TRINITY ISE ll Preparation for Extended Writing - Tasic 4 eee , [sean opropriae} 1 Dear Sir or Madam, | formai greeting, [Stateiclearty TT ve crt Hct the | why youare I | wring nthe | wish appt forthe postion of Spores and Aches Organiser atthe | first paragraph. Totterdell Summer Camp as advertised in yesterday's newspaper. person's name so | ‘Dear Siror | | Madam is correct, [As captain of my secondary schoo! football team, | believe | have the [Make sure you sporting background and organisational skis necessary to make me |_| answer the ques wie wel-suited to the role. Furthermore, | have gained considerable experi: |_| tion fully n the art use ence working with young children as a volunteer teaching assistant at_,)-—~| two main beh contractions king with young chit : ing a oo ain oy Pee my local primary school. | fee, therefore, that my skis and experience” paragraphs. Here : rake mean ideal candidate | the iest input ond evidence is | a | | am interested in working as a camp organiser because | wish to study provided to sup | (SonctF yore | | physical education and become a primary school teacher when I = port your claims | | point is eiscussea farnfuly | | school. As such, working atthe camp would represen valuable expert JX |escateyou | ene forme. fa very pte, honest depen and tare-werting | [En thiapoegraph] | don't know the k Jindividual, who is full of enthusiasm. Therefore, | believe |would bea |_| the second and | name of the | significant asset to the summer camp. | ‘third input points, | paren yur | \ } cre discussed weiting Ye [are discussed Lwrtese J \\ I rarcouin ane forensics my ppeton eck orvardso | 7 oneness | hearing from you and hope for a positive response. Close by politely] ise ne a ee ON eorae imc formal letter, woud like to ha ie: Michael | Yours fal, j — facuidiae to hee McNulty not | | ae ‘Michael or Mr [-—™) Michael McNulty | ‘McNulty. oe J Exercise 2 1. First look at the pictures and answer these questions. Write your answers down in note form and then discuss them with a partner if you can, Vi i Now it's your turn, Write an answer tothe question below. Plan your paragraphs carefully before you begin and check your answer at the end, as you've arendy been shown, You saw an ad for the position of Sports Coach for young children at the town’s youth centre in your local newspoper. You decide to oppy for the jb. Wea letter of opplication to the camp monager in 150-180 words. Say why you're writing and: ‘© give details of your qualifications and experience ‘+ say why you'd tke the job '* mention some of the personal qualities that make you suited to the role Ot 3 B s 11. Have you ever had 2 part time job? 2. What sorts of jobs do young people do to earn extra pocket money? 3. What are the advantages of having a part-time job when you're @ student? ‘4. What are the disadvantages of having 2 part-time job when you're a student? 5. What skills does a sports coach working with young children need?