Personal Statement

My Research:

tell them what u want

What are your skills

explain what type of program u want to study/ why?

Explain your RELEVANT skills

Do some research about the school

Dont just list, give concrete examples

Be clear & Explicit (specific such as type of business)

Be unique!

Explain how is it relevant

Explain your fit (why u re a good fit for them)

why are u a good fit for this program

Moving on

what can u bring to this program

whats next after university?

Explain!
how is this program going to help you get there?

Be unique - tell them about an innovative idea for a business

Explain who u are

as a person
General Tips

Focus on your strengthsExplain

Be unique - dont sound scripted. Dont sound like a tutor wrote it.
Be positive!!! Not Just what u say, but your tone
Dont sound like every other applicant

obstacles are good - but how did u overcome and what Dont be too weird either

did you learn? Not call attention to your weakness

Be specific, give real examples. At the same time, you must be
Extra-curricular are great, BUT keep it relevant! concise

Avoid cliches at all costs! dont sound fake!

I research what is personal statement, and look Organise first

at some example get as much feedback as possible

I research about specific program which is

accounting/finance
 Feedback:

Pin Punch
Mrs. Katie

Using the words that have more

interesting, and grab the readers

attention.

Rearrange the structure of the

sentence to have more interested.

Be more specific.

Some sentences are too common.