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Script FMP Draft 1
Script FMP Draft 1
by
John Davies
MAX (V.O)
MAX (V.O)
They don't get it. They never will. I
don't need them. They are nothing.
Nothing.
MAX (V.O)
They are nothing. She is the one. They
are nothing.
MAX (V.O)
Nothing.
The screen then turns black again, and presents the title of
our film, False Perception.
Then the words "6 months earlier" appear onto the screen.
THERAPIST
How are you feeling now?
THERAPIST
Max, are you listening?
MAX
Yes, I'm just still struggling to come
to terms with what I have done.
THERAPIST
What are you talking about? What have
you done?
Shot fades out into Max going into college for his first day.
TEACHER
Alright people, listen up.
TEACHER
We have a new student who is joining
us today. She's moved here all the way
from London, and has had quite a rough
time recently, so please treat her
with the same respect and curtesy that
you would do for myself. Thank you.
MAX FRIEND 1
Who do you reckon that is then?
MAX
Not a clue mate, but we'll soon see.
TEACHER
Now, for the next hour and a bit,
please continue on your essays. I'll
be around if you need any help with
anything.
Around half and hour later, ELLA appears by the door of the
classroom for the first time. Max and his mates turn back
from their computers and stare at her. She looks a little
nervous to be surrounded by new and unfamiliar people. The
teacher stands up and walks over to her. The two exchange a
few words, and after a while, she makes her way over to an
empty seat on Max's left. Max doesn't acknowledge her at
first, but then turns to speak.
MAX
Hey, my names Max.
ELLA
Ella.
Max smiles at her. Ella smiles back and turns away, her hair
falling across her face. Max turns away, thinking hard about
what to say.
MAX
Where are you from?
ELLA
I've come down from London.
MAX
Oh sick, I love it there.
ELLA
Yeah, it was nice.
The camera will then zoom out; MAX and ELLA talking
animatedly together.
Open back into the classroom, where ELLA sits down waiting
for MAX to arrive. She sits on her phone. MAX walks into the
room, and grins when he sees ELLA. He sits down next to her.
TEACHER
Ok yeah thats fine.
TEACHER
Yes I understand, I'll tell him
tomorrow. Ok. Goodbye.
He puts the phone down, and looks back over his shoulder to
the camera, looking worried.
The next day, the teacher calls for quiet from his class.
TEACHER
Ok guys, today is the hand-in day for
your essays. They need to be in by
5pm. So I expect you all to be working
hard on them throughout the day.
Soon after, the teacher makes his way over to Max. Max looks
up as he approaches.
TEACHER
Max, I need you to come with me.
MAX
Why's that?
TEACHER
Just come with me. All will be
explained when we get there.
Max and the teacher walk inside the room. A woman sits inside
waiting for them. The teacher exchanges words with her,
before leaving the room. Max glances at him as he leaves. The
woman turns to Max.
THERAPIST
Sit down Max.
THERAPIST
My name is (tbc) and I am the welfare
officer here at the college. Now, I'm
sure you're wondering why you are
here.
Max nodded.
THERAPIST
Your teacher has spoken to me about
some concerns that he has developed in
the last few weeks.
MAX
I really don't understand what those
might be.
THERAPIST
This may come as a bit of a shock to
you, but from what the teacher has
seen in the last few weeks, we think
that you may have some kind of
psychosis.
MAX
What are you talking about?
THERAPIST
We've monitored your behavior, and
many have expressed their worry about
how you are acting in class.
MAX
I just had walk out of it, it was all
utter shit. She said that I have
become weird to be around, because of
me talking to myself for weeks on end.
Can you believe it?
ELLA
I have no idea what she is talking
about either.
MAX
I just don't feel myself at the
moment, and with the college saying
this about me, its getting to me I...
ELLA
This is a problem Max.
Ella nods.
MAX
What do you mean?
ELLA
I've seen it all before in London.
People can be very manipulative. I
suspect this is what happened to you
today. Apart from me, you can't trust
anybody Max. Nobody.
MAX walks down the pathway on his own, thinking hard about
what he has heard in the last few days. He stops and looks
out into the night. He closes his eyes.
THERAPIST
Max, can you hear me?
THERAPIST
Max!
Cut back to present day, where Max opens his eyes again,
takes a deep breath, and walks off.
MAX sits alone in his bedroom, his phone in hand. Ella's name
is on the screen. He pauses, looking at the screen. He
eventually presses call, and holds the phone to his ear.
ELLA
Max, this is kind of a bad time right
now.
MAX
Oh, ok, don't worry about it then.
ELLA
Call me another time, and I promise
I'll be there for you.
MAX
Ok, I'll call you again soon.
ELLA
Bye Max.
Ella hangs up the phone. Max puts the phone down on his bed.
He closes his eyes again. After a few moments, he lashes out
onto his bed, punching it angrily. He gets up and rests his
head onto his bedroom door. The camera will pan into his
face, as he pants slowly.
Max sits on the end of his bed, on the phone to Ella. The
stress that he has been going through over the past few
months has clearly taken its toll onto Max, as he looks
fearful and extremely anxious.
ELLA
Max. Listen to me.
MAX
I'm listening.
ELLA
The people around you clearly aren't
doing anything for you. Look at your
friends. They are bringing you down
Max. Can't you see it? I am the only
one that can help you.
MAX
I'm trying very hard Ella, but it's
proven impossible. Every day is a
complete struggle now. Every fucking
person in this shit world is out to
get me. And not just me, there after
you too, have you seen the way they
look at you each day. We can't stop
them. We are powerless against them.
ELLA
Then forget about these people. You
know they are nothing. You've just
said it, right? Trust me Max. Listen
to me, learn from me. We will beat
them all. I promise.
Max walks along the college grounds, with his hood up,
staring around him. He suddenly here's voices behind him, and
turns around. Two guys stand, grins on their faces.
GUY #1
Hey Max! Tell me, hows your
girlfriend?
GUY #2
Yeah, you seem to love her very much
when we see you two together!
ELLA
Max, Max. Look at me. It ain't worth
it. Those two are just useless pricks.
Leave it.
MAX
These two are prime examples of what I
was talking about Ella! People are out
for us!
The two lads laugh loudly, and point at the two of them. Max
tries to start on them again, but Ella grabs his shoulders.
ELLA
It's not worth it. Nobody like them
is.
Max takes a long look at the two guys, then shrugs Ella off,
and walks away. Once Max's back is turned, Ella grins.
MAX lies on his bed. His phone rings. Ella's name appears on
the screen. He answers.
ELLA
Max, how are you?
MAX
I feel, empty.
ELLA
What do you mean, empty?
ELLA
Max, are you still there?
MAX
I'm here.
ELLA
Tell me how you feel. Tell me whats in
your mind right now. I must now what
you feel.
MAX
It's empty. My mind is a ball of
nothing.
MAX
(stuttering)
ELLA
Max... Don't do anything stupid!
MAX
(cutting Ella off)
Max is silent.
ELLA
Max? Max? MAX!!
THERAPIST
Max? Can you hear me?
MAX
Yes, I can hear you.
THERAPIST
Tell me Max, what have you done?
MAX
I let her fall away from me. I, I
don't know where she is anymore.
THERAPIST
Who Max? Who is she?
MAX
Ella. The girl from my class. She has
treated me amazingly, and I let her
go. I don't know what is wrong with
me.
MAX
(forcefully)
THERAPIST
Max. Prepare yourself more a little
shock. There is no-one in your class
called Ella. There never has been. She
does not exist. It seems she is a
figment of your mind.
Max does not react to what she has said. He does not move.
His face gradually begins to fall, realisation spreading upon
his face.
MAX FRIEND 1
What are you looking at mate?
MAX
No idea mate, but we'll soon see.
MAX FRIEND 2
See what?
MAX
Hey, my name's Max.
The chair obviously does not respond to him. His friends look
over to see what he is doing, and see him talking to the
MAX FRIEND 1
What the hell is he doing?
Cut to Max sat down, talking to the bench that they sit on.
MAX
Ella.
GUY 1
Hey Max? Tell me, hows your
girlfriend?
GUY #2
Yeah, you seem to love her very much
when we see you two together!
MAX
I love you Ella, I always will. I want
you to know that, before...
MAX (V.O)
They don't get it. They never will. I
don't need them. They are nothing.
Nothing.
End Credits.