LO1 & LO2 FEEDBACK

Shaun O’Loughlin LO1 & LO2 Feedback. 5/6/2018

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on learningthis learning

outcome
outcome
1 is aisMerit
a Merit
Grade,
Grade, even
if you have
learning outcome
achieved
2 isthis,
a Pass.
if there
Evenare
if you
anyhave
minor
achieved
corrections
this,or
if there
additions,
are anycanminor
you please
corrections
ensure
or additions,
these can
are you
made. please ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

LEARNING OUTCOME 1.

Current Grade for LO1: Pass

You need to organise your blog and clearly label the work with the learning outcome. If
you go on moodle, unit 17 – there is a checklist to assist with this.
You have the start of some fair work, but there are pieces missing or incomplete.
The ideas document: Please ensure you use the audience terminology on the ideas
document, Explain the demographics, socio-economic groups and psychographics of the
magazine, for each idea.
Treatment document feels incomplete. Please add to the audience section (use the
terminology) and also make sure that you expand on some of this, look at the handout.
Update the Production schedule – be more specific on what you are doing each lesson.
Rotate the storyboard images
Add shooting script.
Ensure all work is clearly colour coded with your contribution. – this has not been done on
all of the work.

LEARNING OUTCOME 2.
Current Grade for LO2: Fail
Update Recce and Risk Assessments for each location you have filmed in
LO1 & LO2 FEEDBACK

You are missing LO2 part C, Legal and ethical considerations – how could you avoid potential
issues?

The resubmission deadline for both learning outcomes is: June 15th