INT. INSIDE VICTIMS HOUSE.

LATE EVENING
Main character will be staring at his hands. They will be covered
with blood as he has just committed a murder. The victim lays still
on the floor, Lamar(also known as Targz) will be traumatised only
just realising what he has done alongside his friend. Targz is a
young black boy with plaits, panting anxiously.
TARGS (V.O)
Why did I do this?
I am deffo getting bagged for this.
Damn im pissed.
Why you still standing here! Run cuz you gotta go!
Targs finally comes to his senses
but is still standing still as if
puts his hand on Targss shoulder
is around the same age as Targs a
from the same gang.

and realises that he needs to go

he was paralyzed. Jerome comes and
and begins to snap him out. Jerome
little taller than him and are

JEROME
(Angrily whispering)
Cuz we gotta go the jakes are gonna buss the corner any moment now
TARGZ
(Stuttering heavily)
A-a-alrihgt bro lets go!
Jerome and Targs dart towards the front door and escape while they
get the chance to. Jerome takes the lead and Targz looks to follow
INT. JEROMES HOUSE. MORNING.
Jerome calls Targs on the phone to see if hes okay has some news to
tell him about the murder
INT. TARGZS HOUSE. MORNING.
Targz picks up the phone looking slightly anxious to see what he has
to say.
TARGZ
Yo
JEROME
Yo bro, about what happened the other week, make sure no one hears
about what weve just done. The only mandem who know is the hood,
looks like youre the man in the ends at the moment
TARGZ

Bruv,my mind is going mad, suttin aint right and I can feel it, my
minds playing games and keeps showing everything that happened.
JEROME
Cuz youre stressin too much, relax bun a zoot or suttin just know
you done the ends good bro, but Ill see you downstairs in 5.
Targz then flings on his jacket and then heads out the front door.
The graphic images of the last events flash in his head making him
stumble and put his hands on his head. But he proceeds and advances
down the stairs whilst Jerome is waiting for him downstairs. They
meet outside Targz block and have a discussion. Targz face looks a
bit down and distraught while Jerome is pretty calm, light-hearted
and doesnt even think about the murder.
EXT. OUTSIDE THE BLOCK. AFTERNOON
TARGZ
Honestly man my mind is gonna blow
JEROME
To be honest, im not gonna lie to you, I have sensed something
different about you but I dont know what it is but, you gotta fix
up asap
TARGZ
True say spark one up.
Jerome then decides put pull out some weed, a grinder and a couple
of sheets. Whilst this happens, the local gang emerge round the
corner, some on bikes, some on foot, all pretty covered up in
tracksuits and some bomber jackets
They make shout some gang affiliated sounds and noises shouting in
unison.
However Targz isnt impressed and decided to take a walk and relief
from some stress, until he receives a phone call from his girlfriend
who really cares for him. She is small, petite, black young female.
But he doesnt pick up, and proceeds to walk towards the building.
As he gets the location they end up bumping into each other however
Targz doesnt take her existence in and walks straight past her.
JUSTINE
Lamar, Dont walk away from me, Ive been wanting to speak to you in
ages.
TARGZ

(no words come out of his mouth but his facial expressions show that
he is upset and hasnt got a clue to what is going on)
INT. BLOCK. MID-DAY
Targz enters the building and Justine follows after seconds later.
He presses the lift button, it opens and then he enters with
Justine, and they both stand there with looking dead straight at the
door. Until they get to the top floor.
TARGZ
Look Justine, recently I have been a real dick, even I have noticed
it too, but look things havent been right and I have come to put an
end to it. Ill see you later. I think I need some time away just to
reflect honestly
JUSTINE
If all you need is time, then I will let you be. But Lamar if
anything is wrong just please make sure you pick up the phone. That
is all I ask for.
Justine heads back into the lift which takes her down to ground
floor and she has now left the scene. Targz is now alone, with only
the dreadful thoughts of what happened before to keep him company.
He stairs back into his hands only seeing the trauma that has been
daunting him.
TARGZ(V.O)
And thats when I realised that all this image isnt really gonna
effect anyone but me, I have faced the ultimate consequence, just
because I wanted to have fame, popularity, money. At the end of the
day it is all left behind when youre six feet under.