Mendez 1

Eduardo Mendez
Professor Batty
English 28
14 December, 2016
Reflection
This essay I revised is a Narrative essay. The main topic in this essay is My OCD and
how it changes the way I look at life. This essay has five paragraphs explaining my life and what
I've gone through because of OCD. In this essay I believe I did a really good job. I explained the
topic really well and was clear about almost everything. I transitioned smoothly and it wasn't
confusing for the reader. My revised essay has more sentences that explain situation more clear.
For my narrative essay I didn't really have a lot of problems but the format. I need to memorize
the MLA format by heart. I also need to working on my punctuation, I have problem with run on
sentences, I had a couple on this essay that I had to fix and I did. The problem with run on
sentence is the punctuation, I sometimes dont know if its a comma or a semi colon and I get
confused. I need to work on that as well as the format. Other than that this essay was a good
essay that I felt I did a really good job.