Dalton Place

Teuscher

English 2010

16 May 2019

Look Back Reflection

Observation Essay: With this essay I chose to mainly modify the first few paragraphs. I

felt like the observations themselves were well done. I also will not be able to change the

observations I made. I decided the first few paragraphs were a little unclear though and needed to

change how they were laid out. By changing these paragraphs I learned how much I improved at

being able to convey my thoughts through writing. I feel like now the essay as a whole is a lot

stronger because it starts off on a better note.

Visual log: With this I chose to change the entire thing. I kept the same pictures for each

of the slides. I feel like I have a better understanding now of rhetoric and how to understand it

than I did when I did the visual log the first time. I felt like simply by completely dumping the

content I had written and doing a new analysis it would be significantly better. I do feel like I

have become better at analysing content whether it is a picture or text.