- A business letter must be formal, correct, clear, concise, courteous, natural,
complete, logical, to the point, reader-oriented, efficient, factual, sincere, good looking, consistent… - Avoid being wordy, using slang
HOW MANY PARTS DOES IT INCLUDE IN A BUSINESS LETTER?
HOW MANY ARE ESSENTIAL? HOW MANY ARE OPTIOINAL? - 12 parts, 07 are essential, 05 are optional. Including: 1. Letter head: sender’s address. Sometimes it’s in printed 2. Date 3. Reference (optional) 4. Inside address 5. Attention line (optional) 6. Salutation 7. Subject line (optional) 8. Body 9. Closing (complimentary closing) 10. Signature 11. Enclosure line (optional) 12. C.C notation (optional) LAYOUT: Semi – block style: Sender's Address
Date
Reference
Inside address/ Receiver's name & address
Attention
Salutation
Subject line BODY Complimentary closing
Signature
Enclosure line
C/c notation
HOW TO WRITE EACH PART?
1. Sender’s address: On the top right – hand side of the page No sender’s name 2. Date: Written below the sender’s address (straight and a space separated) E.g.: September 1st 2009 September 1, 2009 1st September 2009 Do not abbreviate the month 3. Reference: Our ref: DL/ MT (DL = Signer/ writer’s initials, MT = secretary’s initials) Your ref: DS/ MR Our ref: 661/ 17 (661 = chronological No. of the letter, 17 = no. of the department) Your ref: 86/ 24 4. Inside address/ receiver’s name & address: 1. Name of the person or company 2. Name of the house/ bldg 3. No. of bldg, name of street, road, avenue, etc 4. Name of town/ city and postcode 5. Name of the country Eg: Ms. J.C. Gilbert, Johnson Co. Ltd Industrial house 34 – 41 Lang Road Bolton BL 4 8TF United Kingdom 5. Attention line: For the attention of ATTN: E.g.: For the attention of marketing manager (ATTN: the marketing manager) Dear Sir, 6. Salutation: Dear sir/ sirs/ madam, end with: Yours faithfully, Dear Mr. / Mrs. / Ms/ Miss, Your sincerely, (The comma after the salutation is optional) 7. Subject line/ titles: Re: Order no. PT 234 (re = regarding is optional) 8. The body of the letter: Usually 03 sections: - The opening: - The message: - The ending: 9. Complimentary closing: If begin with Dear sir/ sirs/ madam end with yours faithfully Dear Mr. / Mrs. / Miss/ Ms yours sincerely (The comma after complimentary closing is optional) (If after salutation use comma, then in closing comma is needed) 10. Signature Name, title E.g.: Rose Marry – Sales Manager P.P.J. Mane – Managing director (P.P. = per pro = for and on behalf of) 11. Enclosure line: (In a complain: enclosure line is essential. This must be the evidence: Survey report/ Inspection Certificate) En. / Encl. E.g.: Encl: 1. Price list 2. Catalogue 3. …… Enc. 1. Survey report 2. Pictures of damaged items 12. C.C. = Carbon copies : Written when copies are sent to people other than the named recipient.