Lopez Jesus

Professor Batty
English 101
30 May 2017
Reflection

The Ethnographic Essay is a genre of writing that uses fieldwork to provide a descriptive study

of human societies. Consisted of choosing a location in the LA area that has a reason within a

reason and write about what we observe being in that certain location. What I chose to write

about in my essay is a Community Park, El Cariso. In this essay I got an 34/50 for the reason

that's only had one source and provided a lot of information and not following MLA Format

either. They way I fixed my essay is requiring more than one source to make my argument not

only based on one source which made it more powerful. I also reread my essay to find certain

grammar mistake I didn't see before and I also look for MLA Format which I found some couple

of errors in the works cited page. Finally what I did was I change my title to make it more

creative we'll hope I'm not really creative , but i did my best I changed the first title I did The

Purpose into this new title A Reason behind A Reason.