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TEREDA ANCHE

THE OPEN POST

Written by: Gowtham K V

AUG 2018
Tereda Anche (The Open Post)

1.INT/EXT.PAPANNA’S HOUSE-DAY

An old lady around 60 years; she wakes up from the bed. There is
a small girl sleeping next to her. The old women wakes up, she
is searching someone in the house. She saw the backside of the
house; she doesn't see anyone. She comes in to the house

TUNGAMMA
Kaveri..Kaveri.. Ellodlu Ivlu
[Where does she gone]

She comes to the entrance room which is an old Post office


setup. She saw the empty chair behind the Post office table. She
got tensed and run out of the house

TUNGAMMA
Ayyo.. Papannaa.. Papanna..

She goes near the neighbor compound and calls

TUNGAMMA
Ratnammaa..Ratnamma..

An old lady comes out; she is same age of Tungamma.

TUNGAMMA
Nan maglu-aliyannenadru nodudya?
[Have you seen my daughter and the Son in law]

RATNAMMA
Illala marayti, mane hinde munde ella nodidya?
[No dear, did you check the surrounding of the house?]

Tungamma nods with sadness

RATNAMMA’S HUSBAND
Enta ante, Ibru ododranta?
[What’s the matter, both of them ran away?]

1. A.INT/EXT.PAPANNA’S HOUSE-DAY

Tungamma is sitting and crying. Ratnamma is sitting next to her


and consoling her. Ratnamma’s husband goes towards the gate and
searching around by standing inside the gate itself.

TUNGAMMA(CRYING)
Nanu magalige madve madalla, madalla andru ella

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seri ninmagalu yaradru jote ododre yanta


madtiyaanta heli madve madsidru. Hangagi
Papanna hengu nanna swanta annana maga,
chikka vayyasinda gottironu, paapa
appa amma ilde iro huduga anta nanna
maglanna kottu madve maddhe. Kelsa ilde
alitiddonige kelsanu kodsi nammanele jaganu
kotte. Kelsa sikkid mele ivne nanna maglunne
harskondu hogene.. Eega nangeyaaru adere hele
Ratna..(Cries more).
[I didn’t want to get marry my daughter; but
Everyone convinced me saying what if she
ran away with someone. So anyhow Papanna is
my own brother’s son. I know him from his
Childhood. This poor boy doesn’t even have
his parents; But still I gave my daughter to
him and get marry. I helped him to get a job and
gave my place to stay also. But once he got
job he taken away my daughter and ran away..
who else is there with me Ratna..(Cries more)]

Ratnamma's husband checks both sides of the road by standing


inside the gate and comes back

RATNAMMA
Elle ello hogirtare Tunga; bartare.
tale kedskobeda
[They will be somewhere here.
Don’t worry]

RATNAMMA'S HUSBAND
Ellu kantilla. Ondo ee kade Shimoga pete
kade hogtirbodu; illa andre Chikmagaluru
badi hogtirbodu
[Can’t see anywhere; I think they may gone
Shimoga side; or they would be gone
Chikkamagaluru way]

Tungamma listened him and worried.

RATNAMMA
Ellodru bartare, ninna maglalenu
[They will come if they go out also;
She is your daughter]

RATNAMMA'S HUSBAND
Nanu modle enisidde, ivnu odogo
hudgane anta. English kaltoru

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yavattaru ee ooralli uliyodunta


[I knew that; one day this guy would
run away. Is there anyone who learnt
English; do stay in this village? No way]

Ratnamma actions him with her eyes like don't say anything. He
leaves from there.

RATNAMMA'S HUSBAND
Entaaru madkali..nangyake(murmering)
[You think whatever you want(murmering)]

TUNGAMMA(CRYING)
Avnu haalagi hogidru tondre irla. Nanna
magalanna entake karkondu hogbekittu..
[I wouldn’t care If he gone anywhere.
Why should he take away my daughter]

By the time Papanna comes with his cycle. Tungamma saw him and
relieved.

RATNAMMA
Ninna aliya banda nodu.. ninnna magalu
ille ello irbeku hudku
[See; your son in law came. Your daughter
Must be somewhere around..find her]

Tungamma relieved

TUNGAMMA
Nanu andkande Papanna hangella madonalla anta.
Sari..nee hogu, Avribrige enta helbeda matte
[Even I knew; my son in law never do this.
Right; you go. Don’t tell this to them]

Ratnamma leaves. Papanna is keeping his cycle. By the time


Tungamma is rubbing her tears. Papanna comes inside and keeping
his bag on the table. Tungamma trying to be casual and says

TUNGAMMA
Papanna, ondu kodpana neeru tagondu baa
[Papanna, Go and bringa water]

PAPANNA
Haa atte.. Kaveri enta madtadale?
[Ok Mother in law, What Kaveri is doing?]

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TUNGAMMA
Alli ento kelsa madtadale..eega nee hogi
tagondu ba. Ondu kelsa madakke hattu prashne
keltane
[She is doing some work there..Now you go
and bring the water. If I ask a work; he will
ask 1000 questions]

Pappanna goes inside. Kaveri curiously goes to backside of the


house to search Kaveri.

2. EXT.PAPANNA’S NEIGHBOR HOUSE-DAY

A neighbor young couple is hiding in their backyard. The man is


trying to kiss her, but she is getting shy and avoiding him.
Tungamma saw the couple and make her face weird. She saw Kaveri
who is enjoying looking at them. Tungamma angrily calls her
slowly

TUNGAMMA
Ey.. Kaveri; nee entha nodtha nintidye.
[Hey..Kaveri, what are looking at?]

Kaveri feels shy and throw the dirt from the container and comes
back with Tungamma.

TUNGAMMA
Oorigella kaanange nintu asayya madta nintere..
[They are doing their shameless things
In front of the whole Village]

TUNGAMMA
Nee entake aa asayya nodta nintiddi..
ninna idi maneyella hudkde
[Why are you looking at this shameless people..
I was searching for you everywhere]

Kaveri felt ashamed

KAVERI
nanu alli kasa bisadakke hogidne.
nanenu bekanta nodiddalla
[I just went throw the dirt.
I didn’t see them purposely]

Papanna looks at Kaveri like where she went. She doesn't respond
anything. Papanna got curious and going to see. By the time
Tungamma calls him for the water.

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TUNGAMMA(Voice over)
Papannaa.. bega neeru tagondu baaro..
[Papanna..quickly bring the water..]

Papanna goes inside the house.

3. EXT.PAPANNA’S HOUSE-DAY

Papanna is standing in the entrance door next to the Post box.


He looks bored. A hand comes and puts a post.

CUSTOMER
Post mastre nange ondu inland letter kodi
[Post Master please give me an Inland letter]

Papanna leaves from there (Film title appears) and he gives Post
through the window.

CUSTOMER
Mastre ayta tindi?
[Master; had breakfast]

Papanna artificially smiles and nods

PAPANNA
Aytu aytu..
[had..had..]

Papanna's daughter Putti is getting ready to school and Kaveri

PUTTI
Tata Appa

PAPANNA
Tata..Tata Putti

Kaveri also says bye. Kaveri comes to near Papanna with her
younger kid. She looks at Papanna; Papanna is keep checking the
Posts. Papanna takes out the posts from the bag. Kaveri keep
showing randomly the Posts stamp, Papers to her younger kid. She
takes some post. Papanna got irritates. Kaveri got angry and
went inside. He continues checking all the Posts. He saw a Post
and just looks around and opens a post and curiously read it.
Then he closes it. He just confirms again around. Then he saw
another Post written in the name of Kareem, K.M. Estate,
Kaalooru. Papanna is looking at it curiously and kept in his
pocket. By the time Kaveri comes

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KAVERI
Tindige banri
[Come for breakfast know]

Papanna is deeply thinking something and lost in his thoughts.

4. INT.KITCHEN - DAY

Papanna is having breakfast. Kaveri is serving him. Papanna is


lost in his thoughts. Kaveri is looking him doubtfully what is
he thinking. She served extra food. Papanna suddenly got angry

PAPANNA
Saku saku..estu haktiya
[Enough Enough.. How much do you serve]

Kaveri felt angry and went inside. Papanna eats whatever she
served.
PAPANNA
Innondu kadbu.
[One more Idli]

Kaveri is listening and standing without responding. Then he


asks her softly
PAPANNA
Innondu kadbu haktiya?
[Could you please bring one more idli?]

Kaveri comes and serves.

5.EXT.COFFEE ESTATE-DAY

Papanna goes inside a big coffee estate with his cycle. He is


slowly looking around the estate and moving. Few people are
working in the estate. A young boy who comes in the Fiat car;
who looks very stylish and modern and he is in the joy mood.
Papanna is looking at him very curiously and walking. Car
moves. A worker guy saw Papanna and calls

WORKER
Post master enu ee kade
[Post master; what’s the matter?]

Papanna suddenly scared.

PAPANNA
Estate owner sahibranna nodbekittu.

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[I wanted to meet Estate owner]

WORKER
Ayyo modle helidre avra maga Kareem
sahibru jote car nalle hogbodittu
[Ayyo..If you would have little early
You could have go with Kareem Sahab]

PAPANNA
Kareem ah? ivru city yalli
odlikke hogidralva?
[Is he Kareem? He is the one who
Is studying in the city?]

WORKER
Haudu, eega college rajege manege bandiddare.
enta sahebrige enadru post itta
[Yes. He came for the college vacation.
What’s the matter, is there any post for
the owner sahib?]

PAPANNA
Oh..? coffee board inda ondu Post bandittu.
Sari bartini, neenu kelsa madu
Oh.. Yes. Few posts from the coffee board.
All right. I will see you, you can do your work.

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6.EXT.COFFEE ESTATE-DAY

Papanna is walking in the estate. He confirms no one is there


around. He goes inside the coffee plantation bush and hides
behind the big tree. He takes out the letter from his pocket. He
is nervous and checked around once again. He again thinks
holding the post. His hands are shaking while opening the
letter. He takes out the letter with curious. He got
disappointed; when he saw the letter; which is written in Urdu
and he got angry on himself. He folds the letter, backside of
the letter he saw a beautiful nude photo of a lady above the
wrist. He is looking the photo and stun. He is lost for few
minutes when he saw the beautiful nude women in the big estate.
He is feeling shy and nervous; he comes out of the coffee
plantation walking in the road. He is consciously walking
towards the people who are working. Everyone is surprisingly

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staring at his blushing face. He realize that and he tries to


control his emotions and scolds them

PAPANNA
Entha nodtha iddira..kelsa madadu bittu
[Why are you people looking at me..
Do your work]

CUT TO

6. A.EXT.COFFEE ESTATE ROAD-DAY

Papanna is riding his cycle with freshness and happy. He goes


out of the estate gate and riding the highway roads in between
the beautiful estate mountains.

CUT TO

7. EXT.BANK OF THE RIVER - EVENING (About to sun set)

Papanna is sitting in the isolate river bank and seeing the nude
photo. He is enjoying his fantasy state.

CUT TO

8. INT.POST OFFICE- DAY

Papanna is obsessively looking at the same photo in his Post


office. Kaveri comes with little aggressive and call him.
Papanna suddenly scared and hide the photo. Kaveri looks at him
surprisingly and get irritated

KAVERI
Nimge eshtu sari tindige karibeku.
Avaginda koogtane idini, haa illa
hnoo illa. Bardidre bidi
[How many times should I call you.
I am calling you from long time. No response.
If you don’t want don’t come then]

Kaveri leaves. Papanna slightly get disturbed from her


interruption. Then he goes inside. Papanna looks at the Photo
again.

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9. INT.KITCHEN-DAY

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Papanna is having breakfast. Kaveri is serving. Papanna is lost


in his thoughts. Kaveri serving extra, Papanna is going to stop
her and look up. He saw her and surprised. He started looking
her lustfully. She serves and leaves. Papanna is looking at her
intensely when she is walking. Papanna is unbelievable and
completely conquered by Kaveri.

CUT TO

10. INT.BED ROOM-NIGHT

Kaveri is sleeping with her younger kid. Light is on. Papanna is


intensely looking at her with lust and curiosity. Also he is
nervous. Kaveri got disturbed

KAVERI
Light off maadri; Paapuge nidde baralla.
[Switch off the light.. Baby can’t sleep]

PAPANNA
Papu malgidyalla
[Babu is already sleeping]

Tungamma who is sleeping in the living room which is next to the


Papanna's room. Papanna's elder daughter is sleeping with her

TUNGAMMA
Papanna, light off maadu..illi
nan kannige light hodita untu..
idondu haaladdu niddenu barilla
[Papanna.. Switch off the light.
It is hitting directly to my eyes]

Papanna is switching off the light and sleeps. He is seeing only


dark, nothing else.

DISSOLVE TO BLACK

10. A.INT.OUTSIDE BATHROOM-DAY

Papanna is searching someone in the house, he heard the sound in


the bathroom someone is taking bath. Tungamma is preparing
beetle nuts in the main room. Papanna slowly goes near the
bathroom door. There are small gaps between the old bathroom
doors. He is trying seeing Kaveri through the gaps. By the time
sound stops, he is curiously trying to see with the involvement.

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Kaveri comes out with the clothes; Papanna got nervous and acts
like he is waiting

PAPANNA
JµÀÄÖ ºÉÆvÀÄÛ?
[How much time?]
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11. INT.POST OFFICE-DAY

Papanna is working in the Post office, Kaveri comes and sweeping


the floor. Papanna is seeing her in the cross eye. He couldn't
see her properly. He gets up and comes near the door. He is
conscious to look at her. So he comes out of the door and acting
like taking something in the Post box and looking her through
the window next to Post box. He found Kaveri beautiful when she
is sweeping the floor. Papanna looking her intensely with
desires (slow motion).

When Kaveri is going back, Papanna goes behind her slowly and
hold her. She got scared, Papanna kissed her cheek. Their
daughter saw and started laughing. Kaveri felt shy and act like
angry on him.

KAVERI
Entha idu nimdu cheste
[What is this nonsesnse?]

Kaveri without willing she removed from him with shy and goes.

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12. INT.POST OFFICE/POOJA ROOM - LATE EVENING

No power in the house. Papanna is working in the lamp light.


Kaveri lighten the Pooja room next to the Post office room.
Kaveri started doing Pooja with bell and Agarbatti. Papanna
heard the sound and goes inside like going to get something. He
saw Kaveri from behind; only few lights pass on her body and he
found it like a golden statue of an angel. He slowly goes behind
her and held her. Kaveri was involved in the Pooja got scared
suddenly and she left the bell from her hand. The bell sound
echoes in the house.

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12. A.INT.KITCHEN - LATE EVENING

Tungamma is sitting and getting warm in front of the kitchen


fire. Suddenly she heard the echo of the bell sound.

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12. B.INT.POST OFFICE/POOJA ROOM - LATE EVENING

Kaveri is afraid and trying to release from him. But Papanna is


completely in her zone and doesn't leave. Kaveri surrendered and
enjoys it. Lightened god looks peaceful looking at them.
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12. C.INT.POOJA ROOM DOOR - LATE EVENING

Tungamma saw their romance from the door and got shocked.
CUT TO
13. INT.KITCHEN - NIGHT

There is a fire in the kitchen. Tungamma is looking at the fire.


She is angry. She is lost in her thoughts.
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13. A.INT.POOJA ROOM/POST OFFICE-DAY

Tungamma is angry and cleaning the God photos. Kaveri is


sweeping in the Post office room. Papanna is sitting in his
chair and looking and giving seducing smile at Kaveri.
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14. INT.EXT.BACKYARD/KITCHEN - DAY

Kaveri is bringing water from the well. Papanna pulled her,


Kaveri about fall with the container. Papanna held her.

KAVERI
Ayyo beelta idde eega
[Ayyo..I was about to fall down]

PAPANNA
Naanu bidbekalla ninna beelakke
[I never let you fall down]

KAVERI
Adenu itticheke baari love bandide nanmele?
[Why are you so caring nowadays?]

PAPANNA
Preeti yavaglu ittu. Aadre ishtu dina neenu
maklu mari anta busy ade. Naanu Post office
dutyly busy aade. Ratri malgdagantu katlalli
ninna yavattu node illa..
[My love was there before; but you were
Busy with the kids. Even I was busy in

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My Post office duty. Even I couldn’t


See you in the dark night]

Kaveri felt shy and laughs. Papanna tickles her. Kaveri started
laughing. By the time Tungamma saw them; both of them are
closely talking and laughing. Tungamma got disturbed and angry.
She calls Kaveri

TUNGAMMA
Kaveri bega neeru tagondu baa..
[Kaveri..bring the water quickly]

But Kaveri and Papanna both get involved in the love. Tungamma
got angry. She calls Papanna

TUNGAMMA
Papanna..

But Papanna didn't respond to Tungamma. Kaveri remind him; but


Papanna nods his head and loving Kaveri by holding her cheek.
Tungamma saw them both; they are still standing there. Tungamma
goes inside, Kid started crying. Kaveri trying to leave

KAVERI
Ayyo..magu alta untu, bidi
[Ayyo..baby is crying, leave me]

Papanna pulled her again without letting her go

Papanna
Neenu hodre ee magu kathe enu
[If you go, what about this baby]

Tungamma comes and saw them and get angry.


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14. A.INT.KITCHEN - DAY

Tungamma is feeling sad and worried.

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15. EXT.RIVER BANK-DAY

Kaveri is washing clothes in the bank of the river. She is


smiling herself and happily lost somewhere. Tungamma who is also
washing clothes next to her; but she is angry and keeps looking
at smiling Kaveri. Tungamma break the silence, but she is
hesitate to talk

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TUNGAMMA
Kaveri..Ka..

Tungamma while washing calls Kavery softly. But Kaveri didn’t


listen her when she was in her own thoughts. Tungamma cries

TUNGAMMA
Vayyassadora maatu elli kelskotira
[How can you listen this old women; now?]

KAVERI
Entha aayte marayti ninge?
[What happened?]

TUNGAMMA
Nangenta agilla maraayti..nange
ninna baggene chinte
[Nothing happened to me.. I am
worried about you only]

KAVERI
Nan bagge entha chinthe?
[What is there to worry about me?]

TUNGAMMA
Naanu avattinda nodtane idini..
helana helana anta
[I wanted to tell you from few days]

Kaveri is waiting and looking at her. Tungamma continue washing


clothes by hesitating to face her. Kaveri continues to wash
clothes.

TUNGAMMA
Swalpa dinadinda ninna ganda onthara adtidane
[From few days your husband is behaving weirdly
I have seen everything you both were doing]

Kaveri get concious and stops washing.

TUNGAMMA(CONTINUES)
Nodta idinamma..nivibru
ittichege enu madtiddiri anta.
[I have seen everything you both were doing]

Kaveri felt shy. But Kaveri wanted to defend herself.

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KAVERI
Nan entha tappu maddhe marayti?
[What did I do wrong?]

Kaveri was not confident while she was talking. Tungamma while
washing clothes she looks at Kaveri and stops.

TUNGAMMA
Nodu Kaveri; neenu jeevna dalli kasta
sukha nodidholu. Nanu ninge helbekagilla.
Nimmappa neenu hutti 3 varshadalle
nammnnella bittu ododru(cries). Neene
nodidhya Nanu obbale hege kasta pattu
ninnana saaki doddolanna madidini anta.
Kelavaru nannanna madve agtini anta bandaga
ninna bavishya elli halagutte anta nanu
yara hangigu beeldhe nanu oble kelsa maadi
manena ulsi belsiddini. Ninna madvenu madiddini.
[Listen Kaveri, you have seen the ups
and downs in the family from the childhood.
I don’t need to tell you all this’
When your father ran away; you are
3 year old;(Cries). I was a lonely women
who worked hard to handle this house and
grew you up with all the fulfillments. When few
people came forward to marry me; But I was
concern about your future; so I didn’t want to
be under someone. I worked alone. Even I did
your marriage.]

Tungamma continue crying. Kaveri felt sad and pity about her
mother. She also cries.

TUNGAMMA(CONTINUES)
Neenu ashte amma, ee chellata ella bittu
ninna makkala bavishya roopisbeku.
[Even you should leave all this non sense
Play and you should create good future
To your kids]

Kaveri felt ashamed of herself. She feels helpless. She is


controlling her cry but it comes out more

KAVERI
Amma, nannanna neene saaki doddolu
madidholu, neene nanna mdve madidolu.
Neene ondu maatu avrige heli bidamma..
nange ontara agate

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[You are the one who gave me life, you are the
One who get me married. You only say it to him.
I feel shy to tell this]

TUNGAMMA
Hagallamma.. maige sokku bandide anta
makkalu, doddoru, devru anta noddhe
ella kade haage asabyavagi vartisbardamma..
adu ee vayyassalli? jana enantare.
Haagella ninna gandanige saluge kodbeda.
[You should understand Kaveri. When your
physical desire come, one should not
behave however they feels without even
consider the presence of yielders, kids
or even the God.. If you do all this in
this age what people would say. Never
let him take you as granted]

Kaveri remembers Papanna and get angry

KAVERI
Avrige eega oorige obbare Post
mastru anta sokku..adukke hingella adudu,
too..nangantu ishtane agalla avra vichitra.

Kaveri scolding him and continue washing clothes

KAVERI
Monne ondu kari kannadka bere
tagubakantidru,aa musudige
He has ego of being only Post master
in the village. Also he wanted buy a
sunglass to his joker face.

Kaveri is washing clothes angrily. Tungamma looks little


relieved. River is flowing with force.

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16. INT.PAPANNA’S BED ROOM - NIGHT

Papanna switch off the light in his room. He light on the lamp.
His kid is sleeping next to Kaveri. Papanna kept his kid away
from her. Light is falling on Kaveri. Papanna found her
beautiful. He started imagining the hidden beauty which might
have in Kaveri. Papanna goes and sleep next to her. Papanna
slowly kept his hand on her. He slowly held her saree. Kaveri
opened her eyes. She is emotionless. Papanna is going to pull

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her saree. Kaveri woke up and look at her. Papanna got shocked.
He is going to hold her again. Kaveri got angry

KAVERI
En madta idira.
[What are you doing.]

Papanna is speachless.. He is nervous. Kaveri saw her kid which


is sleeping away. Kaveri started shouting at Papanna

KAVERI
Ayyo.. maguna yake alli malgsiddira.
thoo.. onchooru manushatvane illa..
olle prani tara agidira
[Ayyo..why did you kept the kid aside.
You..you doesn’t even have little bit
Of humanity. Behaves like an animal]

Papanna got confused and going to touch her again; but he


hesitates. He is obsessively looking at her and sleeps. Kaveri
lights off the lamp. Papanna is looking at the roof and sleeps.

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16. A.INT.TUNGAMMA’S BED - NIGHT

Tungamma relieved and closes her eyes.

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17.EXT.BACK SIDE OF THE HOUSE - DAY

Kaveri is bringing water from the big container; she looks


tiered. Papanna is seeing from the far. He goes to her and asks
her. Kaveri doesn't respond anyting. But Papanna forcefully
takes it from her.

PAPANNA
Nange helidre naa tartirla?
Ninoble allinda tartiyalla.
[You could have tell me. Why are
you taking trouble all alone]

Kaveri doesn't respond anything.


PAPANNA
Nee henge istu tooka iradna allinda
tartiya marayti..ninge kodpana idkanake
antane devru sontana hange sristi madirbeku

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[How do you bring this from so far..


God may specially create your wrist
To keep the water container]

Kaveri who was angry couldn't control her laugh, she slightly
laughs at him. Papanna also feel happy.

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17. A.EXT.BACKYARD OF THE HOUSE - DAY

Tungamma saw them; both are coming. Tungamma got worried again.
She goes and sits in the Kitchen and thinking.

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18. INT.POST OFFICE - EVENING

Bombay Babu and other friends are playing Play cards in the
Papanna's Post office. Papanna is checking few Posts and writing
something on the blank paper. Once he written he started telling
it to an old man

PAPANNA
Illi bardidini; keli ajja, 'My dear Kamala,
I am your loving Rangayya. Andre, Nanna
preetiya Kamala; nanu ninna preetiya
Rangayya anta..
[Here I wrote; listen grandpa,’My dear Kamala,
I am your loving Rangayya. Means, My dear
Kamala and I am your loving Rangayya..]

OLD MAN
First class untu; munde bari
[It’s nice; write next]

The people who are playing cards looking at the old man.

BOMBAY BABU
Saukarru yavdo Prema patra barasta iro haagide
[Sir is sending some love letter it seems]

OLD MAN
Sumne ira maraya, ee vayyassalli enta
prema patra, geema patra
[Keep quiet man, Why would I write
Love letter in this old age]

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BOMBAY BABU
Nanu avattu ee Rangajjanna ondu hengsu
jote peteli noddhagle doubt ittu
[I had a doubt on him; when I saw
This Rangajja with some lady in the town]

MAN1
Hey, Bombay Babu sumne entento
helbeda mareya Papa. Elru ninnange andkandya..
Rangajjana vayyassigadru bele kodu mareya
[Bombay Babu, don’t talk nonsesnse. Poor guy.
Everyone is not like you. Give him some
Respect at least for his age]

BOMBAY BABU
Hoy Ganesha, Neeninnu baccha, ninge
enta gottilla. Illi kelu, Vayyassadoru
tevlu ningilla..
[Dear Ganesha, you are a kid; you
doesn’t know nothing. Listen,
Even you don’t have lust like these
old people]

The old guy feels proud about himself and smiles with blush and
rubbing his mustache.

BOMBAY BABU
Post Mastre, nivu vayyasadoru baree
vayyassadora melekannu haktare andkandra..
nammanta ele vayyasnora meloo kannu haktare
[Post master, don’t think these old people
Just attract towards old people; they
Also have attraction on youngsters like me]

Papanna started laughing loudly.

PAPANNA
Hahaha..Bombay Babu hangare ee
vayyassadora sahavasa alla mareya
[Ha Ha.. Bombay Babu, then its hard
To deal with this old people]

Everyone laughs loudly..

CUT TO
18. A.LIVING ROOM - NIGHT

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Tungamma is getting angry when she listen everyone laughing.


Kaveri is stiching some cloth.

TUNGAMMA
Nodidya Kaveri, Ninna gandanna;
Soole vyavahara mado aa hadbe Bombay
Babu jote seri ooravara mundella
nanna maryade tegita idaane. Naanu
hellilva avnu ittichege ontara adtidane
anta. Kaveri ninna gandana hatra
idannella kelsakkinta modlu ondu tottu
vishanadru kodsu marayti.(she cries)
[Did you listen Kaveri; how your husband is teasing me
In front of villagers with that asshole Bombay Babu.
I told you right.. nowadays he is weird.
(She cries)Ayyo..God.. Instead listening all this,
can you please tell your husband to
bring a drop of poison.. ]

Tungamma crying and goes to sleep. Kaveri is helpless and


angrily looking towards the Papanna's Post office.

I/C

18. B.INT.POST OFFICE-EVENING

Everyone is laughing and cheering.

PAPANNA
Babu, chennagi heltiya marre. Nanu
helo antaddu ondu helu nodana.
[Babu, you say nicely man. Can you tell
me something which I can say]

BOMBAY BABU
Hauda? sari. Ninna misses hesru enu.
[Is it? Alright. What’s your Mrs. Name?]

PAPANNA
Kaveri

Bombay Babu corrected his throat and thinking by closing his


eyes. Few people are trying hold their laugh by seeing him

BOMBAY BABU
Kaveri..Kaveri ninna nodi, bande
naanu Kavu eri; Kaveri ninna nodi bande
nanu Kavu eri; Adara phalave namageega

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eradu muddu mari


[Kaveri..Kaveri, I saw you and come to
You with the temptation.
Result we have 2 cute Kids now(poem)]

Everyone claps and cheers. Papanna feels shy; then he laughs


loudly

DISSOLVE TO
19. KITCHEN/BEDROOM-NIGHT

Fire sticks are burning in the stove. Kaveri is angrily giving


blank look. Papanna is very happy and romantically comes to the
Kitchen by humming the song. Kaveri is leaving from the kitchen.
Papanna saw her and dramatically says

PAPANNA
Kaveri ninna nodi bande naanu...
[Kaveri..I saw you and came..(Poem)]

Kaveri doesn't respond anything and leaves. Papanna get worried.

PAPANNA
Kaveri, I am Hungiry..why are you angiry?

Kaveri goes to room. Papanna get disappointing. Papanna follows


her and goes to the room. Kaveri is going to her bed. Papanna
goes to near her and asks softly

PAPANNA
Kaveri, enaytu?
[Kaveri, what happened?]

Kaveri quietly preparing her bed and says with anger

KAVERI
Innu enagbekittu..Ooravra munde ella
namma maryade tagadralla.. matte aa
hadbe Bomba Babu..too..nimma hendati
bagge maryade hogo matadtidru nagta
idralla..nimma janmakkishtu
[What more shoul happen.. You make us ashamed
In front of all the villagers. And then that
Asshole Bombay Babu.. He was making fun of your wife;
And you were laughing. You shamefull..]

PAPANNA
Kaveri..nav en matadta idvi andre..

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Avru bandilla andre Post office muchtare ashte


[What we actually talk about is.. If they doesn’t
Come, Head office will close our Post office]

KAVERI
Hanganta nannanne ada itbidi..
[So.. then keep me for sale]

Kaveri closes her bedsheet and sleeps. Papanna stops what he


wanted to say.

CUT TO

19. A.INT.KITCHEN-NIGHT

Papanna comes to Kitchen. Foods are kept closed. He slowly


taking without willing. He is eating sadly without having
interested in eating.

CUT TO
20. INT.BED ROOM - NIGHT

Kaveri is closed her bed sheet and sleeping. Papanna is looking


at her with blank face. He closes his eyes.

DISSOLVE TO BLACK

21.INT/EXT.ENTRANCE DOOR OF THE HOUSE-DAY

Kaveri is drawing Rangoli in front of the house. Papanna comes


and sit in front of her. Tungamma is doing Tulasi Pooja is
looking at them with angry. He is trying to seduce her by
holding her hand while she is drawing Rangoli. Kaveri got angry
and throw away his hand. She doesn't even look at his face.
Papanna is again going to hold her hand. She felt irritate and
throw away his hand. She is not even angry now. She is doesn't
even look at him with the ignorance. She left the Rangoli dabba
and leaves with half drawn Rangoli in ignoring way. Tungamma
felt relieved and complete the Pooja. Papanna got worried and
looking inside the house and the half drew Rangoli. He takes the
dabba and continue to draw Rangoli. Tungamma also ignores him
and went inside by placing her foot on the Rangoli. Papanna
feels ashamed.

CUT TO
22. INT.POST OFFICE-DAY

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Papanna is sadly sitting in his Post office table and looking


outside the window. His daughter is putting Post seal on her
dress. She calls Papanna and show it to him.

PUTTI
Appa illi nodu
[Appa see here]

Papanna switches to happy mode.

PAPANNA
Ayyo magale..neenu appana kelsa
shuru madi bityene?
[Oh..my daughter. You also
started my work]

Papanna hold her cheek with love. Tungamma saw them while
passing. She comes with aggressive and shouts at Putti

TUNGAMMA
Yey..Hen maklu hangella torisbardu.
langa ilse kelge
[You.. girls should not show like
this; Stop it]

She throws down her dress from her hand.

TUNGAMMA(CONTINUES)
Ee kelsa illige sakagede..
[This job is enough for him]

She takes away the kid. Papanna feels bad and became blank.

CUT TO

23. INT.POST OFFICE-EVENING

Already Bombay Babu and gangs are playing cards.

BOMBAY BABU
Nivella belkalli node ilva? Neenu nodilwa?
[You all didn’t look at it in the light?
You too?]

Bombay Babu asks the Papanna's chair; where Papanna is not


there.
BOMBAY BABU
Papanna neenu?

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[Papanna, you also?]

Papanna bring a glass and water and give it to Bombay Babu.


Papanna doesn't respond. He looks sad. Babu pours the liquor in
to the glass and drinks. Papanna is sadly sitting in his chair.
Bombay Babu saw Papanna and offers the drink

BOMBAY BABU
Papanna swalpa tagotiya?
[Papanna; would you like to have some..?]

Papanna nods his head.

BOMBAY BABU
Papanna; ivarigella rasikatene illa.
[Papanna, these people doesn’t have
Romantic taste]

Man2 who sat there got offended

MAN2
Bombay Babu; Neenenu maha nodidya.
40 varsha adru innu ondu madve agilla
[Bombay Babu; what more did you see..
You didn’t even get a marriage in your 40’s]

Bombay Babu started laughing weirdly at him. Papanna also laughs


silently looking at Bombay Babu.

BOMBAY BABU
Ondh madve...ha ha ha..Rasikatege
madvene agbekilla kano..nivella yava
kushige Madve agidiro gottilla..Ha ha
[A marriage..ha ha ha.. To be romantic,
you no need to get marry man..
I don’t understand, for what purpose
you all get married..

Lights gets on.


BOMBAY BABU
Satya..ha ha. Current kooda bantu..Ha ha
[It’s truth..ha ha.. Even power came]

Everyone started scolding Babu. Papanna is seriously thinking


looking at laughing Bombay Babu.

CUT TO

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24.INT.KITCHEN-NIGHT

Tungamma and Kaveri is having dinner in the kitchen.

TUNGAMMA
Idu nillange kanalla..Naavu ooralli
muka torsangu illa.. Idee ooravra
munde harajige ittaytu
[This doesn’t stop..We can’t show our
face in the village. He just spoils our image
in the village ]

By the time Papanna enters and takes plates and serving himself.

TUNGAMMA(CONTINUES)
Namma mane Post office enu yava pubbu,
baarigu kammi illa(sarcastically).
[Our house Post office is not less than
Any pub and Bar(Sarcastic)]

Papanna got angry and scold Tungamma

PAPANNA
Nodu atte, Nanna duty bagge matadbeda.
Nan duty nange. Ninna duty ninge.
[listn Mother in law, don’t talk about
My duty. My duty is for me and yours is for you]

TUNGAMMA
Nodu Kaveri namma maneli Post office
madakke jaga kottiddalde nange tirugi
matadtane. Kelskondu Neenu sumne
kutidyalla Kaveri(she cries)
[See Kaveri, He is doing his Post office
In my house and he is talking against me.
Kaveri, even you are simply sitting listening
all these]

Tungamma got angry and gets up with her plate. She leave while
saying

TUNGAMMA
Ivara teetege, Ooralli jana beralu torsodu nange
[For their fun, people will laugh at me]

Kaveri feel disappointed. She angrily looks at Papanna and


cries.

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KAVERI
Khushina.. Ammana mansu noysiddakke?
Ayyoo..yake neevu hingadtira..(cries)
[Are you happy..why do you hurt my Amma?
Ayyo..why you behave like this(cries)]

PAPANNA
Kaveri, Jana Post office ge bandilla andre
Post office hege nadiyutte
[Kaveri, if people doesn’t come, How can I
Run this Post office]

KAVERI
Aa sulegarike maado Bombay Babu
hatra enu vyavahara nimge..
[What was so important business
With that pimp Bombay Babu?]

PAPANNA
Tho..
[That..}

Papanna became helplessly holding his food. Kaveri leaves.

CUT TO

25. INT.BED ROOM - LATE NIGHT

Papanna and Kaveri are sleeping in the Bed. Their younger Kid is
sleeping slightly down. Kaveri hold Papanna in the sleepy.
Papanna also hold her back with joy. Kaveri suddenly got woke up
and pushed the Papanna. Papanna is about to fall down from the
caught. Papanna who was holding his anger from many days got
bursted and gets up

PAPANNA
Too ninna, hadbe rande.. Ninge
tevlu iddaga aa mudkige gottagdiddange
ododi bartidde..Eega nodu.. Ninginta
aa suleru vaasi, duddu kotre niyattinda
kuppasanadru tegitare
[You rascal..When you get tempt, you used come
Hiding from that oldie.. Now you behave different..
Prostitutes are better than you, At least for money
They will remove their blouse]

Papanna is light on the lamp and leaving with angry. Kaveri is


lifting her kid and says

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KAVERI
Nalku kade malgiddakke hinge naayi haagadodu
[Because of sleeping in the different places;
you behaves like a dog now]

Papanna suddenly got angry and frustrated and he forcefully


pulled Kaveri. He forcefully hit her and trying to pull her
saree. Kaveri is also fighting with him for protecting herself.
She also shouts.
PAPANNA
Nanu nodtane idini avattinda..jamba toristiya
[I am seeing from many days..you are
showing too much attitude]

KAVERI
Amma..
Ayyo..
Bidi
[Leave me]

Papanna forcefully push her down. By the time Tungamma comes


with shouting..
TUNGAMMA
Ey..Bido..mane hala
Bido avalanna
[Leave her..you rascal]

Tungamma trying to pull him.. But he pushed her also. Papanna is


behaving like an animal.

CUT TO

25. A.EXT.ENTANCE OF THE HOUSE - LATE NIGHT

Tungamma ran outside and calling neighbors.

TUNGAMMA
Ratnaa..Chandru..Rajoo..ayyo..ayyo..
banni banni ella.. Kapaadi
[Please everyone come..help]

CUT TO

25.B.INT.BED ROOM-LATE NIGHT

Papanna is forcefully holding her and trying to pull her saree.


But Kaveri is also protecting. Then she couldn't and became weak
and started crying like a kid. Papanna felt sympathy on her and

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he releases his hold. Papanna heard the sound of the people


shouting, Tungamma's scream in between Kaveri's cry. He got
shocked and become blank. 3-4 Men and women came and started
pulling Papanna.

TUNGAMMA
Nodi..henge nanna magalige hoddhu,
balatkara madtidane
[See..how he is beaten and trying to rape
My daughter]

NeighborMan1 pushed Papanna with the force.

NEIGHBORMAN1
Too.. ninna hendti mele balatkara
madtiyalla nachike agalla ninge..
maryade bittovne
[You Idiot..You are raping on you
Own wife..Don’t you feel shy..Shameless man]

NEIGHBORWOMEN1(Background)
Ayyo..Papanna intovnu anta tildirla..
[I never knew Papanna is like this]

PAPANNA
Nanen ninna hendti mele balatkara madidna..
Nanna hendti mele nanu en bekadru madtini
[I didn’t rape on your wife..I did on my wife]

NeighborMan1 got angry and pushing Papanna.

NEIGHBORMAN1
Ey shanda.. modlu ninna hendatina sariyagi nodkalo..
[Hey Chakka.. first you handle your wife..]

Papanna saw Kaveri. Kaveri is looking somewhere like he is


someone. Papanna felt ashamed and hit the Neighbor man on his
face. He fell down. Everyone got tensed.. and scared.

CROWD
En madbitta.. Ayyo etro..
[He killed or what..lift him..]

Everyone is murmuring. Some people coming forward to check the


guy. Papanna become alert to hit the guy. They are scared and
came back. Tungamma saw Kaveri who is looking at Papanna.
Tungamma come forward sat near the man who fell down and started
crying

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TUNGAMMA
Ayyo..Ayyo.. sayse bityallo..
mane hala. Inta katukanige nan maglu
kottu hal maddhnalro..
[Ayyo.. he killed this guy..you rascal..
Why did I gave my daughter to this murderer]

Papanna looks at Kaveri; she turns another side. There are more
people started coming. Papanna got tensed and he looks everyones
face with angry. He moves forward and wears his shirt. Everyone
scolding something slowly

NEIGHBORWOMEN
Yake ella mukha nodta nintralla..hidkalro
[Why everyone looking faces.. stop him]

NEIGHBORMAN2
Hoy Papanna ..ellige hogtidya nintko..
[Hey Papanna..Where are you going..stop]

MAN3
Hidkali..Hidkali
[catch him]

Everyone started following Papanna. Kaveri sat there cries.


Tungamma and the Neighbor Man also get up and follow the crowd.

CUT TO

25. C.EXT.IN FRONT OF THE HOUSE - EARLY MORNING

Papanna comes out quickly and taking out his cycle. Everyone
comes out.

RATNAMMA
Tungamma, ninna aliya hogta idane
[Tungamma your son in law is leaving]

MAN3
Ellige hogtidya.. Nillo
Where are you going..stop

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Papanna takes out his cycle from the gate. A weak man is coming
with curious. Everyone shouting

CROWD
Hidkali avarna..Naga..
hidka hidka Bidbeda..
[Stop him..Naga..
Catch him..don’t loose..]

That man going hold Papanna without knowing what is happening.


Papanna got angry and kick on his stomach. He screams and fell
down. Everyone is shouting..

CROWD
Tungamma hoda..
[Tungamma he left..]

TUNGAMMA
Hodre hogli..Ollede
[It’s good he left..]
CUT TO

25. D.INT.POST OFFICE ROOM - EARLY MORNING

Kaveri ran and came there near the door. She looks at the door
in blank face..

CUT TO

26. EXT.IN THE STREETS - EARLY MORNING

Papanna is riding his bicycle. He is moving with fast and


aggressive. There is a tension in his face. He goes ups and
downs of the village road. He got tiered and stopped his cycle
near a bridge. River is flowing very fast. Sun is about to rise.
Papanna get down from the cycle and sat near the bridge. He is
breathing very fast. He just thinks and feel guilty and started
crying. He takes out that opened Kareem's post. He takes out and
looks at the Photo. Angrily threw it in to the river. Papanna
just thinks ‘what did he do’? He ran in to the river and
searching for the Post. It is flows away in the river. He feels
something is lost but he is in relief from his tension and come
back to the road. He saw the both side of the road and thinking.
Then goes back with his cycle to the way he came.

DISSOLVE TO: BLACK SCREEN

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