TITLES

Area

Strengths

Targets

Order
Font choices

The titles are in a suitable order

The font fits well with the genre
connoting a light hearted tone
The white colour helps to convey the
genre
All positioned well. Not distracting from
what is happening on screen
The titles all fade in and out well
helping to keep the flow

Colours
Positioning
Transitions

Mark /
5
5
5

The colour could be changed to make

each title bolder
The actress name could be put with a
shot of her character
Section Total

4
4
5
23/25

CINEMATOGRAPHY/E
DITING
Area

Strengths

Targets

Mise-en-scene

Good use of props and costumes fit

really well with the genre and
storyline. All goes well together
Really good range of shot types. The
variety keeps the audience interested
and also allows them to see different
things each time
Really good use of camera
movements. Not having your camera
placed in one bit and focussing on only
one thing makes it more interesting
The pace was good. It was quite short
paced however this fits in with your
genre
The transitions were mostly all cuts, I

Mark /
5
5

Be careful, some shots appear blurry and

shaky but still really good!

Including some faster paced scenes and

shots could intrigue the audience

Try adding fades in bits where he seems

Range of shot types

Camera
angles/movements

Pace

Editing effects/transitions

think this worked well with your genre

and can help to build tension. Really
good blurred effect when he is at the
mirror

to be more down and upset

Section Total

21/25

INTRODUCTION OF:
Area

Strengths

Targets

Characters and
relationships
Locations

We get to know Charlie well through

reactions, body language and costume
Location introduced

Storyline
Genre
Enigma codes

Easy to follow
Clearly introduced
Lots of enigma codes, i.e. who is
Erika, why is she there?

Mark /
5
5

Could include an establishing shot that

shows the house he is in
Section Total

4
4
4
4
21/25

SOUND
Area

Strengths

Targets

Suitability of
soundtrack/score to
genre
Pace matched to pace of
visuals
Audio levels

Soundtrack suits genre and rest of film

Mark /
5
5

I very much liked how the music starts

exactly as the stop button is pressed
Mostly, the audio levels were stable

Some shots background noise was

louder than others, causing slight
continuity errors. (the flashback, whilst
looking at mirror, and walking down

Clarity of
dialogue/voiceover
Use of ambient
sound/sound effects to
add atmosphere

Very clear dialogue

Ambient sound worked well. No need
for sound effects

stairs and at 1:34)

Although understandable, sometimes the
audio was a little quiet
Some shots do not have any ambient
sounds, so when a shot with ambient
sound cuts to one without it, the
difference is heard
Section Total

4
3

20/25