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David Lopez

Holly Batty

English 101

30 May 2017

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For our final report my professor let me know that I had to work on my works cited page

for this one, I was also missing in-text citations, and to avoid vulgarity. She also suggested to

come up with a counter-argument. My body paragraphs needed to tie back to my thesis, and I

also needed work on my topic sentences. Setting up my quotes is something that she also left in

my comment box. The biggest question my professor had was how was she admirable.