Ellie Morris LO2 Feedback.

23/11/17

Current Grade for LO2: Pass

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning outcome is a Merit Grade, even
if you have achieved this, if there are any minor corrections or additions, can you please
ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

Nearly there Ellie. A couple of minor points left to do.

LO2 Part A. Initial Ideas

Some great work here. Well done.

LO2 Part B. Treatment Proposal

Good start here. However, please add in some detail on the other elements of the campaign you
would develop (print adverts etc) and when explaining the audience, make sure you use the
terminology (demographics, psychographics, socio-economic groups).

LO2 Part C. Campaign Schedule

Excellent. Well done.

The resubmission deadline is: 13/12/17