Professional Documents
Culture Documents
2012 - VERY IMP - Read Before Writing WAC Report PDF
2012 - VERY IMP - Read Before Writing WAC Report PDF
Feedback on Assignment 1
Section B
July 24, 2012
Letter of Transmittal
“I consider it a good rule for letter-writing to leave
unmentioned what the recipient already knows, and instead
tell him something new.”
-Sigmund Freud
Letter of Transmittal
Should be definitive
situation.
Giving consequences
Consistency in writing
publicity.
Well explained
for analysis
company.
for it.
Same as recommendation
contamination.
Sample Action Plan
Contact the restaurant chain’s management immediately and fully
reveal the situation.
Highlight this initiative as a legal act of full disclosure, insist on full
recall of the contaminated shipment or its destruction on the spot,
and assure the Chain of a full refund and the reimbursement of any
associated costs (such as return shipping).
Volunteer its manpower for the delivery of the recall warning to
individual restaurants.
Contingency Plan
"It is a mistake always to contemplate the good and ignore the
evil, because by making people neglectful it lets in disaster.
There is a dangerous optimism of ignorance and indifference."
-Helen Keller
Contingency Plan
recall.
Contingency unclear
term the company can still win them back if it can ensure a
references
Exhibits
in this case)
EXHIBITS
Punctuation
Although…but
Common errors
Although the restaurant knows about the
contamination of food, but the problem still arises.
Writing
“If you write to impress it will always be bad, but if you
write to express it will be good.”
-Thornton Wilder
Writing
Shorter sentences for clarity
Combining very short sentences for conciseness
6 – six
% - per cent
Company name: Michael, Michael’s, MHP, MHSP
Spellings – loose
Recall back
Thank you