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Shaun O’Loughlin LO3 Feedback. 3/1/2018

Current Grade for LO3: Pass

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning outcome is a Merit Grade, even
if you have achieved this, if there are any minor corrections or additions, can you please
ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

There are elements of a Merit grade in your pre production, what you do have, overall is
some excellent work. You have developed appropriate ideas for the advertisement campaign
and then developed proficient pre production material. The storyboard and shooting script
convey the idea you have proposed in your treatment and the risk assessment and
contingency plan accommodates any potential issues you could experience with your
production.

You need to add industry rates (from Bectu) on the budget and then add a total. On the risk
assessment, make sure you add loud noise and potential fire (and any escape issues). On
the shooting script, there is a section still on the template, can you remove this please?

Finally - ensure that you add a key to all of the work so it is easily identifiable to myself and
the examiner who has contributed to the work.

Please note; you have the following work missing: storyboard (images are missing).
As a result - until this has been added - the learning outcome cannot pass.

The final deadline is: 19/01/2018