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Action Notes Max bursts through the doors of the factory. Low angle shot

Action Notes Max and Pat run into frame. Max first.

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Dialogue MAX: Are there any that you didn't drop?

Action Notes Pat reveals an orange from his pocket.

Dialogue PAT: ah!

Action Notes Pat and Max stop. Max is impatient foot tapping. Pat is out of breath hunched over breathing. After max's line Pat looks up from being hunched over.

Action Notes Max goes to snatch the orange but Pat pulls it back.

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Dialogue PAT: My lighter?

Dialogue MAX: (sigh) Fine.

Action Notes Pats hand outstreched.

Action Notes Pat requests lighter. lifts up his hand open palm. He is smug.

Action Notes Max rols his eye and says his line with distaine.

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Action Notes Max drops lighter in Pats hand

Action Notes Max flips hand as Pat retracts lighter then offers out orange.

Action Notes Drops it into Max's hand

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Action Notes Max pockets the orange.

Action Notes Max exits to right. Pats looks off towards Max.

Action Notes low angle est. shot of factory slowly rising up.

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Action Notes maxs foot coming into frame.

Action Notes Max starts to make his way across the gap.

Action Notes Pat slowly appears looking down into the gap. He is scared.

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Action Notes He beings to make his way across. using his arms to balence. he is not happy. he is scared

Action Notes Max is looking back at pat. unamused at how scared he is. -

Action Notes rolls his eyes and begins to contine you across the gap.

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Dialogue MAX: (humming to himself john browns body)

Action Notes Pat hears Max humming

Action Notes continues across the gap.

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Action Notes Lowers his arms

Action Notes and gets angry and stroms twoards MAX.

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Dialogue PAT; Hey!

Action Notes Pat is not happy. max turns round to look at pat.

Dialogue Max: oh im sorry mate. your father.

Action Notes Pushes Max.

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Dialogue Max: my mistake

Action Notes and takes him off screen with a miscfivous look on his face.

Action Notes ext frame.

Action Notes pulls pat close under his wing.