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Name: Kay

Period:7th
Suspense Analytical Paragraph

The suspense from Tell tale heart starts when the main character decides he
sneaks into an old mans house and just stands there for a long time. Later on in the
story he goes back in his room and kills him and admits it to the cops. After the man kills
him the story is so addicting because you are anxious to find out what happens next. I
think the most suspenseful part is when the police show up. This man thinks that they
know admits it to the police. One of the reasons this is so suspenseful is the author
describes this part very vivid. Theres so many things happening now it is hard to keep
track of everything. And heres a suspenseful quote is And now a new anxiety seized
me, the sound would be heard by a neighbor. This quote tells you that something bad
is about to happen. There is a lot of moods, feelings, guilt and just admits it all. This is
the suspense in the story tell tale heart.

Header

1/1

Title

1/1

Indent

1/1

TS- topic
sentence

2/3

IQ - introduce
the quote

5/5

Q - quote
correctly and
effectively

5/5

SDsupporting
details

5/5

T- transitions

/3 (use at
least two!)

FL - formal
language
rules

3/3

DS - double
space

1/1

Proofreading
errors

Total

24/28

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