Lopez 1

David Lopez

Holly Batty

English 101

30 May 2017

Comments
The ethnographic essay I must admit could have been much stronger. The problem with

this one was that when I went to go do my observation assignment, my area was under

construction. What my professor had to say about this report is that my essay had some

information that didnt need to be there, it didnt go alone with thesis. She said I could make it a

little tighter as in make it stronger. She also mentioned my MLA formatting was almost on point.