Nursing Writing task
Reading time: 5 minutes
Writing time: 40 minutes
Patient name: Susan Matthews
Age: 76
Social Background:
- Husband died 5 years ago (cancer of bowel)
- Lives alone in own home
- Involved in bowling club, church, community groups
Medical History:
- Cerebrovascular accident (CVA) 4 years ago
- Lonely and isolated since husband passed away
- Weight: 48kg, height 165cm
- Hip replacement 2014
- Hypertension diagnosed 14years ago
- Non-smoker
10/11/16
- Presented to Emergency Dept
- Accident – fell off ladder while cleaning the fan
- Neighbour brought her to hospital
Observation - Laceration to R thigh, bruising, grazed legs, disorientated
Treatment - 10 sutures to R thigh, graze-antiseptic and clean, tetanus injection
- X-rays – nothing broken.
- Admitted to hospital for observation
11/11/16
Progress - Pt sore and disorientated, not sure how accident happened
- Not interested in food.
Treatment - Wound dressing, monitor patient mental health
12/11/16
Progress - Wound site red, swollen, pain 8/10, graze oozing fluid, temp 38o, lack of appetite, unwilling to
shower and dress independently.
Treatment - Oral penicillin, paracetamol 1-2 500mg 4hrly.
- Arrange visit with dietitian and physio
- Wound cleaned and dressed with non-stick dressing
13/11/16
Progress - Dietitian review – new high protein diet aim to weight
- Physio – mobilising patient with transfers (shower, toilet, bed)
- Temp 37o
Treatment - Wound cleaned and dressed
- Paracetamol 4hrly
14/11/16
Progress - Pt’s condition improving. Following diet, enjoying food
- Swelling reduced, nil exudate, nil fever, pain controlled
- Mobilising independently, but slow
Discharge date - 15/11/16
- Medications – paracetamol as needed, oral penicillin – 7days (must complete)
- Refer to community nurse
Community Nurse Assessment
16/11/16
- Pt moody, lonely, not coping with new diet regime, mobilising well at home with frame
- Regular paracetamol
- Wound cleaned and dressed with antiseptic solution
- Refer pt to Meals on Wheels and Domiciliary Care
- Refer pt to social worker – local support groups
18/11/16
- Pain controlled
- Nil exudate, nil redness
- Pt started Meals on Wheels
- Pt mood improved
- Leave wound exposed
20/11/16
- Pt coping reasonably well, more positive,
- Mobilising independently
- Wound good, no signs of infection
- Eating well - needs to be monitored
- Sutures to be removed in a week
Writing Task
You are the community nurse and you are writing to Susan Matthews’ GP (Dr. Maria Jones, 128 Blacks Rd, Lonsdale,
SA 5123) requesting follow-up care. You are concerned about the patient’s mental health, weight and wound.
In your answer:
- Expand the relevant case notes into complete sentences
- Do not use note forms
- The body of the letter should not be more than 200 words
- Use correct letter form