Rose Aguilar

24 May 2017

Professor Batty

English 101

Literacy Analysis Reflection

Although this essay was my lowest grade, I feel like my claim was one of my

strongest. Some obvious points I need to fix on my essay is my MLA formatting such as citing

sources and my header. But on a bigger note, I believe my thesis needs to be a little more clearer.

I need to be more specific, however, I feel like my claim was good. I also need to be more

specific on why the character I chose was benevolent. I might have to define the word

benevolent and maybe put some examples from the book on how my character was acting

benevolent. Ill most likely add this in my introduction. As well as the benevolent concept, I

think it needs to be more clear in every paragraphpoint.