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Community Final Paper
Community Final Paper
Professor Watkins
English Comp 2 TR 10:30 am
2/2/2019
A successful community has several characteristics that keep its residents and visitors
happy; however, a rare community leaves no one behind. Making a positive impact towards the
vulnerable part of my community is something I have been doing for the last four years.
I feel that as a species, humans have too much noise distracting them from what matters
the most. Charles Foster makes a strong point in his writing “If You Were an Elephant”. He
believes that animals are better at having communities than we are (Foster, 2017.)
Perhaps one of the reasons we’re so keen to deny non-human creatures minds,
better people than we are. They build better communities; they live at peace with
themselves and aren’t, unlike us, actively psychopathic towards other species.
We are busy and often lazy with a bystander apathy when it comes to helping others.
going to act first? We can expect an elephant to do it. These animals display several
layers of conscientious thought often going as far as to bury their dead and mourn
together. We reserve a good portion of our lives to be lived in private, happy or sad.
Another interesting characteristic about elephants is that they will go out of their way to
help the more vulnerable ones in their group, even if it takes walking miles to find food
On a larger scale, there are thousands of vulnerable humans who can use more
than a few helping hands. There is a reason the word philanthropy has such a high-class
ring to it though. We think it is only for the rich. My first reaction to Andrew Youn’s “3
Reasons Why We Can Win the Fight Against Poverty” was the desire to go to sub-
Saharan Africa. Then came the crushing realization that I would not be able to afford to
travel there on my own dime. I also did not have the skills to make it worthwhile.
Andrew points out “We have super computers in our pockets, went to the moon, but have
left one billion people behind” (Youn, 2016.) This makes my heart hurt because the goal
to feed the hungry is such a highly achievable one. Out of the three levers Andrew talks
about pulling to help the population of sub-Saharan Africa, not one of them is out of
reach. Africa might be a little far for us, but the reality is that we can help feed the hungry
throughout our nation. A unique collection of donations and government funding makes
it possible to deliver hot meals to the elderly right down the street. Throughout the last
four years, I have taken several clients from Mpower to go on route with me to deliver to
houses. This is an amazing opportunity for the givers and the receivers. My clients and I
learn the power of giving and go home knowing we did something good for the day. The
receivers get a hot meal and do not have to stress about cooking or going out into town.
While the elderly can be quite shut in, this opportunity gives them a chance to be social
as well. In my experience, I am on a first name basis with most of these individuals and
While we are not elephants and may not be rich enough to sponsor ourselves a
trip to Africa, we can be humble enough to help the person down the street. If we are to
change the world for the better, I believe we must have strong communities first. Making
a positive impact towards those in our community is highly rewarding and something I
Youn, Andrew. “3 reasons why we can win the fight against poverty.” Youtube, uploaded
Foster, Charles. “If You Were an Elephant ...” The Guardian, Guardian News and Media,
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