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This 18-minute keynote has a clear and effective structure, which is not
always a common practice in technical presentations. The sections are:
Problem -> Solution -> Product -> Benefits -> Call to action ->
Subproblem and its solution -> Demo -> Is this really possible? ->
Wrap up
Let´s then look at the strengths of this keynote in closer detail under each
segment in the structure.
The Problem
Elon Musk starts his keynote showing the problem of energy today:
dependence on fossil energy resources and its negative consequences. A
set of images--accompanied with the phrase “THIS IS REAL”--speak
itself. He replies to someone in the audience with “It sucks, exactly.” Then
Musk shows a graph with the growth of CO2 concentration in the
atmosphere. “I think we collectively should do something about this.”
This section informs about a relevant problem and tells how both Tesla
and we share the same values and concerns.
The Solution
Once Musk presented the problem, he transitions to the solution. The
solution was clearly explained as having two parts and there being a clear
gap in what the current solutions are offering.
Part 1: The Sun. “We have this handy fusion reactor in the sky called the
sun. You don’t have to do anything, it just works, shows up every day and
produces ridiculous amounts of power.”
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Show clearly what are the shortcomings of current solutions. People are
intrigued by contrast and this way you will create clear contrast between
what is and what could be.
The Product
The solution to the problem of today’s batteries (called “the missing
piece”) was the new Tesla Energy product. Musk presents Tesla
Powerwall by showing a well-designed video. The video first shows how a
Powerwall mounted outside a house can power a car, and then shows how
it can also power a house and be connected to a renewable energy
grid. “It looks like a beautiful sculpture on the wall.”
There may be many advantages in your product, but it´s better you focus
on one or few that are the most essential ones.
Benefits
After the audience showed its excitement and interest about the new
product, Musk starts presenting clear benefits of the product. The main
three points were:
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Demo
After Musk unveiled the Powerpack and explained its scenarios, he
brought the idea of switching the energy used in the building to battery-
powered energy.
The camera immediately went to a room that showed the energy source of
the building at that moment. “Let’s go and check out the power meter”.
The camera zoom showed two power meters labeled “Grid” and “Battery”.
A closer zoom showed that the Grid meter was actually zero. “This entire
night has been powered by batteries”. This was the WOW moment of the
demo, which caused applause and hurrahs. “Not only that, but the
batteries were charged by the solar panels on the roof of this building.”
Demo is great, but it should add more value to the presentation than just
an example of what it is that you are selling. Think how you can achieve a
WOW moment with your demo.
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If you wanted to transition all transport and all electricity generation and
all heating in the world to renewable you need approximately 2 billion
Powerpacks. The number of cars and trucks that we have on the road is
approximately 2 billion.
Wrap Up
As this keynote was not only showing us a new product but a change of
how the world should produce and consume energy, he ended reiterating
the shared mission, and that Tesla is committed to make it happen.
“The path that I’ve told you about, the solar panel and the batteries, is
the only path that I know that can do this, and I think it’s something we
must do, and we can do and that we will do.”
What was the best of the keynote from a technical presentation point
of view?
This keynote had many elements that when put together made it easy to
follow, even for a non-technical audience. The most important elements
were:
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I hope this brought you inspiration and great ideas for the next time you
present your product. No matter how long your talk will be or how
technical your product is, you can apply the same principles Elon Musk
did during Tesla Powerwall Keynote. Start with the problem, follow a
logical structure, and add as many elements as you can: analogies,
stories, a demo, visuals, etc.
Oscar is also Host and Producer of the public speaking podcast Time to
Shine.
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