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Hand in Hand

Continue the following story as creative as possible.

The Little Mice


Once upon a time little mouse busied herself all fall storing away a cache
of beans.
Every morning she was out early with her empty cast-off snake skin,which she
filled
With ground beans and dragged home with her teeth.

The little mouse had a cousin who was fond of dancing and talking, but
who did not
Like to work. She was not careful to get her cache of beans and the season was
already well gone before she thought to get some. When she came to realize her
need,
She found she had no packing bag. So she went to her hardworking cousin and
said:

”My cousin, the season was already well gone, but I haven’t get a cache of
beans .I have no packing bag”.
Then, her cousin replied.
“ I have told you to go with me to take a cahce of beans,but you never want to go
With me”.
The lazy mouse said
“So,What should I do?..I feel so hongry now,And maybe I will die if I don’t eat”.

“Uhm…actually I have a cache of beans, I think we can share together”.


“Really..?.But,is that enough for us..?..
“Yes,of course. I have filled my empty cast-off snake skin, with ground beans”.
“Oh my cousin, you’re very kind to me. I don’t know what to say. thank you very
Much”.
“It doesn’t matter, but you should promise me that you will not lazy anymore so
We can find the beans together”.
“Okay. I promise”.
HINT Use the following strategy to ga her information

1.Use these detail to discuss the ending of the story you are going to create.
a.What happened?
• What happened to your characters in the story?
She was in trouble and she felt hungry.
b.When and where was it done?
• Where did this occur?
It was in the house.
• In the house? Outside the house?
Sometimes outside the house.
• Far away from the house
When the fall season.
c.What was the problem?
• What problems did your characters have?
The problem was, the lazy mouse didn’t have any beans to eat and
The season was already well gone before she thought to get some.
So, she felt really hungry.
d.What was the solution?
• How did your characters in the story solve their problem?
Her little cousin help her problem. Her cousins said that they could
Share the beans. And the lazy mouse will promise not to be lazy
anymore.
• Is it a happy or sad-ending story?
It is a happy-ending story.

2.after you get all the detail listed above, discuss them.
• Do they fit the beginning of the story together?
Yes, they do
• Should there be any detail added or eliminated?
No, there shouldn’t be any detail eliminated
• Ask your teacher for some suggestions.
But ,there should be any detail added

3.if you have finished, discuss with your group, ”what is the purpose of the
story?”,
And “what points are you going to show?”
E.g.:
• Are you trying to show that when a person is in trouble,there is
Generally someone who will help?
• Or are you trying to make other points?
Write in here:
Purpose:
• The purpose is to give us the lessons of life .We need to be a diligent
Person in order to be happy and success in our life.
• The point is if we want to get something good ,we need to do some
Effort and never give up.

Name: Deska dwi party


Class :X11.is.1
Tikus”kecil
Suatu ketika,seekor tikus kecil sibuk sendiri.pada musim gugur membawa
tempat/wadah kacang. Setiap pagi,dia pergi pagi” sekali,membawa wadah kulit
ular yang telah usang,yang dipenuhi dengan buncis dan dibawanya kerumah
dengan menggunakan giginya.(menggigitnya)
Tikus kecil ini,memiliki sepupu yang gemar menari dan berbicara,tapi tidak suka
bekerja.dia tidak perduli untuk mencari kacang dan musim telah berlalu sebelum
dia terpikir untuk mencari sedikit kacang ,ketika dia sadar kebutuhannya dia tidak
memiliki wadah.jadi dia pergi kesaudaranya yang pekerja keras/rajin dan berkata:
“sepupuku,musim telah berlalu,tapi saya belum mendapatkan kacang.saya tidak
mempunyai wadah/tas”.
Lalu sepupu menjawab
“saya sudah mengajakmu pergi untuk mencari kacang,tapi kamu tidak pernah
mau”.
Lalu,tikus malas berkata:
“jadi,apa yang harus saya lakukan?.saya sangat lapar sekarang.dan mungkin saya
bisa mati bila saya tidak makan”.
“uhm,sebenarnya saya punya sewadah kacang,kita bisa berbagi”.
“benarkah?..tapi,apakah cukup untuk kita?
“ya,saya sudah mengisi wadah kulit ular yang telah usang dengan kacang”.
“oh,sepupuku.kamu baik sekali,saya tidak tau harus berkata apa,terimakasih
banyak”.
“tidak masalah,tapi kau harus janji tidak boleh malas lagi.jadi kita bisa mencari
kacang bersama”.
“oOkk,saya janji ”.

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