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Paper 1.3
Professor Roberts-Miller
10/12/2010
When reading the deliberative speeches in Thucydides’s The Peloponnesian War, the
contentions were caused by a breach of the peace treaty between Athens and Sparta. At least
this would have been your perspective if you were a member of the audience at the time. When
speakers tried to persuade the Peloponnesos to go to war, laying the blame of breaching the
treaty on the opponent was particularly effective. In fact, that is probably the reason why the
issue of the treaty was tossed around ceaselessly in the deliberations prior to the Peloponnesian
War. So, what does Aristotle, being a rhetorical expert, have to say about this? How does he
evaluate the usage of treaties in speeches? And if the treaties were actually not the true reason
causing the Peloponnesian War, then what was? What does Aristotle think about taking
The first time the treaty is mentioned in a significant context is when the Athenians were
deliberating whether or not to join an alliance with Corcyra. The heated tensions between
Corinth and Corcyra seemed to be the catalyst to the frenzy of alliance pleas. Corinth was
prepared to battle Corcyra over the issue of Potidaea; they “built ships and prepared the strongest
naval force they could” (Thucydides I.31). Their readiness distressed the Corcyraeans,
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Works consulted for introduction: Kagan and Thucydides
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motivating them to seek cooperation from a reluctant Athens. As questioned by Kagan, “Why
should they [the Athenians] consider an alliance that would involve them in hostilities against
Corinth, at least, and possibly the Peloponnesian League?” (42). The Athenians were hesitant in
submitting to Corcyra’s request for participation because the alliance could easily violate a long-
standing peace treaty with Sparta, which had very detrimental consequences. It was required for
the Corcyraeans to manipulate the context of the situation regarding the treaty between the two
superpowers. In an address to the Athenian assembly, they explained, “You will not break the
treaty…by receiving us, the allies of neither side” (I.35). The Corcyraeans insisted that, based
on the conditions in the treaty which “expressly permitted alliance with a neutral” (Kagan 42),
there was no legal way in which the Athenians would be in violation of it. However, it does not
seem as though they rule out the possibility of a breach of peace. The Corcyraeans further
argued that if anyone still “fears to break the treaty by acting on this conviction, let him
understand that…fear combined with strength will contribute to the enemy’s fear” because “you
will be able to oppose them with our ships added to your own” (I.36). The Corcyraeans knew
that their strong navy would be difficult for the Athenians to turn down since both of their navies
combined would mean that Athens could be a close-to-invincible power, able to fight whatever
The Corcyraeans were not the only state to mold their arguments with the treaty,
however. Immediately following the Corcyraeans’ testimony, the Corinthians tried to use the
treaty to their own advantage. They asserted that the treaty does not include “a provision for
those [neutral countries] who take this action [to join an alliance] in order to harm others” (I.40).
The Corinthians insisted that because the Corcyraeans had the wrong motive (which was to be
able to go to war with Corinth) in mind, it would be wrong for Athens to join an alliance with
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them. They said to Athens, “You would not simply become their auxiliaries but our enemies”
(I.40). The Corinthians basically accused Athens of possibly violating the treaty because they
Upon having heard Corinth’s argument, it would not have been unusual for Athens to
devise a strategy to defend Corcyra that complied with the treaty, since they did not want to
initiate a war with the Peloponnesian League. They still advanced to make “an alliance with the
Corcyraeans…but forming a defensive pact” because “if the Corcyraeans requested them to sail
with them against the Corinthians they would be breaking the treaty with the Peloponnesians”
(I.44). This way, the Athenians would not have to break the treaty by fighting Corinth – they
would only need to shield Corcyra while the two engaged in war. After fighting though, the
Corinthians “feared that the Athenians, on the assumption that the treaty had been broken
because they had come into conflict, would not let them leave” (I.52) to go home. Ironically, the
Corinthians thought Athens would attack them for breaking the treaty. They test the Athenians
by asking that “if you are breaking the treaty, start here by taking us prisoner and treating us as
enemies” (I.53). Instead of putting the focus on themselves, they cautiously shifted it to the
Athenians. The Athenians, still not desiring a bigger war, knowingly declared, “Peloponnesians,
we are not starting a war, and we are not breaking the treaty” (I.53). They knew that if a
violation of the peace treaty was acknowledged, the would-be Peloponnesian War would
After the siege of Potidaea by the Athenians, however, the treaty started to be used to
incite war between the Delian and the Peloponnesian leagues. The Corinthians were not so
friendly with them anymore regarding the treaty because they had attacked Potidaea. In addition,
the Aiginetans alleged “that they did not have the autonomy guaranteed by the treaty” and the
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Megarians proclaimed “their exclusion from both the ports of the Athenian empire and the
market of Attica in violation of the treaty” (I.67). Other countries echoed Athens’s breach of
peace in support, seeking to wage a war between Athens and Sparta. This, however, was still not
enough for the Corinthians. They sought the Spartans for assistance, urging them, “For those
who break treatises are not the ones who go over to others because of their isolation but the ones
who do not help those to whom they swore their oaths” (I.71). Because the Spartans were
probably afraid to violate the peace treaty just as the Athenians were, the Corinthians made their
request by saying that Sparta would indeed be breaking the peace treaty if they did not help an
allied country. The Athenians responded to all these countries, telling the Lacdaemonians to
“not break the treaty, do not transgress your oaths, but arbitrate our differences in accordance
with our agreement” (I.78). The Athenians, having spoken of treaty’s importance in preventing
the Peloponnesian War, encouraged negotiation over blatant violation. But in the end, the
Lacedaemonians decided “that the treaty had been broken and that they must go to war” (I.88).
Additionally, the Corinthian leaders say to their people, “You will not be the first to break the
treaty, which indeed the god, in bidding you go to war, regards as already transgressed” (I.123).
They even go as far as to claim divine permission in order to beseech all Corinthians to be in
support of war.
The entire concept of tossing around blames that are relevant to the peace treaty is very
bizarre. It is full of consistencies and no one ever comes up with a set of concrete criteria in
determining who has broken the treaty. According to both Kagan and Thucydides, there are
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other underlying motives leading up to the Peloponnesian War. The peace treaty between
Even in the Corcyraeans’ initial request to the Athenians for an alliance, they “argued
that a war between Athens and the Spartan Alliance was inevitable and on its way…since war
could not be avoided, Athens must accept the Corcyraean alliance” (Kagan 42-43). In this “most
weighty argument” (Kagan 43), the treaty is not mentioned even once. The Corcyraeans do not
seem to think that the inevitability of the Peloponnesian War is relevant to the peace treaty. The
Athenians genuinely believed it. They accepted the alliance with the Corcyraeans to guarantee
themselves a strong navy that would give them the upperhand in an inevitable war.
Another main reason why the Peloponnesian War gave way was because the members of
the Peloponnesian League felt threatened by Athenian power. The Corinthians, to the rest of the
Peloponnesians, set up a “picture of the arrogance of the Athenians and the danger presented by
their growing power” (Kagan 55). The Corinthians did not seem to truly regard the Athenians as
having broken the peace treaty – they regarded the Athenians as an expanding empire that they
did not want to see expand. The Spartans also found themselves in favor of war “not because
they were persuaded by the arguments of their allies, ‘but because they were afraid that the
Athenians might become too powerful, seeing that the greater part of Greece was already in their
hands’” (Kagan 56). The Spartans felt that their empire was being threatened by the Athenian
empire and feared to be diminished by it. In fact, there had always been “a faction in Sparta,
dating back at least half a century, that was jealous and suspicious of the Athenians and
implacably hostile to Athens” (Kagan 62). This untrusting attitude was not newly developed; it
had been present long before the onset of the conflict between Corcyra and Corinth. And so the
But why does it seem that using the treaty to point fingers is more important? And why,
within Thucydides’s The Peloponnesian War, are there so many inconsistencies such as a
country denying having broken the treaty due to reluctance to go to war and then later willing to?
In deliberating whether or not to go to war, is centering appeals on the peace treaty between
Athens and Sparta an effective strategy? And since Aristotle is such an expert on rhetoric, how
The treaties, though inconsistent with the actual reason for war, still caused the outbreak
of the Peloponnesian War. The “rhetors” in the deliberations prior to the fighting appealed to
their crowds by repeatedly mentioning the peace treaty between the Athenians and the Spartans.
In fact, all of their arguments seemed to be centered on the treaty. However, Aristotle, the
supposed master of deliberative rhetoric, particularly pertaining to Ancient Greece, does not
mention a thing about treaties. Instead, he says, “The main matters on which all men deliberate
and on which political speakers make speeches are some five in number: ways and means, war
and peace, national defence, imports and exports, and legislation” (I.iv.1359b). At first glance, it
seemed to me as though treaties just might be mentioned under war and peace, or even more
likely, legislation. However, in war and peace, Aristotle’s main points appear to be that a rhetor
should know “what wars his country has waged” (I.iv.1359b) and “the relative strength”
(I.iv.1360a) of neighboring countries. No treaties are mentioned. Under the topos of legislation,
Aristotle focuses on types of government, to “know how many different forms of constitution
there are” (I.iv.1360a) and its developments. Again, no treaties are mentioned. And just to be
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convinced that Aristotle really does not mention treaties under any of the topoi, I investigated
what he had to say about each of them. And still, no treaties are mentioned.
Aristotle also does not provide commentary on hidden intentions either. He does
expound upon how Corinth (or anybody for that matter) used the excuse of the Athenians
breaking the peace treaty (as opposed to bluntly stating their reluctance to allow Athens to
become a dominant Grecian power) to successfully induce war. The closest to describing this
strategy is when Aristotle describes forensic rhetoric. The Peloponnesians probably realized that
the “arousing of prejudice, pity, anger, and similar emotions has nothing to do with the essential
facts, but is merely a personal appeal to the man who is judging the case” (Aristotle I.i.1354a).
And sure enough, they succeeded in their appeal, but in the wrong Aristotelian context. Aristotle
meant for that type of rhetorical persuasion to be inherent in forensic rhetoric, not deliberative or
political rhetoric.
It is rather unusual for Aristotle to have failed to include treaties as a topos, or even as a
part of a topos, in deliberative rhetoric. It is even more unusual for him to not include that the
deliberative rhetor may have topoi present in his speech that mask his real, hidden intentions.
Misleading speeches seem to have a recurring presence in the political world. In the past century
alone, there have been numerous occasions in which leaders have led their people to believe
certain reasons to go to war that they themselves may not even consider a priority (i.e. Iraq War).
A very infamous example of this kind of leader is Adolf Hitler. In his speeches, he portrayed a
concept that would resonate well with the crowds – Lebensraum. It was a concept that “Hitler
returned to…in innumerable speeches…where he expounded upon his ideas of foreign policy”
(Kershaw 57). The rationale behind Lebensraum (“living space”) was “that only increased
territory for settlement allowed for the population growth essential to the strength and vitality of
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a great power” (Kershaw 56). His audience probably did not think any further than that he meant
for his country to prosper, that Hitler wanted an increase in land so the German people can fare a
better life. However, the idea was actually “implicitly social Darwinist and racist…that the more
vital, creative races should properly triumph over inferiors” (Kershaw 56-57) and Hitler “added a
further vital racial component to it: antisemitism” (Kershaw 57). Put in the plainest terms,
Hitler just wanted to take over the world through racism – a mentality in which his audience
would have found difficult to distinguish in his speeches. The motives present in his speeches
Because nobody is perfect, not even the genius dubbed the master of rhetoric.
The issue of the peace treaty between Athens and Sparta seemed to have a looming
prevalence in contributing to the onset of war. Various ancient Greek states were involved in the
act of tossing around accusations as to who broke the treaty solely to instigate the would-be
Peloponnesian War. The blames are a significant presence in the debates leading to the start of
war, but they are not the true reason as to why both the Peloponnesians and the Athenians decide
to engage in it. Rather, it is because that the Athenians believed that the war with Sparta is
inevitable and that Sparta feared the growth of the Athenian empire. Thucydides writes, “As to
why [the Spartans and Athenians] broke the peace…I consider the truest cause the one least
openly expressed, that increasing Athenian greatness and the resulting fear among the
Lacedaemonians made going to war inevitable” (I.23). But why have the Ancient Greek
deliberative rhetors targeted the peace treaty as the main feature of their arguments? Because it
worked. And using an argument that is not the speaker’s truest belief in deliberative speeches
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still works to this present day. It is a shame that Aristotle seemed to have not caught on to such a
WORKS CITED
Aristotle. The Rhetoric and the Poetics of Aristotle. Trans. W. Rhys Roberts and Ingram
Kagan, Donald. On the Origins of War and the Preservation of Peace. New York:
Kershaw, Ian. “Berlin, Summer and Autumn 1940.” Fateful Choices. New York: Penguin Group,
Thucydides. The Peloponnesian War. Trans. Steven Lattimore. Indianapolis: Hackett Publishing