Nowadays, there are a lot of discussion between whether university students should study

what they like or study useful subjects for the future. On the one hand, pursuing our
favourite subjects can bring happiness, on the other, studying useful disciplines can
contribute to society. In my opinion, the latter trumps (outweighs) the former.

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Kong is under rapid development, there are numerous of infrastructure projects demanding
labour force, such as high rail roadhigh-speed railway, Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macau Bridge, Commented [MOU1]: Better give the full name
Lantau Ttomorrow Vvision. A lot of engineers will be needed in building these
infrastructures. So, studying in engineering or architecture can grantd you a well- paid job.
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contribute to the society. Formatted: Highlight
The same situation also happenis also happening in the medical sector. As the current Formatted: Highlight
society is bothering being bothered by the aging population, there are a lot of eldersthe Formatted: Highlight
elderly is in dire need of our help. The ratio of medical manpower to the public is 1:500 in Formatted: Highlight
Hong Kong, while the international standard is 1:250. This ratio means Hong Kong needs at Formatted: Highlight
least 25 thousand25,000 medical manpowermedical professionals/ medical practitioners to Formatted: Highlight
adequately serve the community.

(Topic Sentence: Moreover, studying your favourite subject may not help you make a living) Formatted: Highlight
Some people may argue that learning favourite loving what you learn can bring happiness Formatted: Highlight
and chasing motivate us to chase your our dreams. But if everyone in society only cares Formatted: Highlight
about there their dreams, what will our society be like? It maybe interesting when you are
pursuing the subject in university, but when your interest becomes your job, and you find it
even can't make a liveand if you are struggling to sustain yourself, you will loset all your
passion.

Based on the above reasons, pursuing in useful disciplines can grant you a high profit job,
and you can contribute to the society. When you have enough money, you can then chase
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As the current society is bothering is being bothered by aging population

Also, moreover, in addition

However, but
Nonetheless, nevertheless