Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Useful phrases (
Writing formal letters and emails)
a) Writing formal letters generally:
Greetings:Dear Sir Dear MadamDear Sir/Madam*1Dear Mr Brown *2Dear Ms Jones etc.Reason
for writing:I am writing in response to your article/advertisement/letterI am writing with regard
to your article/advertisement/letterI am writing regarding your article/advertisement/letterI am
writing on behalf of Ending the letter:I look forward to receiving your replyI look forward to
your replyI look to hearing from you Yours faithfully*1Yours sincerely*2
b) Writing formal letters to complain
:Reason for writing:I am writing in order to complain aboutI am writing to complain
aboutIntroducing the complaint:FirstlyIn the first placeFirst of allMy first complaint isThe first
problem isThe first thing I would like to draw your attention to isMy first concern isIntroducing
further complaints:SecondlyIn the second placeNot only .but alsoIn additionIn addition to
this.was also unacceptableDemanding action:I suggest that you replace the itemI therefore
suggest that I be given a full refundI would be grateful if my money was refundedI would be
grateful if you could give me a full refundEnding the letter:I look forward to hearing from youI
look forward to receiving a full refund
You said that I feel sure there must be some mistake as I am sure that
COMPLAINTS - ending
I do not usually complain, but, as an old customer, I am sure you will be interested in
my comments.
We feel there must be some explanation for (this delay) and expect your prompt reply.
Will you please look into this matter and let us know the reason for
Thank you for your assistance.
I am returning the damaged goods/items and shall be glad if you will replace them.
Please look into this matter at once and let me know the delay.
I look forward to a prompt reply and hope that you will take into
consideration
Formal Letters.
I am writing on behalf of
Asking questions
Could you ?
With regard to .
Closing expressions
Signing off
name
Your first name + surname printed clearly under your signature
Sample letter.
You recently visited a local sports centre and were dissatisfied with the service provided. You
have
decided to write to the manager.
Carefully read this advertisement for the sports centre and the notes you have made. Write a
letter to
the manager, complaining about the service you received and suggesting improvements.
.
A fully- equipped gym
.
Professional staff
.
A swimming pool
.
Full-size tennis courts
.
Lessons in many sports
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing following a recent visit to the Newtown Sports Centre. I would like to express my
disappointment with the service I received.
Although the staff were generally polite and helpful, they seemed to lack basic sports knowledge.
None
of them could offer any advice to me on choosing a tennis racket. I suggest that you send your
employees on suitable training courses..
Another cause for complaint was that the swimming pool was closed. I understand that repairs
and
maintenance need to be carried out. However, when I called for information the day before my
visit, the
receptionist did not mention that the pool was closed. If I had known, I would have visited the
sports
centre at another time.
Finally, offering lessons in different sports is a good idea, but in my opinion they seem to be
very
expensive. Considering the membership fee, the prices of lessons should be lower, and more
sports
should be offered. I was disappointed that neither diving nor windsurfing was available.
I hope you will take these points into consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Joe Bloggs.
Checklist.
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It is a formal letter
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It includes all the information necessary
.
You have asked all the questions you need to
.
The questions are correctly formulated indirect questions
.
The letter is divided into paragraphs
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You have checked the letter carefully for mistakes
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Useful Expressions for Articles and Competition Entries
Here are some useful expressions for Articles and Competition Entries. Have a look, then try the
quiz to test your knowledge.
(contributed by Jane, Nervion)
PART 2
What strikes me about the first picture is the fact that...
This picture reminds me of...
Judging from the photograph, the children...
The man appears to be...
From what we can see here, he must...
There are many similarities...
Both picture depict...
Both picture are quite similar in that they show...
When you give it a closer look it reveals...
It's difficult to tell from a photograph but this picture could have been taken in ...
I might be wrong, but I'd say that this picture ...
I would imagine/guess that this picture comes from ...
The name for this escapes me at present, but it's for/it's like ...
The name for it is on the tip of my tongue ...
PART 3
Up to the problem in question ...
The main problem centres around ...
It's my belief ...
For my part ...
As I see it ...
As I was saying ...
I forgot to mention ...
I'm of the opinion that ...
To my mind ...
To my way of thinking ...
I am convinced that ...
I am inclined to believe that ...
PART 4
Just following from what X was saying, I also feel ...
While generally agreeing with X, I must say that ...
Adding to what X has just said, I think ...
I can sympathise with what X said but ...
One thing X didn't mention is ...
Surprising, as it may seem, I don't support X's view on ...
Perhaps it should be also emphasized that ... / it should be pointed out that ...