Argumentative Essay 議論文寫作 ID # Name: Score: Reader:

Legend 備 註 : C = Content 內容; O = Organization 組織; G = Grammar 文法; V = Vocabulary 生字; M = Mechanics 技巧 (Revised Fall 2016)
Content & Organization Grammar & Vocabulary Mechanics Comments
內容與組織 文法與生字 技巧 建議
C thesis (explicit or implicit) and topic sentences express the writer’s
G variety of sentence structures M conventions of
position on the assigned topic in a clear and sophisticated way
used with no major sentence punctuation, capitalization,
內容 論點 (明示或暗指) 與主句以清晰周延方式表達了作者對指定主題 problems spelling, and indentation
文法 使用各種句型且無重大問題 respected with rare minor
的立場
errors
C informative, convincing and relevant supporting ideas
內容 訊息詳實、令人信服並具相關論據 G rare minor language errors 技巧 遵循標點符號、大小寫、
文法 極輕微的語言偏誤 拼字及首行空格規範, 極少有誤
C information from sources accurately interpreted and acknowledged
內容 精準地詮釋與表態出處資訊 M proper and complete
V sophisticated and precise word
C exemplary selection and integration of source material choice and accurate word form mechanics for citing
Above Standard 水 平 以 上

內容 出色的選用與整合原始資料 information from sources

生字 精練準確的單詞選擇與正確的
C acknowledgment of and response to opposing view(s) is thorough 單詞形式
技巧 引用出處訊息的技巧
and effective 合理且完整
內容 對對立觀點的表態與回應深入奏效 V extensive range and variety of
O clarity of message enhanced by clear pattern of organization vocabulary
between and within paragraphs 生字 範圍廣泛、生詞豐富
組織 透過段落間與段落內明確的組織模式增強訊息的清晰度
O effective and varied transitions between ideas
組織 觀點間有效與不同的銜接轉換
C thesis (explicit or implicit) takes a clear position on the assigned G variety of sentence structures M conventions of
topic; topic sentences identifiable and relevant used with rare major sentence punctuation, capitalization,
內容 論點（明示或暗示）對指定的主題立場明確; 主句可識別並相關 problems spelling, and indentation
文法 使用各種句型並罕見重大句子 mostly respected with
C supporting ideas are mostly sufficiently developed
occasional errors
內容 論據多數充份發揮 問題
技巧 多數遵循標點符號、
C most information from sources is accurately interpreted and
acknowledged G occasional minor language errors 大小寫、拼字及首行空格規
文法 偶而輕微的語言偏誤 範, 偶而有誤
內容 多數出處訊息精準地詮釋與表態
C mostly effective selection and integration of source material M mechanics for citing
V mostly accurate and appropriate
內容 多數有效的選用與整合原始資料
Standard 水 平

word choice and form information from sources

C mostly effective acknowledgment of and response to at least one respected with minor errors
opposing view
生字 多數正確且恰當的單詞選擇與
技巧 引用出處訊息時犯輕
形式
內容 至少對一個對立觀點相當有效的表態與回應 微錯誤
O mostly logical sequencing of ideas and smooth transitions between V adequate range and variety of
and within paragraphs
vocabulary
組織 觀點多數合邏輯順序且段落間與段落內銜接轉換流暢 生字 範圍適當、生詞多樣
 C thesis and topic sentences identifiable, but weak; e.g. vague, narrow, G major sentence problems or M frequent problems with
or not argumentative limited sentence variety conventions of punctuation,
內容 論點與主句可識別, 但薄弱; 例如, 含糊、狹隘或無論證 文法 重要句子結構問題或句式變化 capitalization, spelling, and
indentation
C some supporting ideas are inadequately developed, irrelevant, and/or 有限
repetitive 技巧 標點符號、大小寫、拼
內容 有些論據發揮不足、不相干, 且/或一再重複 G frequent minor language errors 字及首行空格的規範問題頻繁
C some information from sources is misinterpreted and/or unacknowledged 文法 頻繁的輕微語言偏誤
內容 有些出處訊息錯誤的詮釋並/或不予表態 M frequent errors with
C ineffective selection and integration of source material V imprecise word choice or mechanics for citing
Approaching Standard 近 水 平

內容 無效的選用與整合原始資料 frequent word form errors information from sources

C acknowledgement of opposing view(s) is present but unclear, 生字 不精準的單詞選用或頻繁的詞形 技巧 引用出處訊息時頻繁犯錯
insufficient, or not coherently integrated 錯誤
M handwriting interferes
內容 表態對立觀點的存在但不夠清楚、不充份或不連貫的整合
with comprehension
O significant problem(s) with principles of essay organization V limited range and variety of
vocabulary
技巧 筆跡影響理解
組織 論文組織原則有嚴重的問題
O relationship between ideas is poorly established between and/or 生字 範圍與單詞變化侷限
within paragraphs; transitions sometimes not smooth
組織 段落間與段落內諸多觀點的關係很難建立; 銜接轉換有時不流
暢
C thesis and topic sentences missing, irrelevant, or incomprehensible G frequent major sentence structure M pervasive or severe
內容 論點與主句不見、無關或不知所云 problems; lack of sentence variety problems with conventions of
文法 重要句子結構問題頻繁; 句式變 punctuation, capitalization,
C supporting points are inadequately developed, irrelevant,
spelling, and indentation
unconvincing and/or repetitive 化欠缺
內容 論據發揮不足、不相干、無說服力, 且/或一再重複
技巧 對標點符號、大小寫、
C little or no information from sources used G pervasive or severe errors 拼字及首行空格的規範, 普遍且
impede comprehension of ideas 嚴重有問題
內容 引用極少或毫無出處資訊
C relies on lengthy direct quotations; sentences or sections of text 文法 普遍或嚴重錯誤妨礙想法理解
M mechanics for citing
copied or copied directly from resource sheets
V limited and inaccurate word information not properly
內容 極少依賴過長的直接引述; 複製文本句子或部份內文或直接 employed or not attempted
choice interferes with meaning;
從資源表複製 pervasive word form errors 技巧 不當使用或沒嘗試引
C no acknowledgment of opposing views in argument
生字 有限與不精準的單詞選用 用訊息的技巧
Below Standard 水 平 以 下

內容 無表態論證中的對立觀點 影響意思; 普遍詞形錯誤

O no clear pattern of organization M handwriting is illegible
組織 無明確的組織模式 V very narrow range of vocabulary 技巧 筆跡難以辨認
O sequence of ideas not logical or coherent; poor or absent transitions 生字 詞彙範圍很窄
between ideas M reference list is missing
組織 觀點順序不合邏輯或不連貫; 觀點間銜接轉換差或無 技巧 缺參考資料清單
X insufficient information for evaluation
不明 所要評估的訊息不足
 Cause/Effect Essay 因果關係寫作 ID # Name: Score: Reader:

Legend 備 註 : C = Content 內容; O = Organization 組織; G = Grammar 文法; V = Vocabulary 生字; M = Mechanics 技巧
Score Content & Organization Grammar & Vocabulary Mechanics Comments
分數 內容與組織 文法與生字 技巧 建議
C thesis (explicit or implicit) and topic sentences express the G variety of sentence M conventions of
essay’s response to the assigned topic in a clear and sophisticated structures used with no major punctuation, capitalization,
way sentence problems spelling, and indentation
1

內容 論點 (明示或暗指) 與主句以清晰周延方式表達了這篇文章 文法 使用各種句型且無重大問題 respected with rare minor

errors
對指定主題的回應
C informative, convincing and relevant supporting ideas G rare minor language errors 技巧 遵循標點符號、大小
內容 訊息詳實、令人信服並具相關論據 文法 極輕微的語言偏誤 寫、拼字及首行空格規範, 極少
C information from sources accurately interpreted and V sophisticated and precise word 有誤
acknowledged choice and accurate word form
M proper and complete
內容 精準地詮釋與表態出處資訊
Above Standard 水 平 以 上

mechanics for citing

12.5

C exemplary selection and integration of source material 生字 精練準確的單詞選擇與正確

information from sources
內容 出色的選用與整合原始資料 的單詞形式
技巧 引用出處訊息的技
V extensive range and variety of 巧合理且完整
O clarity of message enhanced by clear pattern of
organization between and within paragraphs vocabulary
組織 透過段落間與段落內明確的組織模式增強訊息的清 生字 範圍廣泛、生詞豐富
晰度
O effective and varied transitions between ideas
10.5

組織 觀點間有效與不同的銜接轉換
C thesis (explicit or implicit) and topic sentences identifiable and G variety of sentence structures M conventions of
express causal relationships relevant to the assigned topic used with rare major sentence punctuation, capitalization,
內容 可識別的論點（明示或暗示）和主句表達了與指定主題相 problems spelling, and indentation
文法 使用各種句型並罕見重大句子 mostly respected with
關的因果關係
occasional errors
C supporting ideas are mostly sufficiently developed 問題
內容 論據多數充份發揮 技巧 多數遵循標點符
G occasional minor language errors 號、大小寫、拼字及首行
C most information from sources is accurately interpreted and
acknowledged 文法 偶而輕微的語言偏誤 空格規範, 偶而有誤
8.5

內容 多數出處訊息精準地詮釋與表態 M mechanics for citing

V mostly accurate and appropriate
C mostly effective selection and integration of source information from sources
word choice and form
material respected with minor errors
生字
Standard 水 平

內容 多數有效的選用與整合原始資料 多數正確且恰當的單詞選擇
技巧 引用出處訊息時犯
與形式
輕微錯誤
O mostly logical sequencing of ideas and smooth transitions
between and within paragraphs V adequate range and variety of
組織 觀點多數合邏輯順序且段落間與段落內銜接轉換流暢 vocabulary
生字 範圍適當、生詞多樣
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 C thesis and topic sentences identifiable, but weak; e.g. vague, G major sentence problems or M frequent problems with
narrow, or not causal limited sentence variety conventions of punctuation,
內容 論點與主句可識別, 但薄弱; 例如, 含糊、狹隘或無因果 文法 重要句子結構問題或句式變化 capitalization, spelling, and
indentation
關係 有限
C some supporting ideas are inadequately developed, irrelevant, 技巧 標點符號、大小寫、
and/or repetitive G frequent minor language errors 拼字及首行空格的規範問題
內容 有些論據發揮不足、不相干, 且/或一再重複 文法 頻繁的輕微語言偏誤 頻繁
C some information from sources is misinterpreted and/or
unacknowledged V imprecise word choice or M frequent errors with
內容 有些出處訊息錯誤的詮釋並/或不予表態 frequent word form errors mechanics for citing
information from sources
C ineffective selection and integration of source material 生字 不精準的單詞選用或頻繁的詞
Approaching Standard 近 水 平

內容 無效的選用與整合原始資料 形錯誤
技巧 引用出處訊息時頻繁犯
錯
O significant problem(s) with principles of essay V limited range and variety of
organization vocabulary M handwriting interferes
with comprehension
組織 論文組織原則有嚴重的問題 生字 範圍與單詞變化侷限
技巧 筆跡影響理解
O relationship between ideas is poorly established between
and/or within paragraphs; transitions sometimes not
smooth
組織 段落間與段落內諸多觀點的關係很難建立; 銜接轉換有
時不流暢
C thesis and topic sentences missing, irrelevant, or G frequent major sentence structure M pervasive or severe
incomprehensible problems; lack of sentence variety problems with conventions of
內容 論點與主句不見、無關或不知所云 文法 重要句子結構問題頻繁; 句式 punctuation, capitalization,
spelling, and indentation
C supporting points are inadequately developed, 變化欠缺
irrelevant, unconvincing and/or repetitive 技巧 對標點符號、大小寫、
內容 論據發揮不足、不相干、無說服力, 且/或一再重複 G pervasive or severe errors 拼字及首行空格的規範, 普遍
C little or no information from sources used impede comprehension of ideas 且嚴重有問題
內容 引用極少或毫無出處資訊 文法 普遍或嚴重錯誤妨礙想法理解
M mechanics for citing
C relies on lengthy direct quotations; sentences or sections
V limited and inaccurate word information not properly
of text copied or copied directly from resource sheets
employed or not attempted
Below Standard 水 平 以 下

choice interferes with meaning;

內容 極少依賴過長的直接引述; 複製文本句子或部份內文
技巧 不當使用或沒嘗試
pervasive word form errors
或直接從資源表複製
生字 有限與不精準的單詞選 引用訊息的技巧

O no clear pattern of organization 用影響意思; 普遍詞形錯誤

M handwriting is illegible
組織 無明確的組織模式 技巧 筆跡難以辨認
V very narrow range of vocabulary
O sequence of ideas not logical or coherent; poor or absent 生字 詞彙範圍很窄
transitions between ideas M reference list is missing
組織 觀點順序不合邏輯或不連貫; 觀點間銜接轉換差或無 技巧 缺參考資料清單
X insufficient information for evaluation
不明 所要評估的訊息不足