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Ashley McNeill
CRW 3013
Professor Roney
11 October 2015
No More Tomorrows
Breathing was painful; or at least that what Rose was thinking. For each
inhale, she could feel herself choking on the thick air, the debris floating around.
Groaning, she opened her eyes and could barely believe what she was seeing.
Houses were destroyed, their hard concrete skeletons reduced to nubs, fires littered
the little bit of street she could see through the destroyed wall, and the sky. The sky
was so otherworldly looking that it was hard for her to comprehend. All she could
really say is that the sky looked angry. It is red and almost looks like it is cracked,
like a glass vase that didnt quite shatter. Forcing herself to gain her bearings, she
slowly rolled herself onto her stomach, noticing that the ringing in her ears had
finally ceased. However, what took its place wasnt any more pleasant than the
ringing. All she could register were the sounds of people screaming, pleas that
made no sense, and the tortured cries of people who were truly terrified.
Feeling the adrenaline start to kick in, Rose stumbled to her feet, then made
her way to the front door to see what all of the commotion was; since all she could
remember was a bright flash of light, the intense burning on her back and cheeks,
and then blacking out under the pressure of the roof collapsing on top of her.
However, what she found was not what she was expecting. Everything was
complete anarchy. People were running, some were sitting in their drive ways with
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dazed looks on their faces, and one woman was openly weeping at the street
corner. However, upon closer inspection she noticed a tiny body resting in the
womans arms and Rose had to turn to the side feeling the bile rise up her throat.
Unable to stop its ascent all Rose could do was cough it up, and feel the dread settle
in her stomach. Was that real, had she truly seen what she thought she had, it
couldnt be possible, and how could something like that happen. So close to home
anyway.
A second glance only re-confirmed what she had seen the first time, and Rose
felt the panic set in. Then with further thinking she came to an even more startling
realization, where was her family, were they okay. Rushing down the porch stairs
into the streets with the other people Rose quickly made her way around the street
corner to her own house, not emotionally capable enough to think about her friend
Marissa whom she had been visiting with just an hour ago. Pushing her door aside
Rose felt both relief at not finding any of her family hurt, and crushing loneliness at
the fact that none of them were there at all. Had they gone out, were they okay?
Yes, they had to be okay. If she, with all her lack of technique and survival
knowledge could make it, then her military trained dad most certainly could pull her
family through this. At least that was what she was going to tell herself until she
found any evidence that proved otherwise. With this issue quickly fielded to the
back of her mind, Rose thought through all of the places she should check to see if
This line of thought was interrupted though, when Rose heard rubble moving
around. Quickly spinning on her heel Rose picked her way through the wreckage of
her house to the crumbling wall and almost immediately wished she hadnt. One of
her neighbors, Mr. Fitzpatrick maybe, is screaming and trying to escape from a
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goliath of a human. However, before he could get too far he crumpled to the
ground, the loud crack of gun echoing through the air. Rose had to cover her mouth
to keep the rising scream from escaping. She forced herself to swallow the cry, lest
the man realize she was there. Sliding down the wall, Rose held her head in her
hands and felt anxiety start to take over. Heavens she couldnt afford this right now.
She kept trying to force herself up, to move, but her body just wouldnt follow
orders. Clenching her hands in dust and sediment that covered the ground Rose
took a handful. Running it through her hands, trying to find comfort in having
something normal. Even if it was crushed up bits of her old home. Feeling the panic
loosen its hold on her windpipe and the butterflies in her stomach calm down, Rose
risked a quick glance around the wall, only to notice that the bulky man wasnt
alone anymore, that one of his friends was quickly making his way up to her house.
What do I do, what do I do she wondered. She couldnt fight, she had no idea
how to handle a weapon if she were lucky enough to get her hands on one, and she
isnt a runner by anyones standards. At this moment however, it was the only thing
she could think of that would put distance between her and them. Wrangling her
limbs in, she leapt to her feet, hearing the exclamation of the group behind her, and
ran as fast as she could towards the woods that surround the small town. She heard
them pursue her, could hear their sick laughter at the thought of having something
to hunt. She let this fuel her need to run faster. She felt twigs slap her skin, tiny
whips splitting her skin, but she wasnt going to stop. She ran until she couldnt
hear them anymore. Kept running until, finally, her legs gave out. Her muscles
spasmed and caused her to fall to the ground. She let herself lie there, feeling the
pine needles dig into her uncomfortably, but couldnt bring herself to care. God she
was so tired, both emotionally and physically, but she couldnt sleep here, not in the
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open. She may not be a survivalist of any kind, but even she knew that would be a
bad idea.
Past finding a hiding spot though, Rose had no clue what she should do next.
Shed never been camping, had no idea how to make a shelter or fire, or how to
confuse and deter predators. Human or animal. Plus she was starving, which she
felt was stupid in the face of everything. So with all of this uncertainty she allowed
herself to lie there for a few more minutes, allowed the day to sink in, and finally