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What is the most useful vocabulary for writing IELTS essays? I’d suggest that it is the vocabulary that you can use in any essay, no
matter what it is about. I this post I give you a useful list of vocabulary that you can down load and use in all sorts of essays. I also show
you a way of using this vocabulary to help structure your essays and make them more coherent.
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How to structure IELTS essays
This lesson shows you a simple way to structure IELTS essays. Below I show a very simple method (with a downloadable resource) I use
myself and also show my students in class.
One key to it is understand the question and to be clear about what you want to say in your response. Clear thinking leads to clear
writing.As ever, the first step is to read and understand the question. Here is the question today:
Despite advances in medicine there are concerns that certain diseases such as diabetes are increasing and some
people believe future generations will face greater problems with health and die younger than we do today.
What is your opinion?
Think about the examiner – make your opinion and structure clear – give your essay a backbone
IELTS essays get marked quickly. You don’t want to allow the examiner to make a mistake. So make life easy for him/her by showing
the structure of your essay as clearly as possible. There are 4 places you do this – what I think of as being the spine of the essay.
(your spine is your backbone – it’s what keeps you upright and gives you your structure).
1.the introduction – that’s the first thing they read and where you make your first impression and first impressions count
2.the first sentence of each paragraph (x2) – examiners are taught that each paragraph should have one main idea – show them what it
is in the first sentence
3.the conclusion – that’s the last thing they read and the first thing they remember!
The key is link these things together so that
the introduction matches the conclusion – the opinion/point of view is the same: you just need to change the language
the two body paragraphs link to the opinion/point view in the introduction
To do this try this simple essay structure plan. It may just look like 4 boxes on a blank piece of paper , but it might save your life!
See my example
I’m going to go for a balanced type essay with an argument that it health and longevity (living for a long time) will get worse in the West
but better in developing nations. Before I start writing I make sure I can say this simply
I think health will get worse in the west but better in developing countries and this will affect how long people live.
All you need to do now is build the spine of the essay: the intro, first sentences and conclusion. I really do do this using my essay
structure plan above. I ended up with this. Take a look at it. See
This lesson wouldn’t be complete if I didn’t show you the “end-product”. Your plan is only good if it helps you write well. Take a look at
my opinions (in red/underlined) and the balance between developing countries (in green/bold) and the industrialised nations (in
blue/italics).
Introduction
There is no question that medicine has progressed dramatically over the last century, but this does not mean that all our medical
problems have been solved. Indeed, my belief is that the average life span in the Western world may actually fall in the 21st century.
This is in contrast to the situation in developing countries where I expect health provision to improve and longevity to increase.
Paragraph 1
The main reason why overall health may become worse in the industrialised nations of the West relates to modern lifestyles there.
Paragraph 2
The situation in the developing world is, however, quite different and overall health is likely to improve.
Conclusion
My conclusion is therefore a mixed one. While it is true that people may face greater problems with their health in the future, this only
applies to industrialised nations and not to the developing world where life expectancy may increase.
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Points to note in using the sample essays
Each essay follows the same basic 4 or 5 paragraph structure
How the introduction focuses on the question and introduces how the essay is going to be written
How each paragraph focuses on one main idea and expands it, using PEE (Point – Explain – Example)
How sentences within paragraphs are linked together using pronouns, linking words and repetition.
These essays are either argument based or opinion based
One way to use these samples is to find vocabulary you can use for yourself. This vocabulary can be divided into:
Another way to use these essays is to see how an IELTS essay is structured:
*note how the introduction addresses the question and leads into the main body of the essay
*identify the main point of each topic paragraph
*note how the topic paragraphs link to each other (do they present similar or contrasting attitudes?)
*note the functions of the conclusion: to summarise and/or present the answer to the question
Note how each paragraph focuses on one main idea and how that idea is expanded by the use of examples and reasons. You will find
more about this under coherence.
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