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Hyria - Revsion Matrix
Hyria - Revsion Matrix
Revisions Matrix
Text from my initial A comment or question I The change(s) I made How this
assignment: received from De Piero to what I initially change impacts
(a phrase, sentence, or a classmate: wrote: my piece:
paragraph, idea, (or a thought that you had
punctuation, piece of on your own) (i.e. the change I made
evidence, etc.) to column 1)
One could put The very first sentence of Many times I have Its simpler, and
a few simple words on papers is unique because caught myself looking mentions the
a background it has the it's the VERY 1st at political posters and things i'll be
ability to sway an impression you're going to ignoring the text that's talking about.
audience, push their make on a reader, so it's on it. Often times It's easier for the
agenda and crucial that it's political posters, or reader to
simultaneously bash crystal-clear. Something posters in general are understand
an opponent, and about this isn't quite clear made to be bright, where i'm going
many have for years; to me flashy, or unique with my paper
through political in some way to grasp
propaganda someone's attention.
I was hoping, if you’d “purpose. get to it, the I am reaching out to I moved it up
have me, to work sooner the better” you because I would earlier in the
under you in this greatly appreciate a first paragraph
research. I’d love to chance to be mentored after my RQ (
work under, and be by you as I continue sooner)
mentored by someone this research. I read
who has such some of your papers on
extensive constructive
work/research in this neural-network
complex, yet essential learning algorithms and
field of study. the advances in
artificial intelligence as
I formed my annotated
bibliography.
Thank you for taking separate your paragraphs I understand you are It gives the
the time to hear me by their currently in the process professor a time
out, and if you can, get function/purpose.... here, of working towards frame while also
back to me within a you're kind of "signing some more of your own introduces the
months time. off" and giving gratitude. publications, so I hope following
consider putting this as a January 15th 2019 is opt-out clause
standalone para enough time for you to ending the email
consider your decision
and get back to me.
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