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April 4, 2019
The National Hockey League (NHL) has been an organization for over 100 years.
Fighting has been included in all 102 years of the league’s existence. Fighting goes hand-in-hand
with injuries, especially head injuries. In fact, the league used to require players to remove their
helmets before engaging in a fight in order to protect their hands, instead of their heads. It was
not until the 2013-2014 season that it became a two-minute penalty if you removed your helmet
prior to a fight (Wyshynski 2013). While many things have changed in 102 years, fighting still
Concussions are the most common and least serious type of traumatic brain injuries
(“Concussion”). The word comes from the Latin concutere, meaning “to shake violently”
(“Concussion”). Concussions are most often caused by a sudden direct blow to the head. These
hits are often called sub-concussive blows (“Concussion”). Essentially, a concussion is the
bruising of your brain, it’s blood vessels and nerves (“Concussion”). Concussions are tricky to
diagnose because signs may not appear for days or weeks after the initial injury (“Concussion”).
Symptoms of a concussion may include, but are not limited to: confusion or feeling dazed,
clumsiness, slurred speech, nausea or vomiting, headache, balance problems or dizziness, blurred
vision, sensitivity to light and noise, sluggishness, ringing in ears, sluggishness, behavior or
as loss of consciousness, amnesia, and loss of equilibrium” (“Concussion”). It is important for all
athletes to take care of a concussion and refrain from physical activity in order to keep post-
Sidney Crosby was drafted to the NHL as the first pick in the first round of the 2005
draft. In his thirteen years in the league Crosby has won the Mark Messier NHL Leadership
Award, two Art Ross trophies, two Maurice “Rocket” Richard trophies, three Ted Lindsay
awards, two Hart Memorial trophies, two Conn Smythe trophies, three Stanley Cups, two
Olympic gold medals, a World Cup with Canada, and even an Emmy. Needless to say, Crosby is
undoubtedly one of the NHL’s best players. Many fans and analysts of the game argue that
Crosby is even better than greats Wayne Gretzky, Mario Lemieux, Brett Hull, Bobby Orr, and
Gordie Howe, just to name a few. However, Sidney Crosby’s concussive history has a list longer
than all of the aforementioned combined. Now, this is likely due to the fact that records of
concussions were simply not kept before Crosby’s time. But, is also speaks to the fact that the
dangers of the game have not changed much, if at all. At this point in the NHL’s history,
concussions should be almost nonexistent, so why has Sidney Crosby missed 114 games, nearly
one and a half regular seasons, in his career due to concussion-related issues? If the NHL is
doing nothing to protect their “golden boy” what are they doing for their “less valuable” players?
What will it take for the NHL to change their concussion protocols or the way the game is
played—more players dying? Were Rick Rypien, or Derek Boogaard, or Wade Belak, in addition
CONCUSSIONS TO CTE
Chronic traumatic encephalopathy (CTE) is a brain condition associated with repeated
blows to the head. The brain of an individual who suffers from CTE slowly deteriorates and will
over time end up losing mass. Certain parts of the brain are prone to atrophy, while other parts
are liable to becoming enlarged. “Another aspect of CTE is that some areas of the brain
structure in the neurons, but which may become defective and subsequently may cause major
interference with the function of the neurons” (BIRI). A build of tau protein is most often seen in
individuals with dementia and Alzheimer’s disease (BIRI). The BIRI states that potential signs
and symptoms of CTE can be “loss of memory, difficulty controlling impulsive or erratic
difficulty with balance, and a gradual onset of dementia” (BIRI). CTE can only be diagnosed
post-mortem, at this point. CTE has been diagnosed in several notable cases which received
widespread media attention, including the deaths of three NHL enforcers, the suicide death of
NFL player Junior Seau, professional wrestler Chris Benoit who committed suicide after
murdering his wife and son, and most recently the 2018 death of the Minnesota-Duluth
Studies prove that the chances of developing Alzheimer’s, Parkinson’s, and dementia
increase by 80% after you receive three or more concussions. Daniel Carcillo, a former NHL
player and two-time Stanley Cup Champion says, “that’s fucking scary” (The Players Tribune
[TPT], 2018). “I’d be scared,” Carcillo continues. “If I was still playing in the NHL. If I was
Sidney Crosby, if I was anyone of those young kids” (TPT, 2018). Carcillo claims that he would
have walked away from hockey if he knew the damage he was doing to his brain. He believes
that the NHL and NHLPA are withholding information from the players and that they are not
doing enough for these players after their concussions. He claims that the NHL will send you to a
doctor or a surgeon instead of someone who actually has the ability to correctly diagnose and
treat a concussion. In fact, Carcillo is quotes as saying “You can take my name off the Stanley
Cup twice over. I can’t live like that anymore.” in response to being asked about his feelings
towards how the NHL and NHLPA handles concussions in their players (TPT, 2018). Carcillo is
one of the very few hockey players to speak out against the NHL and the NHLPA.
In conclusion, many people feel as though fighting should be removed from the game of
hockey, and especially from the NHL. The incidence rate of concussions, even among star
players like Sidney Crosby, is much too high. These athletes are dying from concussions, which
in multiples, lead to CTE. CTE then has the potential to lead to a multitude of other issues like
early on-set Dementia and Alzheimer’s, drug addiction, and even suicidal behaviors and
tendencies. Because concussions are difficult to diagnose and CTE cannot be diagnosed until
post mortem, many, including the NHL and NHLPA, believe that head injuries are not an issue
to be concerned with. However, a large majority of fans, coaches, analysts, and former and
current players believe that concussions should be taken seriously; much more seriously than
they are currently. The NHL has to make a big change to the game of hockey, and soon, if they
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www.protectthebrain.org/Brain-Injury-Research/What-is-CTE-.aspx.
“Concussion: Symptoms, Causes, Diagnosis, Treatments, & Recovery.” WebMD. WebMD. n.d.
www.webmd.com/brain/concussion-traumatic-brain-injury-symptoms-causes-
The Players Tribune. Former NHL Player Daniel Carcillo Discusses Head Trauma and
Wyshynski, Greg. “NHL Fighters Will Be Penalized for Removing Helmets before Brawl; Pass
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