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Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families
could be brought closer together.
Just five decades ago, family bonds were much stronger than our present time. Grandparents
living with grandchildren under the same roof was an out of question matter. It might pass
your mind that living as a part of an extended family could lead to numerous arguments (),
lack of privacy. Even if its true, reality proved that the modern nuclear family was not any
different. In this essay , I will discuss some of the reasons why this alternation in family
You have provided some good reasons and suggestions as required, well
done. However, your introduction needs attention.
An essay introduction serves to attract the readers interest, introduce
the topic, and explain what the essay will be about. Correspondingly, an
essay introduction contains three features that usually appear in the
following order: an attention-getter, some background information and
the central idea.
You have included the attention-getter but the remainder of the
introduction should be reviewed. I dont believe that sentences like In
this essay , I will discuss some of the reasons why this alternation in family structure
occurred and some suggested solutions to overcome associated problems. are the
central idea.
Comment: as