Rose Aguilar

9 April 2017

Professor Batty

English 101

Visual Analysis Essay Reflection

The only people I have gotten feedback from was Ms. Batty, Colette and

Berenisse. According to my feedback I will work on my claim/argument because it wasn't very

clear or specific in my essay. For example, one of the three major points of my claim was the

social exceptions of Latina women, so I need to focus on explaining that a bit more. I will also

support my ideas more thoroughly because I "beat around the bush" and don't really state my

evidence or support it as much as it should have been. As far as my evidence goes, I need to look

for better sources so that my claim is strong, reliable and credible. I am also going to work on my

essay structure. In my essay, I do speak about one point in each paragraph, however, I don't feel

as if my essay was in a "flow-y," meaning that I slacked on my transitional phrases. Although I

didn't have many grammar errors, I feel that sometimes I add words into my sentences that aren't

necessary, so it doesn't make sense, therefore, I need to edit my sentences (once I revise

everything else). I also need to work on my MLA format because I didn't have a header, and my

heading and evidence weren't cited properly.