Rose Aguilar

8 May 2017

Professor Batty

English 101

Ethnographic Essay Reflection

For my ethnographic essay, I overall feel that my argument was weak. I stated my

argument but my sources didn't help me as much as I wish it did. The feedback I was able to

receive was from my classmate and Ms. Batty. According to them, I need to focus on how the

restaurant I wrote about is important to the Latino community, in this case, North Hollywood. I

have three paragraphs and they're separated into the three topics of its community, environment

and family stability. However, according to my feedback, I need to express or demonstrate a

whole lot more about how each topics related. For example, I have this paragraph where I write

about my observation of a homeless man and I didn't really relate it to my topic. I most definitely

need find more scholarly articles. I also need to do a lot of editing because I have some sentences

that are worded incorrectly. Lastly, I need to fix my MLA format errors and citations.