PET 大作文满分模板--- Story

考生写作选择:考生在大作文部分面临两个选择——书信写作和故事续写。本模板仅针对故

事写作部分。

故事写作要求：

 字数尽量控制在 100 字以上，但不要过长，推荐 110 词到 120 词之间。

 续写或者结尾用给定句。

 内容的连贯性是评分的一个重要部分，也是很多教师和学生忽略的一点，过于重视复

杂语言的使用，而忽视了语言和结构的连贯程度，得不偿失。

 正确使用标点符号

故事写作技巧：

讲述 引用语

时态 过去时 视情况定

基调 偏正式 非正式

 主要角色 1-3 位

 引用语控制在 8 句内

 Collect ideas for the story

Begin with basics of a short story. After you've chosen an idea, you need to

remember the basics of a short story before writing one. Steps to a good short

story are:

· Introduction: introduces characters, setting, time, weather, etc.

· Initiating action: the point of a story that starts the rising action.

· Rising action: events leading up to the climax or turning point.

· Climax: the most intense point or turning point of the story.

· Falling action: your story begins to conclude.

· Resolution: a satisfying ending to the story in which the central conflict is

resolved—or not! You don't have to write your short story in order. If you have

an idea for a great conclusion, write it down. Move backward or forward from

your starting idea (it may or may not be the beginning of the story), and ask

“What happens next?” or “What happened before this?”

 PET 大作文满分模板---书信写作
考生写作选择

考生在大作文部分面临两个选择——书信写作和故事续写。本模板仅针对书信写作部分。

书信写作要求：

字数尽量控制在 100 字以上，但不要过长，推荐 110 词到 120 词之间。

符合书信格式。

要写出题目中所有的要求。

内容的连贯性是评分的一个重要部分，也是很多教师和学生忽略的一点，过于重视复杂语

言的使用，而忽视了语言和结构的连贯程度，得不偿失。

两种书信类型

信息反馈型

昨天我们去一家新饭馆吃饭了。那家饭馆很不错。你们家多久一次出去吃饭呢？你最喜欢

的饭馆是什么样子？

分析建议型

比如说：我们要搬家了，我现在上学有两个选择：第一，去乡下的一所小学校；第二，去

市中心的一所大学校。我应该怎么办呢？

书信模板

称呼语：

Dear Sam,

Hello Sam,
Hi Sam,

Sam,

表达收到对方来信的愉快心情：

Thank you (Thanks) for your letter. It was great to hear from you and catch up on

all your news.

I’m very glad to receive your letter.

It’s a pleasure to receive your letter.

I’m very delighted to hear from you.

问候对方：

How are you doing recently?

How have you been?

How are you?

根据对方来信与朋友互动，表明写信的原因：

I’m so happy to hear that you passed your exam!

Well done for passing your driving test! I knew you could do it!

Fancy your sister getting married --- great news! You must be delighted.

In your letter you asked me about what you could give your father for his

birthday.

In your letter you mentioned that…

In your letter you told me that…

I’m writing to tell you that…

表明自己的观点：
I think

From my point of view

In my opinion

I suppose

As far as I’m concerned

标明叙述的顺序：

Firstly, Secondly, Finally

To begin with, To sum up

First of all, What’s more, Last but not least,

表明因果关系：

Because, because of, due to

Therefore, so, as a result, so that

表示附加观点：

Also,

As well,

What’s more,

In addition,

Furthermore,

Moreover,

表示对比：

 On the other hand,

 Nevertheless,
 However,
  After all,
 But,
 Otherwise,
 While,
 Although, Though
 … and… : to connect two similar things or ideas.

I love reading and listening to music.

My favourite meal is fish and chips.

 …, but… : to connect two contrasting ideas.

I love watching Tv, but I don’t have a favourite show.

I am reading a book, but I don’t remember the title.

 . However, … : to connect contrasting ideas.

Last month, I went to the cinema. However, I didn’t enjoy the movie.
I am a very big fan of this author. However, I haven’t read his last
novel.

 Moreover, … : to add more information about something.

 … because… : to justify an opinion or idea.

My mum is the perfect cook because she knows a lot of recipes and
has plenty of experience. Moreover, she experiments with different
ingredients all the time.

 . Because of that, … : to justify an opinion, fact or idea.

My mum likes to cook using new ingredients all the time. Because of
that, she creates original dishes every month.

 . As for…/ Regarding… : to switch to a new topic. For instance,

you can use this connector to start the second main paragraph.

As for/Regarding why I like this cookery show, I think it’s because

it’s a great way to see new recipes.

 Time linkers: then, after that, yesterday, this morning, last

summer, etc.

Last night, I watched a very good action film.

表示建议：
Why don’t you buy your father a ticket to the jazz festival?

If I were you I’d buy your father a ticket to the jazz festival.

What about buying your father a ticket to the jazz festival?

Let’s go camping in France this summer.

I suggest that…

You should…

You’d better…

You may…

You could…

询问朋友的观点：

What do you think?

Do you have any ideas?

Let me know what you think.

I prefer camping, what about you?

结束语：

 Well, it’s time to say goodbye.

 Anyway, I have to go now.
 Well, it’s time to go.
 Anyway, gotta go.
 I really hope to hear from you soon.
 I hope you write back soon.
 Make sure you write back soon.
 Get back to me (answer me) quickly so we can make plans.
 Anyway, I must go now and finish my homework.
 Take care and keep in touch.
 Can’t wait to see you again.

 I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

  Write to me soon.
 Write soon.

结尾祝福语：

 Best wishes,
 Take care,
 All the best,
 Love,
 Regards,
 Sincerely,
 Take care,
 All my love,
 Love,
 Lots of love,
 See you soon,
 Regards,

署名：

 Mike
 Angel
 Ariel
 PET 小作文满分模板
短文写作

此部分要求写一篇 35---45 字的便条、电子邮件或者明信片。

写作要求

字数：35---45 字

符合书信格式。

一、 称呼语。以 “Dear ***，Hello ***, Hi ***”开头。

二、 信末祝福语。Best wishes, Best regards, Best, Yours, Love, write soon, Write

back soon, write to me soon 等。

三、文末署名。Mike, Mary 等。

题目要求的第一句往往会提出事件、人物、时间等重要因素。这些在作文中都应按要求有

所体现。如：”You have spent the weekend staying with some English friends.”

作文中就应该提到”the weekend”, “some friends”这样的关键信息。

正文应回答题目所提出的三个要求，不可遗漏，也不需要过多扩展。

基调：friendly and informal

写作技巧

1、 答题纸一行写 10 个词

2、 背诵必备句型

3、 正确拼写，不会拼的词要找近义词代替

4、 Before Writing:

1) read the instructions carefully (people, name, relationship, topic, ect)

2) tense: past tense, present tense, future tense

3) three questions: 按顺序回答；每个问题必须清晰回答；问的/谈的是什么（sth,

activity, reason, time, place, 方式等）

4) 回答的语法与问的语法（tense, 固定搭配等）必须一致

While Writing: 注意格式

After Writing: 几条要求是否全覆盖、单词拼写、字数

必备句型

感谢某人(Thank someone)

Thank you for the beautiful present.

Thank you for helping me with my homework.

Thanks for…

道歉（Apologize）

I’m sorry for breaking your vase.

Sorry for…

解释原因 (Explain why)

I want to buy this CD because I like it very much.

I’m afraid I can’t see you tonight because my mother is ill.

I’d love to go to the cinema with you, but I have to take care of my sister.

I’m sorry but I can’t go to cinema with you, because I have to do my

homework.

给建议(Make suggestions)

What about meeting next week?

Shall we meet outside the cinema?

 We could play games together.

邀请某人（Invite someone）

Would you like to go to the cinema on Saturday?

表达个人愿望（Say what you’d like to do）

I would really like to go to the cinema this evening.

表达个人打算（Say what you are going to do）

I’m going to finish my homework this afternoon.

I’ll return your book next month.

请求允许（Ask for permission）

Can/May/Could I borrow your bike for a week?

让某人做某事（Ask someone to do something）

Would you mind coming to my house first?

说自己的感受（Say your feeling about something）

I’m really excited/disappointed about it.

问候朋友的家人（Ask about your friend’s family）

How are your family?

Please give my regards to your family.

提醒某人（Remind someone）

Don’t forget to meet me at the cinema tonight.