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    Validation Video

    Dialogues Team 1

    Characters: Tom Victoria Ralph Marie Sophie Mike

    CONVERSATION SCENE 1 SEALING TICKETS (TIME: 00:00 2:34)

    Ralph: Tom: Ralph: Tom: Ralph: Marie: Tom: Marie: Mike: Tom: Mike:

    Good morning! There is my ticket. Sorry!

    Good morning! Sir. Why are you serius? Why are you so serius? You are great!, You have a smile wonderful! You should smile. Really? Thank you. Check it please. You have chick wonderful. You are beautiful! Do you think so? Thanks. Hey! What happen here? What do you doing with these people? Are they your friends or family? You look great! You are so elegant. What a suit nice! Thats a color fantastic.

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    Dialogues Team 1

    Tom:

    Do you think so? You are great men! , You look very nice and fantastic!

    SCENE 2
    Victoria: Tom: Victoria:

    PHOTO FOR THE PASSPORT (TIME 4:05 5:21)


    No smiling is permitting here Next You are very pretty! Can you give me a smile? Your name is Victoria, arent you?. You has a nice name. It is closed. I have to go. Goodbye

    SCENE 3
    Tom: Victoria: Tom:

    CHANGING ATTITUDE (TIME 5:32-7:38)


    Those the flowers are for you. Next. Why cant you smile? You should to smile, and you have to smile, please. Wait! Dont run fast. Would you like a coffee, a tea or an ice cream? Look at the dog!

    Victoria: Tom: Victoria: Ralph: Tom: Ralph: Tom:

    Next Chocolates for youThis heart is for you. Im sad. Why cant you smile? Im sorry. I have to work. Can you validate it please? Ok. You are OK. OK: Did you say OK? Yes, you are fine.

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    SCENE 4
    Ralph and Marie: Tom: Ralph: Tom:

    TRANSMITING SMILES (TIME 7: 42 8:50,9:33 9:50)


    Excuse me! Can you take a picture, please? Sure! Thanks. Smile. Do you love each other? You are a nice couple. Thats great! You are really nice people. Great! Other, one more, one more. Beautiful! You have nice eyes and a nice face. Excuse me!

    Sophie: Tom:

    You have a nice smile. Can you give a smile and take a picture, please?

    SCENE 5
    Tom: Victoria:

    FINAL MEETING (TIME 11:52-14:47)


    I dont understanding. You are smiling. Yes, I am. I can now. You made smile my mom. I smile for you. You are great!, You are amazing!, You are a great man! I love you. Give me a smile too.

    Hi! Guys Your dialogues are very nice. The format of the document is perfect; you used all the tools and indications I gave you. You have to check only grammar, syntax and spelling.

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    Dialogues Team 1

    Use of there and here. Check dictionary to see the differences, you can check this dictionary online: http://www.wordreference.com/es/translation.asp? tranword=online 2. Spelling for serius, check it please. 3. Use of adjectives/ Order of an adjective in a sentence. Check this website and correct them. http://www.englishzone.com/grammar/adjective-find01.html Observe and make the exercise. 4. Use of have and has http://www.engvid.com/englishgrammar-have-has-had/ 5. Use of these and those http://www.engvid.com/basicgrammar-this-that-these-those/ 6. Use of the modal verb should: http://www.engvid.com/give-advice-should-ought-to-hadbetter/ 7. You have to use more frequency adverbs and connectors.
    1.

    Good luck my dear students! ATTE Miss. Adriana Fernndez Daz.

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