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Nicole Stoklosa - Narrative Writing - 10 2f30 2f2017 - p-1
Nicole Stoklosa - Narrative Writing - 10 2f30 2f2017 - p-1
10/30/2017
P-1
Life On A Paper
It was June 16, 2020, that day that my life changed into something I never imagined before.
It was the year that I graduated High School, and decided to follow the passion of studying
nursing. Since going to medical school, I left something behind that valued me the most: art.
Many of my friends and family wanted me to go to a fine art school first and not leave any talent
behind. If it wasn’t Manolete, I wouldn’t have practiced more of my talent than ever before. He
helped and admonished me, to see the real me and work with art that helps me realize that I can't
lose the talent I have. But I still wish that Manolete would still be in position and distinguish the
It was Monday morning when class was about to start. There were many new peers and new
professors. We started class with the introduction what we are going to learn throughout the first
semester of our studies on the body system. As Professor Jensen explained the objectives, I
class.”
I answered, “Maybe.”
He gave a frowned face, and went back to discussing the lesson, I stopped doodling.
After class, Professor Jensen told me to talk to him about my doodling problem.
“Mrs. Stoklosa, this is not a art class in any way. If you want to draw and doodle go for art class
but, especially not in my class during the discussion of our lesson, are we clear?” he said firmly.
“Yes, we are clear” I said. Then I left out the door, thinking about the choice that I decided about
studying this career I always wanted to do, leaving apart the talent.
After class, Professor Jensen told me to talk to him about my doodling problem.
“Mrs. Stoklosa, this is not a art class in any way, if you want to draw and doodle
go for art class but, especially not in my class during the discussion of our lesson, are we
clear.” he declared.
As I marched out the doors, I went outside sitting on fresh cut green grass, I took out a
piece of paper and started to draw admirations around me, as I looked around I saw a dark
mysterious hidden figure, lingering behind the sharp and fresh wood of the tree, staring at me
and the moving hand on the paper. I made contact at the hidden figure that it disappeared in a
instant.
My friends came over that night. As they came in the door they carried a squared box
wrapped with silver polka dots, and on top a white bow. I knew it wasn’t my birthday or any
“Nicole we got you a gift that you would admire!” Then I thought, “Let me guess. You
“Well, you guessed that correctly with a very bad mood,” Karolina explained.
“I told you I am not going back to sketching, drawing, painting, nothing related with art,
have is something that you should value the most. Don’t put it away because of that accident.
Even your mom is worried you will lose that talent that expresses you will be to waste.”
Karolina answered, “I heard that you my friend started to doodle flowers during a session
in class”, she looked at me straight at my eyes, “We still know that you want to go back to this
passion, but you are not showing that real heart to it like you use to have, like painting the big
Karolina’s and Sylvia’s stares and glares made me realize something that, because of the
death of my father it’s making me weak and suffer. As the door opened, Karolina and Sylvia left,
leaving the pencils on the table given the distinction of another suffering in my life.
The next day, I walked to school on a spring weather with the smell of fresh cut green grass
through the melody of the birds making my day, making my way to the art studio that the school
had by the library. As I went inside I saw so many art work and flashbacks to my experience
before my father's death. Walking, not even looking where I’m going to bump into, I bumped
into the hidden figure from Monday. His name was Manolete.
Monolete announced, “I saw depression in you and the emptiness inside you.” I
wondered, why would a stranger be interested in me and my life? I turned back and left not even
saying a word to him, but he followed me. He took my hand and we went to the art studio, he
told me to take the paintbrush. I refused, in someway Manolete had a distinction in his eyes that
made me take the paintbrush and paint on the canvas that was white as a feather.
As I started to paint, Monolete said to my ear, “Life is like a great big Canvas, throw all
the paint through lifes events.” I looked back and he was gone.
Again, during the day I saw Monolete outside, with paper and pencils as he was drawing
figures far of the distance from the campus. I had asked him why he was doing this for me. He
answered that, he hates people wasting their talent for something that is suffering within them
and they should draw their feelings on the paper, shows the real image of the feeling within
someone. He teached me the techniques that I never knew about. We were good friends since as
he helped shape my life back with something that I admired of. But, until a tragedy came by.
It was fall break, news came by to me that Manolete was in a accident later and died from
many injuries. It was said, that while Monolete was riding his bike, a car had been speeding
crashing into Monolete. I was disheartened by the news, tears falling on the fresh ink on paper,
as it swirled it reflected sorrowful feelings through the dark spreaded ink by water. The accident
was the same day that my father died from a heart attack one year ago.
Throughout the whole day, I didn’t go out of my dorm, even if Sylvia or Karolina tried to
get me out of this. That day, there was a knock on my door. Sylvia went to open the door. Sylvia
opened the door the police came asking for my presents. I came out of the room and they offered
me a drawing of me. They had told me that this drawing was in Manolete's bag with his other
sketches that he made. Then I realized that Manolete was right that through your imagination and
feelings you can create your heart to someone and show others how you feel.
I had learned a lot through my experience through Manolete. Manolete helped me think
outside the box and show the rest of my talent that I have. He made me define art as the act of
expressing feelings, thoughts, and observations. Without doing these forms of communication, I
wouldn’t really express myself through ideas and feelings. I myself, finished the study of art and
still study nursing, but doodling I know that it's not something real, but better to bring out the big