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Manzilbagh PS….From a photo on the table that of Salauddin Shaikh..camera pans to PSI
Vivek Joshi walking in…to PI Dinesh Singh..(PSI: Sir..Salauddin airport tak shayad
pahuncha hi nahi….he didn’t take the flight he was booked for..and there was no flight
other than that..that night for Mumbai)..camera moves to PI Dinesh Singh..who looks at
Nisha Shaikh..(45)..seated with her son…20 year old Tanveer Shaikh and 52 year old
Miraj Shaikh..Salauddin’s elder brother…(PI: Nishaji….Mirajji…Salauddin Mumbai mein
kisse milne jaa rahe the….Nisha: Ye tho unhone bataya nahi hamein…Tanveer: Papa apne
business ke kaam se hi jaa rahe honge….Miraj: Par…2 din tak mera bhai Salaudin phone
na kare..phone na uthaaye..aisa nahi kar sakta hain…Nisha: Unki return ticket 23 taarik
ki hain..PI: Par NIshaji..wo Mumbai gaye hi nahi hain…unke factory mein tho kisi ko pata
ho sakta hain…wo kya kaam se jaa rahe the…Nisha: Haan ho sakta hain…par unka phone
kyon bandh aa raha hain…PI: Ye tho ab aapke shohar tak pahunchkar hi pata kar sakte
hain…)…
The police vehicle comes to a halt outside the unit….PSI gets off with a constable walks
in….
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PSI and constables walks across the unit..CUT..they are with Aslam Warsi..(32)..the
factory supervisor…(Aslam: Mumbai mein tho hamare kaafi saare retailers hain..ab wo
unmein se kisko milne jaa rahe the pata nahi sir..PSI: Aisa koi ek bhi hoga..jo bata sakta
ho..ki Salauddin Shaikh kisse milne jaa rahe the?..Aslam: Sir..mujhe tho sirf unhone jaa
rahe hain ye bataya..kisse milne..kiss kaam se ye nahi bataya..bhabhiji ka bhi phone aaya
tha..now..ajeeb hain..Salauddinbhai…ka kuch pata nahi chal raha…)…
A decent well tho do Kothi…we travel with Salauddin Shaikh..rolling his suitcase..a
decently big one….turns..at the gate we see the front of a cab..the headlights on..we
cannot make out the color..but can see it’s a vehicle waiting..(Salauddin: Khuda
Hafiz..Nisha…Nisha: (at the door of the house)..Khuda Hafiz..pahunchte hi sms kar
dena…Salauddin: Haan bilkul..)..he opens the gate of the compound and exits..camera
moves to Nisha watching…the cab reverses and leaves..we see the headlights
move….FLASH OVER (**Salauddin’s car would be parked outside….On the side..a hatch
back car)
Close of Nisha..(Nisha: Taxi thi itna pata hain…PI: Ye koi regular taxi thi..jo wo hamesha
bulate ho..kahi travel karne ke liye…Nisha: Nahi…itna pata nahi hain…PI: aap apne bhai
ke saath business mein partner hain Mirajji?..Miraj: Nahi..mera ready made garments ka
showroom hain…par Salauddin would definitely going for some business purpose
only?..PI: Par wo Mumbai gaye nahi aisa lagta hain..because the next day also 20 th there
is no flight he has taken…Tanveer: Sir..yahi kahin raaste mein kuch hua ho…agar…aur
hamein pata hi nahi chala…PI: We we will check that also…)…
We see Constable Pandey…talking to three four cab drivers..he is showing them the
photo of Salauddin Shaikh..(Pandey: 19 ki raat ko Manzil Nagar mein..kothi number..43
ke bahar se pick up kiya tha inko….Harish..(a cab driver): Saab..poochna padega…kaun
taxi wala tha…ab…unhone direct bulaya ho…Pandey: Pata karo Harish…kaun taxi wala
tha…we don’t have the taxi number also….Rakesh: (another cab driver)…Saab..19 taarik
ko koi taxi wale ka accident hua ho..aisi bhi khabar nahi hain…Pandey: Tho kahaan gaya
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taxi..aur taxi wala..doondh ke nikalo…saare taxi walon mein khabar faila do…ye photo
rakh lo…)..he gives the photo to Harish..
Miraj trying on the phone…message this phone is switched off…we see Miraj’s son…24
year old Aamir Shaikh..walking in..(Aamir: Abbu…checked with the taxi stand in the
area..no one has an idea who was the taxi guy whose taxi chacha took….Miraj: Phone
abhi tak bandh hi hain..Salauddin ka..)..camera pans to Nisha seated worried..by her side
is Jamila Shaikh..(49)..Miraj’s wife…Tanveer stands at the desk..leaning looking worried..
(Tanveer: Abbu..itne time tak to phone bandh nahi rakhenge..aur bandh rakhenge hi
kyon…Jamila: Nisha…zara theek se yaad karo…taxi number…kuch tumne dekha…Nisha:
Nahi yaad hain Jamila..kyonke mujhe taxi number dikhi nahi..shayad dikhti tho bhi
main..dhyaan shayad nahi deti….aisa kuch hone wala hain pata thode hi tha mujhe…
Miraj: Salauddin ne kuch nahi bataya..kisse milne jaa raha tha..Mumbai?...Nisha: Nahi
bataiya Mirajbhai..wo kab apne kaam ke baare mein batate hain?...)…
SAtish Tambe (45) is a plastic wares wholesale dealer..this is his small cabin..in his whole
sale ware house…he picks up the ringing phone..(Satish: Hello..PSI: May I know who is
that speaking…Satish: Kaam kya hain bhaisaab…PSI: This is Sub Inspector Vivek Joshi
from Lucknow…Satish: Namaste..boliye..main SAtish Tambe bol raha hoon..)..INTERCUT
PSI with phone records of Salauddin Shaikh..(PSI: Salauddin Shaikh from Lucknow..inse
aapki …17 August, 18 August, 19 August teeno din baat hui hain..aur aap Mumbai mein
hain…Satish: Jee haan bilkul..baat hui hain..usse pehle bhi hui hain…20 ko subah 9 baje
hamari meeting thi Salauddinbhai se..par wo aaye hi nahi …unka phone bhi bandh aa
raha hain..baat kya hain sir…PSI: Tho wo aap hi se milne aa rahe the…Satish: Haan mujhe
se mil hi rahe the..aur kisi se mil rahe ho tho pata nahi mujhe..sab theek tho hain…PSI:
Dekhiye aisa hain..ki Salauddin Shaikh nikle tho the ghar se airport ke liye..par flight
unhone board nahi ki…Satish: Acchha..phir kahan gaye wo? Kuch gadbad tho nahi
hain..PSI: Aaj…22 August hain aur unko koi pata nahi..unhone aapko kuch inform nahi
kiya uske baad?..Satish: Nahi..main unse unki factory se goods khareedne ke silsile mein
milna chahta tha…main wholesale dealer hoon..wo milne aa rahe the..par…aaye hi nahi
aur nahi kuch inform kiya…)..
SCENE 19: PI’S CABIN DAY/INT
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Outside the unit..a few workers..about 8-9 people..along with Aslam Warsi..talking to
Constable Pandey….and two other constables..(Aslam: Bahut hi nek aur saaf dil insaan
hain…Salaauddinbhai…sab ka bhala hi chaha hain aur kiya bhi hain…Worker 1: Eid ho ya
Diwali ho…ham sab ka bahut khyaal rakhte hain…Pandey: Chalo wo theek hain..ye
batao..Aslambhai…koi regular taxi wala tha kya…jo..unko travel ke dauran drop karta
ho….kyonki unke phone records mein tho unhone kisi bhi taxi waale se sampark kiya
ho…aisa dikh nahi raha hain….Aslam: Aisa tho hamein pata nahi…unhone kabhi bataya
nahi..aur khud se hamein pata nahi…)…
We see a Masjid official…52 year old Mushtaq Mohammed…talking to Pandey and the
two constables..(Mushtaq: Ye kaisa sawaal hain bhai? Pandey: Seedha sawaal hain…
Mushtaqbhai..Salaudinbhai ka kisi se koi ranjish..Mushtaq: Bhai Yahaan wo..namaaz
padne aate hain…aur kaafi regularly aate hain…bahut hi religious hain wo..
(**appropriate word)…din mein 5 baar kahin bhi ho..namaaz zaroor padte hain…pichle
saal haj bhi karke aaye hain Salaudinbhai…ab dushmani ya bair ki baat tho nahi ki kabhi
yahaan…sunke ajeeb lag raha hain ki Salaudin bhai aise lapata hain..)…
PSI trying on his cell phone..message..phone is switched off…he cuts looks at the phone
records…..
Harish the cab driver…standing..looking at PI..(Harish: Sir..have checked all taxis in the
Manzil nagar area…sir udhar se tho kisine ye Salauddin Shaikh ko 19 ki raat ko pick up
nahi kiya…PI: Baaki area ke taxi drivers se bhi pata kar…Harish…kahin doosre area ka
taxi driver ho..Harish: Sir..lekin koi phone number tho hoga..inhone taxi waale ko kisi bhi
zariye se bulaya tho hoga..)..
CUT..PSI with PI..(PSI: Sir ye ajeeb baat..hain..Salaudin ke phone records mein 19 taarik
ko kahin bhi show nahi kar raha ki usne kisi taxi ko bulaya ho..I have checked all
numbers….ek sirf last call hua hain unke phone se…444678987…iss number par jo
switched off hain..uske details mangwa raha hoon…PI: Kahin ye number hain iss case ki
kadi na ho? Shayad..Nisha kuch mistake kar rahi hain..taxi na ho..koi aur gaadi ho..kisi ki
private gaadi ho…koi unko drop kar raha ho..aur drop karte karte kuch aur kar gaya
ho..)..
Police vehicle comes to a screeching halt…PI gets off..and walks in…build up this walk…
Close of Nisha…(Nisha: Unhone tho taxi hi kaha tha?...PI: Par aapne taxi hi dekha
tha?)..camera pans to Tanveer..we see…Miraj…Aamir and Jamila also there..(Tanveer:
Abbu se maine kaha tha..main drop kar deta hoon….unhone hi mana kiya tha..)…FLASH
CAPTION: 19TH AUGUST 2016…WE SEE..Salaudin coming out his room..with his
suitcase….Tanveer..enters frame..(Tanveer: Abbu…should I drop you at the airport?
Salaudin: No..beta..the taxi will be here shortly….)….Nisha enters frame..(Nisha: Aap kab
tak laut rahe hain…Salaudin: 23 ki subah ki return flight hain Nisha..urgently nikalna tha
isliye bata nahi saka tum logon ko…)…he talks as he moves to the door..FLASH OVER
Camera pans to PI..(PI: But in his phone records it’s clear that he hasn’t booked any
taxi..and not even got a call from a taxi guy that he has reached..normally aisa hota
hain..taxiwala phone karke bolta hain bhai pahunch gaya hoon…)..PI holds out the phone
records..Miraj looks into it..(PI: this is 444678987..is the last number called from
Salaudin’s phone and this number is switched off…SAlaudin ka last location..jahaan
phone switched off hua hain..is…Nupurganj..which is on the way to the airport…Nisha:
Kiska number hain ye?..PI: Ye hamein abhi pata nahi..par last call ispar hua tha aapke
shohar ke phone se..aur ye phone bandh hain…that gives out a very strange and
suspecting signal…)..Nisha..Tanveer..Jameela..Miraj..Aamir all puzzled and shocked..(PI:
We have checked almost every taxi guy in the area…no one has come here that night…
Nishaji..aap theek se yaad kijiye..taxi hi thi..ya kisi aur ki gaadi..)..camera moves to Miraj..
(Miraj: Taxi nahi thi tho Nisha taxi thi kyon bolegi..aur Salaudin kyon jhooth bolega?..PI:
Ye ham tho definitely nahi bata sakte? (**a sarcastic feel)..kyon ki gayab Salaudin huein
hain..jo inke shohar hain..inke abbu hain..aapke chote bhai hain..aap hi logon ko batana
padega..maanjhra hain kya..)..camera moves to Nisha..(Nisha: Shayad…mere shohar ne
taxi bulayi hain bataya isiliye tho kahin mujhe taxi hain aisa nahi laga…)…Miraj looks at
Nisha..(Nisha: (looks up)..Par taxi nahi thi tho aur kaun ho sakta hain? Aur..ab tak
Salaudin ne hamein contact kyon nahi kiya…)…
PSI walks in..(PSI: Sir there is something very suspicious in this Salaudin missing
case..the number…444678987..is on a fake address..dont know the identity of the man
on whose name the number has been procured…PI: That should be fake too…which
makes one thing for sure…there is something more in this missing case…he has been
forced to go missing…PSI: Iss phone number…444678987…ye ek hi call aaya hain..which
is strongly pointing to the possibility of a crime….aur aaj 5 din hogaye…we don’t have
one single clue of Salaudin’s where abouts…PI: Gayab hua banda itna chup tabhi hota
hain..ya jab usse bolna nahi hota khud se kahin chala gaya ho..ya phir who bol hi nahi
sakta…)…
Abrupt cut from the above scene..we track back with the close of …41 year old Lokesh
Maurya ..a lower class man..looking very disturbed…(Lokesh’s voice: Roz mach mach hota
hain ghar mein…dimaag kharaab hojaata hain mera..main bas..ghar chodd ke nikal jaata
hoon…)…This would be all the while he is walking…
CUT..Another chawl lane..leading out to an open area..we see Lokesh carrying a black
polyethene..liqour inside…he is walking ..still looking troubled..(Lokesh’s voice: Seedhe
jaakar theke se ek bottle khareedta hoon…aur apni regular jagah pe jaake baith jaata
hoon..)..
Lokesh sits down takes out the liquor bottle..starts drinking…he is carrying a little
singhdana also…munches and keeps drinking…a little relaxed feel as he drinks..(Lokesh’s
voice: Baithke ghataghat daaru peeta hoon…dimaag thanda hojaata hain..then I just lie
down at this place..chain ki neend sone ke liye..)…a drunk…Lokesh..lies down and goes to
sleep….camera moves to his close..as sleeps peacefully….ABRUPT CUT
Track back with Miraj..Nisha and Tanveer..all three shaken up..main PSI leading them….a
long take as we establish their shock and anguish….
PSI walks in..with Miraj..Nisha and Tanveer coming behind him..PSI walks to the
body..removes the sheet…they all look…taken aback..the nose has been stitched back to
the body….(PSI: THE BODY was found in the red suitcase..in Nupurganj area…close to the
airport)....Nisha shaken up….Tanveer broken..Tanveer rushes to the body..abbu..abbu..he
shouts..Nisha is feeling nauseated..she is about to swoon…Miraj goes down..(Miraj:
Nisha..Nisha..)…close of Tanveer crying…..(**THE STITCH AT THE NOSE HAS TO BE
VISIBLE)
An angry Miraj gets up..(Miraj: I Just got the news of my younger’s brother’s death..and
you are inquiring with me? Inquiring? Aap saaf saaf mere pe shak kar rahe hain?)..PI gets
up..(PI: Aap chote bhai ke death hui hain. Par wo murder hain. Aur jo information
hamare paas hain wo ye hain ki…aapke aur aapke bhaisaab ki ek three BHK flat hain…jo
rent par hain…Miraj: Tho? Is that enough for me to kill my younger brother? Rent
money? That’s a flat we both bought after we sold our ancestral kothi. Uska rent ham
dono share karte the. PI: Share karte the? Ab bhai nahi raha. Uski vidhwa aur 20 saal ka
beta shayad ladd nahi payenge uss share ke liye. ..Miraj: Bakwas kar rahe hain
aap..dimaag thikaane nahi hain aapka…ek 25000 ki rent ke liye I will get my brother
killed? …Just for that rent..PI: Nahi. Ghar ki keemat kaafi jyaada hogi..posh area mein
hain…Miraj: Salaudin mera chota bhai tha..aap jabardasti khured rahe hain…jahaan kuch
hain nahi…PI: Kahaan hain phir..Salaudin ki business mein koi ranjish nahi..koi
dushmani nahi…nek dil..saaf dil insaan..sabhi keh rahe hain..phir kyon murder hua
uska…wo bhi ek trip par jaa raha tha..aadhe raaste usse..maar diya gaya..Miraj Shaikh…
Salaudin ki body par..uski naak kati hui thi…kata hua portion suitcase mein choda
gaya…)..CAMERA MOVES TO MIRAJ..(PI: Yahaan bahut kuch personal nazar aa raha
hain….…Miraj: Lekin wo jo bhi personal hain…mere saath nahi hain..ham dono bhai kaafi
kareeb the..ek doosre ke)…
Front room..people from the unit seated quiet..all in mourning…we see Aslam also…
Miraj….Aamir….Tanveer..solemn feel….
INSIDE ROOM…Nisha seated on the bed crying….we see lady constable Pushpa..in civil
dress..salwar kameez..showing the photos of the car…Miraj’s car…one after the other..
(Pushpa: Yaad kijiye Nishaji..kya ye gaadi thi..jisse aapke shohar airport ke liye nikle
the…Nisha: (tears in her eyes)..Mujhe yaad nahi hain…Pushpa: Nishaji..kahin koi izzat..ya
beizzati ki baat….)..Nisha looks up at the lady constable…Pushpa…a sense of puzzlement
and shock at the question…
PSI Dhiraj on phone..(Dhiraj: Sir..ham yahaan ke saare history sheeters ko khangaal rahe
hain..everyone in any previous incident of loot..robbery murder…lekin abhi tak kisi ka
ismein role saamne nahi aaya hain..)..INTERCUT
PI on phone..(PI: Dig deeper Dhiraj…his body has been found at the point where his
phone also has been switched off…where the last call was made…we are sure that this is
a planned murder and not something that just happened on the spur..the history sheeter
we would be looking at is a supari killer…)…PI cuts the phone turns to PSI..(PI: This is
not a random killing..naak kaati gayi hain…Salaudin ki..kahin koi gehri chot hain…aur ye
chot andar hi ho sakti hain..ghar ke andar..PSI: Uske ghar pe..baaki saare logon ki poori
information nikalwa raha hoon..phone records bhi mangwaaye hain..PI: Dekhte hain
saazish kitni bareeki se ki gayi hain aur kitna hamein andar jaana padega..to crack it…)…
To the chantings of prayer…Salaudin’s coffin is brought down into the ground….we see
Tanveer..Aamir…Miraj..Aslam and a few others…the sand is put over the coffin..a solemn
feel….
Mukesh Rathi on phone…(Mukesh: Miraj Shaikh ki car ki poori scanning ki hain hamne…
but we found nothing no trace of blood..no hair particles anything matching with that of
Salaudin Shaikh…)..INTERCUT
PI on phone..(PI: The suitcase officer? Anything in the suitcase that can give us any
clue?..Mukesh: Nothing. Clear of finger prints. PI: Isnt that too neat a job?...Mukesh: It
might be. But the body of Salaudin has been fitted in it..it might have erased whatever
finger prints were there…might be just a resultant of that)…
Close of Nisha..she looks up…a little shaken up..she stands up…she would have been
sitting..she looks at PI..Pushpa…Tanveer also there..Tanveer is also puzzled…(Nisha:
Par ..ye baat..15 saal pehle ki hain…PI: Dushmani ke jadd expiry date ke saath nahi aate
Nishaji.. Kya ye sach hain..ki aap mein aur Miraj ki biwi Jameela mein bilkul nahi jamti
thi?..Nisha: Ye sach hain..lekin…ham alag hone ke baad…sab kuch theek hi raha hain…
Tanveer: Badeabbu..abbu se kaafi kareeb hain sir…PI: Tanveer..sirf maara nahi..maarne
ke baad naat kaata hain…vikrut tho hain hi..saath mein..it also hints..there is something
about…being insulted or humiliated or subjugated…Nisha: But Jameela ki nahi banti thi
mere saath..ismein…mere shohar ka koi kirdaar tha hi nahi…ye gharelu maamla tha…PI:
Par issi baat ko lekar pushtaini kothi bechkar dono bhai alag tho hue…)…camera moves
to Nisha
Muslim locality feel..we see Khabri Ashfaque..enter frame..talking on phone. (**if it can
be on some terrace..in Malwani or somewhere )….(Ashfaque: Sahi keh raha hain ye Miraj
aur uski begum…inke poorane padosiyon se baat ki maine…)..INTERCUT
PSI on phone…(PSI: Ye murder kahin iss inter religion marriage ko lekar aaj itne salon
baad nikaali gayi dushmani tho nahi…Ashfaque: Ye..Shaikh parivar ke side se tho kuch
nikal nahi raha sir..PSI: Nisha ke side se?..Ashfaque: Nisha ke side se tho sirf uski maa
hain sir..kaafi aged hain…)…
The name plate reads MEENAKSHI BHATNAGAR…PI rings the bell..constable Pushpa
with him…the door opened by 70 yeaer old Meenakshi Bhatnagar…(Meenakshi: Jee..PI:
Namaste..kuch baat karni thi aapse…Meenakshi: Kis baare mein..)…
PSI on phone..(PSI: Nahi sir..jo saare the..uske biwi ko phones..ya business related
the..kyon..kisi affair ka kuch pata chala kya…PI: Nahi..ek pehli biwi ka pata chala hain…
kya pata kahi koi teesri bhi ho. Shaadi na sahi affair hi sahi...jiske side se koi khafa ya gila
shikwa raha ho…)..
Police vehicle comes to a screeching halt…PI gets off and walks in with Pushpa….
Close of Nisha…(Nisha: Bataya nahi matlab? Mujhe ye baat zehen mein hi nahi hain…PI:
Pehli biwi ka bataya nahi? Kisi ke saath koi affair tha Salaudin ka? Jo shayad aapko pata
ho..aur wo bhi zehen mein na aaya ho..)..camera moves to Nisha..feeling broken..(Nisha:
Nahi aisa kuch nahi tha…Salaudin aur mere beech love marriage hui thi..we loved each
other....PI: Shayad aapse pehle unki pehli biwi ka bhi yahin aitbaar raha ho? Where is
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Salaudin’s first wife? Who is she?...Nisha: Yahin Lucknow mein hain…Farzana naam hain
uska…lekin 21 saal ho chuke hain..uski aur Salaudin ke talaak ke hue…PI: Rehti kahaan
hain ye…)…
A one BHK small kothi..we introduce in the inside room…Hassan Siddiqui..(23 years old-
Salaudin’s son from Farzana)..he picks up his ruck sack..walks out of the room..comes to
the front room..(Hassan: Main nikal raha hoon ammi..)..camera moves to Farzana..(47)…
seated knitting something or doing something…the bell rings….Hassan gets up and
opens the door..we see PSI there with a lady constable…(Hassan: Jee…PSI: Aap Hassan
Siddiqui hain? Hassan: Jee haan…)..Farzana gets up…(PSI: Aur aap Farzana
hain?..Hassan: Jee..baat kya hain…PSI: Salaudin Shaikh murder kisse karwaya tumne? Ya
khud kiya?)..camera moves to Hassan..taken aback hearing that..close of Farzana…
We see Hassan walking out with his mother..a cycle rickshaw waiting..mother sits in..
(Hassan: Tum ghar jao ammi..main yahin se college nikal jaoonga..Farzana: Theek hain
beta..)…
Day change..Hassan walking out with his rucksack….he turns the lane corner..camera
pans we reveal…Khabri Ashfaque following him….
Day change…Hassan walking…behind him we see another khabri Rashid trailing him….
PSI comes to PI.(PSI: Phone records mein tho kisi kism ka kuch bhi suspicious nahi
hain..PI: Then where exactly is the jhadd of this case..what is evident is..a suppressed
anger and humiliation…why would a killer if he was just any random killing..kill the
man..and cut his nose…there is something here that we are unable to nail…PSI: Sir..ye
beizzati waali baat wo bhi uss aadmi ke liye jiske baare jitni information abhi tak mili
hain..it’s all about how religious he was…)….FLASH
Continuation of PI..PSI scene..(PSI: Haj jaata hain..namaaz din mein without fail 5 baar
padta hain…roza rakhta hain har saal…yahaan daraar jo hain..wo ek hi dikthi hain…jo
hain..ki uski wife Hindu hain…jo uski ammi abbu ko itne saal pehle jab wo nikaah karke
aaya tha tab namanzoor tha…PI: And as per everyone in the family..the matter was
resolved and accepted…PSI: HO sakta hain..it was accepted on the surface level..but
beneath…there could be a suppressed anger…a kind of beizzati hui hamari..naak kat gayi
hamari? PI: If that’s the case then the only people who could be behind it..are Miraj and
may be including his wife…Jameela…Miraj aur Salaudin ke ammi abbu tho ab rahe nahi)
…
Miraj walking to his car..from the gate..Aamir with him..they get inside..turn the car and
drive away….camera pans to Jameela at the door.
gaya? May be some dispute over the supari..or a cross supari…)..camera moves to PI..(PI:
Phir bhi naak kyon katega koi? Ismein sirf ek baat clear lag rahi hain wo ye ki Salaudin
definitely kisi ki taxi mein tho nahi gaya tha..there was someone else who picked him
up…)..
We introduce…20 year old Kapil Bhardwaj..on his bike..turning into the society…halting
his bike in the parking lot…getting off..picking up his ruck sack..turning and walking into
the society lobby…..
Kapil throws the bag on the bed..he enters frame near the window…talking on phone..
(Kapil: Thoda chill kar..let some more time get by. It will become perfect only when the
case gets closed without making any further headway…)….
Camera moves from a back of a 23 year old guy..three friends having tea..one of them is
Hassan..we focus on Hassan….
PI leans in..(PI: The doubt we had that Salaudin Shaikh never traveled that night in a
taxi ..turned out be true. He didn’t. The doubt we had that this was something to do with
pride and prestige (**naak kaatna) was also true. We didn’t reach the mastermind. We
didn’t reach the one who executed the crime either. We reached the one who didn’t)
Low lit area..close of Khabri Ashfaque…(Ashfaq: Kaun hain banda..)..we see another guy..
history sheeter Naved…(29) also in low light..(Naved: Mera naam nahi aana
chahiye..mera ismein kuch hain nahi…Ashfaque: Chal nahi aayega tera naam…bata…
Naved: Uska involvement kaisa hain mujhe nahi pata…par wo udhar Nupurganj mein
raat ko tha ..unees tareekh ko…wo bola usne kuch kiya nahi..maamla cancel hogaya
tha..Ashfaque: Matlab…Naved: Arif naam hain…City Police station ke hawalat mein
hain..kal hi chori ki case mein andar gaya hain…Ashfaq: Arif poora naam…Naved: Arif
Qureishi..)…
The jail door opens…we see in the distance seated crouched on the floor..is Arif Qureishi..
(29)…he looks up..we see PSI walk up to him…Arif looks up at PSI..(PSI: Arif
Qureishi..Arif: Salaam saab..PSI: Nupurganj mein Salaidun Shaikh ko tune
maara…)..camera moves to Arif…
We see…Arif coming on his bike from a distance..he comes and halts on the side..we see
back of a guy..we don’t reveal the guy....guy comes to Arif as Arif gets down. The guy the
photo of Salaudin..(Guy: Isko maarna hain.)..Arif looks at the photo..(Arif: Hojayega..paisa
bata diya tha tumko phone pe…advance lagega 25..kab aur kahaan maarne ka hain bata
do…)..Guy takes out 25000 from his pocket gives him..(Guy: Time aur jagah bata denge
tumko..)…FLASH OVER..(We don’t reveal the guy at all..it’s a young guy in 20s..we play
through over the shoulder and back shots)…
Arif looks at PI and PSI..(Arif: Saab…19 ko Suresh ne mere ko phone kiya tha…ki aaj raat
ko game karne ka hain..Airport ke raaste par…taxi me aayega bola…main udhar wait bhi
kar raha tha….usko ye ye..naya wala number diya…444678987….PSI: Ye khaas iss kaam
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ke liya tha…Arif: Haan saab..lekin kaam maine kiya hi nahi..mere ko phone aaya hi kaam
nahi karne ka hain…PI: Kiska phone..ye Suresh ka?..Arif: Haan saab..)..FLASH
Highway type…on the side we see Arif waiting in the dark…CAPTION: 19TH AUGUST
2016….he is cell phone rings…he looks at it..picks up the call..(Arif: Haan bolo…wait kar
raha hoon..taxi number message nahi kiya..Guy’s voice (**same guy who had given
money): Kaam nahi karne ka hain…Arif: Kyon kya hua…Guy’s voice: Nahi karne ka hain
bola na..bas nahi karne ka..nikal jaa..Arif: Advance waapis nahi karega…Guy’s voice: Nahi
kar..nikaljaa…)..Arif cuts the phone..looks puzzled..turns and exits..FLASH OVER
PI grabs ARif…(PI: Bundle maar raha hain saale..Salaudin ke phone se hi tere farji phone
pe number ghoomake…ham ko ghooma raha hain..kaun hain ye Suresh..kaun hain ye…
Arif: Arre saab..mere ko sirf uska naam maloom hain..aur jis tarah se phone pe pehli baar
baat kar raha tha..mere ko laga..farji naam hain..par apne ko kaam se aur paise se matlab
tha…PI: Ab ye Suresh haath nahi laga tho kootega bhi aur uske hisse ki sazaa katega
bhi..Arif: Arre saab..main sacchi sachhi bol raha..maa kasam..maine kaam kiya hi nahi….)
…
Tanveer Shaikh getting on to his bike…starting and driving off..we follow him….
Tanveer on bike..camera pans and we see khabri Rashid following him…a tense
following….
The same complex where we saw Jaanvi…Tanveer parks his bike…and waits…we see
Rashid parking a little behind..keeping a watch..as Tanveer waits..we see Kapil Bhardwaj
coming on his bike halting…Tanveer moves to him…CUT..Tanveer and Kapil walking into
the complex….we see Rashid observing them….
Tanveer forwards his mobile…a snap of Tanveer and Kapil ..Kapil can be seen clearly..
(**From outside the complex..day change..)..(Rashid: Chaar din solid fielding ki..ye banda
kaafi close hain…Tanveer se..kaafi close…dono college mein same class mein hain…bahar
ke classes mein bhi saath mein hain..naam hain Kapil Bhardwaj…)…
The snap on mobile brought in front of Arif..PSI holding the phone..Arif looking at it..
(Arif: Haan saab..yehi hain..Suresh…issi ne mujhe paise diye the..)..FLASH
Police vehicle comes to a screeching halt..PI gets off along with two more constables..the
car and bike parked..outside the house..PI rings the bell..they wait…door opened by
Nisha…(PI: Aapke beê te Tanveer ko bulaiye..Nisha: Kyon…kya hua…kuch pata chala kya
aapko..kisne maara mere shohar ko…PI: Thoda bahut….bahut kuch abhi baaki
hain..Tanveer batayega…)…INSIDE..we see Tanveer coming out the room…Nisha turns
and looks at him..PI walks in..(PI: Tho kiski gaadi thi Tanveer…jismein aapke father gaye
the…airport…(turns to Nisha)..aapne tho dekha wo gaadi mein gaye the..Nishaji..)..Nisha
is quiet…(PI: Lekin Tanveer ka dost Kapil urf Suresh..tho keh raha hain..ki wo gaadi mein
gaye hi nahi the..)..camera moves to Tanveer…realizing the game is up…PI turns to
Nisha…(PI: Aisa kya hua tha Nishaji..ki aapke beê te ne aapke saamne apni father ka naak
kaat diya..aap dekhte rahi uska saath bhi deti rahi..)..camera moves to Nisha..now looking
down….DISSOLVE
Camera moves to Salaudin doing the namaaz..camera pans..we see…Tanveer also doing
the namaaz…
Camera pans from the complex..we see…Salaudin driving his car..comes to a halt..on the
side..opposite side..parking it …on the side..away from being noticed…he peers out
looking at the complex…waits….CUT..we see…Kapil…Tanveer and Jaanvi come
out..Tanveer is very friendly with Jaanvi…close of Salaudin watching….close of Tanveer
and Jaanvi..Jaanvi and TAnveer hug..then Jaanvi moves to her scooty and Tanveer to his
bike…
Jaanvi and Tanveer..day change…having some juice or coffee..very telly close shots…
camera pans to a corner of the restaurant…close of a man reading a magazine..we
reveal..it is Salaudin behind the magazine..watching..the two of them…a bit of
disappointment on his face…
Close of Nisha..(Nisha: Salaudin…I hope you are not forgetting that we both were in
love..and we married…)..shataack..Salaudin turns and slaps her..Nisha takes it quietly..not
over reacting..(Salaudin: I am not forgetting it…neither am I forgetting that my father
and mother felt cheated…)…Nisha looks at him…(Nisha: You have changed
Salaudin…)..he comes to her..(Salaudin: I changed because I know who I am…Nisha..and
that cannot be changed…get his out of Tanveer’s head that he can marry a hindu and we
will take it just like that…Nisha: He will rebel…we rebelled Salaudin…Salaudin: We
shouldn’t have..I shouldn’t have…)..camera moves to Nisha…a little hurt….
Tanveer sits disturbed..camera pans to Nisha…day change..(Nisha: Your father is not the
man I once knew Tanveer…he has become rigid and orthodox…all these years…as you
grew up..you might have not have noticed..but he has changed…and I know that…he
wasn’t like this when we met and when years later we decided to marry…I have put up
because I love him and I married him…this pallu on the head…him making me do
namaaz..keep roza..I do that…but he was more open minded when we met and we
married..he changed…Tanveer: (quiet till now)..To this extent ammi…that he now tells
me he made a mistake…)..Nisha looks at Tanveer aghast..FLASH
Kapil on phone….camera moves to him..(Kapil: It doesn’t matter how I reached you Arif…
all that matters is the job I want you to do…my name is Suresh..I will meet you and tell
you who is the target…)….
Kapil running from the hiding..gets into the kothi from the side…he jumps in…
Kapil runs past the car..and hurriedly rings the bell….the door opened by Nisha..Kapil
rushes in…Nisha closes the door…just then camera pans and we see Salaudin entering
the compound…
Nisha..Kapil and Tanveer..(Kapil: Yaar wahaan koi taxi nahi thi..tere abbu waapis aa rahe
hain…Tanveer: Kahi unhone jaane ka program cancel tho nahi kar diya…Kapil: I don’t
know..unhone koi phone tho nahi ki..)..the bell rings..all of them turn to the door…
(Tanveer: Kapil..tu chup jaa…ham log dekhte hain…tu chup jaa..)…Kapil hides behind a
curtain…near the window..Nisha moves and opens the door..as Tanveer waits…
watching…the door opened…Salaudin at the door…(Nisha: Kya hua..aap waapis
aagaye?..)..Salaudin steps in..quiet..Looks at her..(Salaudin: Taxi nahi mili..main soch raha
tha..Tanveer mujhe drop kar hi de airport jaise wo offer kiya tha…Tanveer: Main taxi
book kar doon abbu..do minute lagega…Salaudin: Kyon..is there something that I should
go by taxi only..)..he looks at Tanveer..then at Nisha..(Salaudin: Haan…kya chal raha
hain..main compound mein aa raha tha..dekha tera wo nalayak dost..Kapil bhaagta hua
aaya…haan…kahaan hain wo..)..Tanveer and Nisha both…aghast..their act has been
caught..(Salaudin: Kyon Nisha..kya pak raha ghar mein mere peeth peeche..)…Kapil parts
the curtain and comes out…Salaudin looks at him..(Salaudin: Ye kya kar raha hain idhar
Tanveer? Isnt this nalayak friend of yours the one who instigated you in your courtship
with that Jaanvi?..)..Tanveer now finally gives up..comes to his father..(Tanveer: Yes
papa.he did..but the truth also is that I love Jaanvi..and I am going to marry her…and I am
not going to subject her to any change..that you subjected my mother to…Salaudin: Isse
pehle tum meri naak kato..I will kill you Tanveer…if you think you can do that..)…Tanveer
in rage..picks up the vase..that’s lying on the side desk..a brass vase..and hits his father on
the head…blood starts spilling..as Salaudin loses his balance..holding his head…Nisha
watching agape..though she is part of it..close of Kapil…Salaudin falling down…Tanveer
lifting the vase again and again hitting his father on the head…Salaudin now collapses
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completely …falling down dead…Tanveer puts the vase aside..as Nisha looks at her dead
husband..her eyes filled with tears..Kapil and Tanveer look at the dead body of Salaudin…
CUT..Close of Tanveer picking up the knife..from the dining table…Nisha turns and looks
at him…Tanveer comes to his father…bends down…his eyes are filled with rage…kapil
looking on…close of the knife in Tanveer’s hand..his close..as rage builds up…
Tanveer and Nisha seated quiet…PI Looking at them..(Nisha: I stayed back and cleaned
up the blood..I sent Tanveer and Kapil with the suitcase to dump the body…(looks up)..I
did it..my son and his friend are innocent…they..they just did what I asked them to do… I
am the culprit…I killed my husband…Tanveer: No..I killed my father..she is just trying to
protect me..I killed him…Nisha: NO you didn’t beta..you didn’t..Tanveer: I did ammi..sir..I
did..I cut his nose…he said things about my mother..he was becoming a roadblock in my
life..I planned it..and I killed him…)..PI looks at both of them..(PI: Aur itni dino tak aap
logon ne hamare saath khel khela…badi sajhedaari se..aaj pakde gaye..tho itni sajhedaari
ki ek doosre ke bachaav mein khade ho rahe ho…Nishaji..ye samajhdhaari aur
saajhedaari dikhaani chahiye thi..ye masle se door jaane ke liye..door chale jaate aap
apne pati se..apne beê te ko lekar…apni aazaadi se kar lete jo karna hain…unhe apni aazadi
se apni soch vichaar ke saath jeene dete..Tanveer: Wo jee rahe the apne soch vichaar
apni aazadi se…hamein jeene nahi de rahe the..PI: Unki saanse bandh karke..jeena bandh
karke…you thought you could find the freedom of your life?...Unki naak kaatne se
tumhari naak unchi hogayi?...Ab jab sazaa katoge iss jurm ka…tho kaunsi Jaanvi tumpe
fakr mehsoos karne wali hain? Does she know you did this so that you could marry
her?..)..camera moves to Tanveer nodding in the negative…PI Looks at Nisha..(PI: Saath
dena chahiye tha Nishaji..apne beê te ka..sahi raasta dikhane mein…ab kathgare mein
saath mein rahengi iske saath…ek aur ladke ke saath…Kapil Bhardwaj..jiske maa baap ko
shayad ab pata chalega..unka beta..kiss raaste par nikal pada dosti nibhane ke chakkar
mein…)..camera moves to Nisha…looking down…
Miraj seated on the garden chair…Jameela also seated near him..quiet…(Miraj: (sad and
lamenting)..Tanveer should have atleast talked to me once. Main baat karta Salaudin
se..tab bhi baat ki thi..ammi abbu se jab Salaudin Nisha ke saath nikaah karke aaya tha…
ye kya kar diya Tanveer ne…)….
THE END