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Mr. Long
CSU Exposit RW
4/30/2017
Pride Essay
An accomplishment that I take great pride in is, when I finished my junior year I moved
to Merced and when summer was over and school was going to start I was planning to attend
Merced High School but it turns out I was missing a lot of credits for me to graduate and because
of that I was asked to attend Yosemite High School a continuation school, I ended up agreeing to
attend that school, the plan was to attend that school to catch up with my credits to later move to
Merced High School for the second semester. It made me sad to have to go to that school
because I was really looking forward to being at Merced High and joining the soccer team. The
first weeks were hard and it seemed like it never wouldve finished. I didn't really make friends
because I didn't try to, after all I wasn't there to make friends. The reason I am proud of this
achievement is because I made it through even though it didn't seem like I would at the
beginning, I achieved 72.0 credits in one semester which was four months I stayed everyday
after school at the After School program and went to adult school after the program ended each
day and in adult school I was the one who finished first with the course that I was taking I did
this two times because I had to go back after to complete another course. And I finished two
online classes along with my other normal classes. It was definitely something to be proud of.