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Charlotte Whitmee Age: 19 Carla Owen Age:16
Positives: Positives:
. The acting came across as realistic. . The blood and make up looked realistic and
effective
Negatives:
. The fast paced editing helped to create
. Some of the shots could be shortened even suspense.
more as some go on for a long amount of time
and drag it out when it doesnt really need to Negatives:
be there. . The sound effects could be worked upon,
making them louder and harsher.
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Chloe Brooks Age: 22
Positives:
. The appearance of the title of the film at the
end of the trailer looks much more professional
and interesting rather than it just appearing,
you have added movement to it which is
effective in making a statement about what the
film is called.
Negatives:
. Some of the volume of the actors is quiet and
could be made much louder so it is clearer for
the audience to hear.
Feedback: 4
Amelia Charles Age: 19
Positives:
. The way the shots have been edited with
adding colour correction to them has helped to
show the mood which should be interpreted at
the moment of time in the trailer.
Negatives:
. The lighting in some of the shots couldve been
much brighter to capture the emotions on the
actors faces.