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not anymore
Kash_LOL-Today at 9:58 PM
Ha
Ok, so r8 now this is a mess
lol
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emcee-Today at 9:59 PM
quite so
whats the plot though

Mrs Grant principal, Eliot photography teacher, Steph drama teacher, Rachel & Chloe moms
w/son and daughter
Nathan security dude after dad loses fortune
hmm.... plot
Warren & Brooke with a stalker son, Max and Steph with kids
lol
Chloes daughter runs off with Eliots daughter...
Eliot still in his "revenge" feelings
ayee
so is it a thing like
they both got pregant around the same time, chloe had a girl and rachel and a boy or what
is goign on there ?
This Eliot should really hate Rachel
ofc he would
so jealous
@Lady Karo that could be possible, both of them have a kid at around the same time, Chloe
and Rachel
i think its magical (edited)

just say its magical
no further explanation needed
of course, seeing those kids in school triggers Eliot
what's the main plot line?
yeah i was wondering the same thing
lol
Revenge of the Eliot?
lmao
Blackwell the next generation?
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Ready player kathmandiaToday at 10:04 PM
ill need some time to think of plot ideas
chloe and rachel dont realize its eliots daughter at first ?
Chloes daughter and Eliots daughter are both in Stephs drama class
@Lady Karo nice idea, they only realize when the two girls run off
and the police tell them the surname of the other(edited)
oooww
drama
!
ya but would they be like 'no you cant!' or would the just be moredisapproving ... i would
think disapproving
of course, grandma Joyce has a massive deja vu
r8 now i will keep the server how it is r8 now , if more people joins , i will change
things/settings
lol poor joyce
but the real quiestion is
Ready player AliceToday at 10:07 PM
why are they sitll in arcadia bay
@Lady Karo maybe some of the shit never happened?
sure
Alice-Today at 10:08 PM
what is this
or they aren't in arcadia bay but in seattle or portland instead
@Alice A project what born with 3 ideas from all of us here
they visit joyce and thats when the girl meets eliot'sdaughter
xD
somewhere
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
a junkyard?
lmao yes
too repetitive?
hmmm
maybe they both have a part time job in some diner?
the two girls meet
fall in love
do drama class stuff
hm
joyce the diner owner is completely oblivious
hehe
they totally googly eye each other
the uh kids
maybe even do a first makeout in the ladies room?
spicy
or instead of learning the names from eloping/police report, the girls do a "meet the
parents" thing and then eliot/chloe/rachel meet(edited)
oh lawd
1
OMG
LMAO
BEST
how awkward!!!!!
chloe is like WTF and Eliot starts raging at Rachel who rages back
oh god
lmao!
but who is Eliots wife?
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
some new girl to the scene?
since everyone hates eliot
it be weird to pair him wthin someone ? lol
an OC is fine
maybe he got desperate and picked a bride up somewhere in SE Asia
an OC is fine
maybe he got desperate and picked a bride up somewhere in SE Asia
lmfao
mail order russian bride
there's always one
uhhh
where does the fic start?
flashback? flashforward? Chloe's daughter preparing for school?
lets see
yeah , lets see/think
some setting the scene paragraph? descriptive?
idk i just get the image of chloe cooking eggs with a cigarrete in her mouth for some reason
dialogue?
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
@Lady Karo that would work
in character
very much so
and rachel
maybe the kid is part of an anti smoking campaign because anti parental rebellion
stop smoking in the house
could see rachel being the one like no smoking in the house
I can't see Chloe not smoking, not even if Rachel asks(edited)
yup
lol
she might try
but fail
stubborn chloe
so, one of them is gonna drop the kids off at school
maybe new school year, and chloe's daughter sees her for the first time on school premises
immediate crush
yeahhh
and then she gets a job at the diner soon after
they're both 16
she is like nervous/shy chloe all over again(edited)
just like mama
oh yes
oh damn yes
eliots daughter is surprisingly confident
maybe like
so how does chloe's girl do it?
approach?
uhhhh
not immediately I suppose
imagine the "im gay" convo within chloe's daugther and chloe
i see it being like the other girl non chalantly flirting and her daughter be awkward
and not getting the hint
idk
maybe an assignment for two
they get paired by teacher
maybe his daughter doesnt think shes into girls
or whatever
hmmm
then sees her mom's smoooooching
that would be a good romantic plot
tbh
i think at this point we need names to make it easier lol
Chloe's daughter
name
Something Sera Amber-Price?
hhmmmm
it dont hit me
and their son?
i feel something elegant , but rebel at the same time
lets see
same with her daughter
i always like to give my characters names that describe their person
yep
ill look up some names ? XD
wait , i will search the list of names
omg
baby names for rebel
Rihanna
is one
Rhianne?
named after the VA

its all connected
references everyhere
why dont elizabeth ?
elegant but its the second name of the rebel Chloe
ahhh
Elisabeth "Lisa" Dawn Amber-Price
its ... magical
Steph agrees.
daaaaaamn
i love it
i wish i had that emoji
because describes me r8 now
Eliots girl
maybe a slightly asiatic name because of the mail order bride?
LOL
mail order bride..
lmao
that was fantastic
well its Eliot after all

loooool
supercalifragilisticexpialidousus
what country would she be from
omg lmao
ahh
nvm
lets see
I dunno, Vietnam? philippines?
search asian regions
Kristi?
jade?
i like jade
Kristi Jade ?
ohh
Kristi Jade Hampden
magical
we are amazing
Steph approves
okay so lisa and kristi
a real hamprice
or amberpriden
ship name
poor lisa all smitten with kristi
lol
She comes back home after first day at school all confused
chloe notices
but lisa says nothing
just goes to her room and dreams of kristi
how to meet her?
gay panic
lol
gay panic
like she has a crush on her in school
but then when she gets a job at the diner, ooo boy
shes in charge of training her
how to meet her.....
i like it
this is going somewhere
and lisa just drops shit and stumbles a lot
so nervous around her
joyce is oblivious of the gay thing but notices lisa spilling food etc
lol
sends her to the girls room and kristi comes there too
for comfort
and then in lunch break kristi seats in the side of lisa
she has syrup all over her shirt
from dropping something
kinda sad image
kristi tries to help her clean up
at the end gives here a kiss, and goes home
leaving lisa with mega gay panic
build from there
i think what Lisa would inherited Chloe ability to crack a dirty joke
oimg
yes
idk if i see them kissing so soon
maybe awkward hand touches xD
yeah
we need to tease
and in nervousness mixes dirty jokes with attempted compliments
really make the tension unbearable
'its nice kristi we're having'
OMG
LOL
imagine that
or in nervousness she says krusty
lmfao
a big-as-a-explosion-mushroom-deja vu
kristi should wink at her
more deja vu
so much deja vu
slowly kristi starts realizing she really likes lisa
take a few days/weeks/months
tease
TEASE
A SERIOUS TEASE
chloe noticing her daughters behavior
A SERIOUS AMOUNT OF INTENSE TEASE
and krisit makes the first move ?
they become rpetty good friend first
an accidental meet at some party
damn
yeah
she is like rachel to chloe
should invite more people from the Amberprice legion
?
are they gonna hang out in either one of their bedrooms (no smutty stuff yet)
what will chloe think?
bcause i only posted the link in the fanfiction section
idk kash i think so far we are going pretty good ?
we still need our smut person though for later

and yeahhh
deffo
later
yeah , i think the same
the reader doesnt even know its eliots daughter either
because chloe/rachel too
drop that bomb hard
@Lady Karo thats a brilliant idea
oh my god
no using surname for kristi
until later
yess
a scene just kristi going to her house and saying "hey dad"
and the elliot says 2hi
so would eliot be disapproving father ?
dad gets a bit of deja vu because lisa slightly resembles chloe?
still thinks its coincidence
but a bit of a trigger
idk
if a dissaproving father is the best , but it will add plot
@Lady Karo I think eliot would disapprove, yes, on account of his memory of rachel/chloe
i was thinking because he was against chloe with rachel
yeah
but they can use a school assignment as cover
and his daugther with chloe is kind of a reminder
of Chloe and Rachel itself
at first he doesn't notice
but later he gets all david madsen suspicious
tries to catch them
yeah
lol
wait
we will add smut ?
I'm not against it
but later
ahh what about somwhere rachel hits it big and they have to move to LA and it forces the strain of
dividng them, or too much?(edited)
@Lady Karo I think Rachel needs to be there for the later confrontation with Eliot
yeah
i mena like later later
maybe she gave that dream up to be with her blue haired babe?
i'm tikismikis with the reality theme in the fanfics , so it gonna contain real places in Cali or just AB?
true
or Rachel is the new DA
the legal career instead of the other thing
but I'm open
(tikismikis is a word for "i care a little too much bout detail")
some real life things are ok with me
but sometimes suspension of disbelief is ok
yeah
what would chloe be doing job wise
mechanic ?
lol
how many weeks/months before Krisa (Kristi Lisa) becomes a real thing?
maybe mechanic
her own tattoo shop
oo
something artsy
i like tattoo shop idea
how long
hmm
lovingly funded by Rachel
and she secretly sells weed under the counter?
lmao
the new Frank Bowers
ofc she would
i alway see a Bartender/tatto shop Chloe
bartender could work too
thats hard to choose now
it is
but we got a general idea
ya
Eliot is the photography teacher
Make him creepy teacher?
or just someone who can't keep order
hmmm
he got a daugther know
the students bully him
and it messes with his mind
and by experience i can tell what witha little kid you patience skills grown like never will
forces his wife to be stay-at-home
yeah
not super loving relationship
causing kristi to venture outdoors
maybe prone to road trips
a kind of madsen-price to chloe
one day kristi just proposes a road trip to lisa
does lisa have her own car?
depends on chloe and Rachel I think
if they want her to have one
I would say yes

something like that raggedy truck or better
she gets the raggedy truck
and "every parent wants the better for her sons"
i propose to see things from a parental point of view but also the lisa pov
the truck is likely worn out by then
@Kash_LOL lisa POV main POV?
yeah
hm?
doesn't need to be exclusive POV of course
but when we do scenes when rachel and chloe talks to lisa , i propose to see that ones for the
parental pov
ok
i told a story from two views once, people gave me a lot of compliments but the way i did it was
interesting
and it was only for like 2 chapters
it could work
chapter one or prologue: lisa wakes up, washes, gets dresses, goes down for breakfast, meets mom
chloe making breakfast whilst chloe smokes
then after some discussions/breakfast time 2 go 2 school
i mean , its got rachel and chloe in it so we gotta have them having a lot of time too... ?
after all people there for them

hella yes
maybe they start noticing shes happier, on cloud nine
and they have discussions and stuff about whats going on
they would notice the pattern
and shes in love they can tell
yeah
but lisa doesn't tell and they think its a boy
at first
i can see chloe following her to the junkyard
and finding them xD
awkward
lmao
she might see them and then turn back without making her presence known
but then goes back to Rachel all OMG OMG OMG
YES
'SHES GOT A GF'
and lisa keeps denying
but of course it can't be denied forever
so in a sense, chloe went all david madsen with the spying and following
lol
maybe
it makes her realize
why he did it
ofc not at his extent
is anyone actually making notes are we just gonna try to remember haha
need like an outline
I've copy pasted the entire convo up to here in word
ahh ok
reminds me
what do we call this story
oh this will be hard
something with reference to LiS/BtS dialogue?
I'm gonna try to sort this stuff into an outline/summary on saturday
i was thinking that
life without the storm
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Life is deja vu?
hmmmmmmm
Something rewind something?
life is __
idk
I'm partial to queer
it has multiple meanings
ohhhh
yeahhhh
life is queer or queer as life
choices...
so hard
we can make it a working title
open to change/reconsideration
yeah
by the time thelittlescribbler gets back we're gonna have the whole story plot lol
If no one else than I'll do a summary sheet of the ideas so far
saturday
i always believed to make a great love story there has to be something that splits them some how
but they find their way back ... but thats just me
Eliot being an asshole and moving away taking kristi away from lisa?
Or grounding her
something
you probably shouldnt listen to me because i love tragedy LOL
or they elope because kristi isnt comfortable at home and they run int trouble on the road
triggering a search
i love putting my characters through hell just to see them rise up stronger and better
and a Chloe/Rachel/Eliot meeting
but
waht if kristi and lisa cant elope ?
maybe
they try and fail
bcause deja vu
something stops them from it
Lisa loving her moms too much
Eliot suspecting something
hmmm
or rather ironically, rachel/chloe stopping them
hmm
what a twist
maybe because they realize when they were younger how foolish it was at that age
NEW MESSAGES

but teens gotta be teens
yeah

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Welcome, exo 🐊.

We were expecting you ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)Today at 9:53 PM

whats the plot though

i think its magical (edited)

Welcome, Elocin. Stay awhile and listen.Today at 10:04 PM

named after the VA

well its Eliot after all

we still need our smut person though for later

Lady Karo-Today at 11:04 PM

after all people there for them

Lady Karo-Today at 11:24 PM

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