Seth Morris

September 15, 2017

Exercise 4

Things I would change:

The document to say coworkers instead of employees
Take out the section about saving time and money
In place of saving time and money I would add a section on covering for your
sick coworkers to emphasize how you want all of your coworkers healthy.
Changing the wording from diarrhea to something a little more clean like a
stomach bug

I would keep the sections about improving you and your familys health.