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Commentary paragraph

Money is the source of happiness.

This quote indicates that money is


indispensable to become happy. This thought push
us to ask some questions: is money enough to
make the person happy? are poor people living
unhappy? In fact, nowadays money is necessary to
buy the necessities and solve the basic problems of
life such food, clothes and shelter. Moreover, it can
also buy things that can be source of happiness
and gives access to several ways of entertainment.
However, if we follow this logic, we notice that
being quite happy requires more money, which is
untrue: Undoubtedly, not all rich people are happy,
likewise not all poor people are unhappy, its about
contentment. Thus, the problem may actually be in
how we can define happiness and the way we
spend money also. Therefore, money dont
necessarily make you happy, but it make you live
comfortably, whereas, living moneyless, in this
expensive world, requires to struggle in whole life.

ROUTABI Oussama
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