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Ellie Morris LO3 Feedback. 3/1/2018

Current Grade for LO3: Fail

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning outcome is a Merit Grade, even
if you have achieved this, if there are any minor corrections or additions, can you please
ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

There are elements of a Merit grade in your pre production, what you do have, overall is
good work. However, there are a few minor additions and some work that hasn’t been
added. You have developed appropriate ideas for the advertisement campaign and then
developed proficient pre production material.

You need to finish the budget, and ensure that you add the industry rates from Bectu and
then add a total, on the risk assessment - add make up patch testing / allergies. Finally, on
the storyboard, you need more detail.

You do have the shooting script missing which will need adding on the re-submission to
secure a pass or merit grade. Without this work, I can't pass this learning outcome.

The final deadline is: 19th January 2018