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EXT. ST.

JOHNS PARK

The overjoyed child swung on the swing whilst his fearful


father sat on the bench scouting out any unusual activity ...
A phone rings ... A tree shakes ... A park gate closes ...

CHILD
daddy!(screeched)

The father begins to instantly sprint toward the scream of


the child and can only hear the sound of car wheels racing
away, he felt a sudden feeling of emptiness to realise his
biggest fear came true yet again loneliness...

INT. BAR

Close up of father in a drunken fashion.

BAR TENDER
Get out!

FATHER
(Growls) Was it you? Did you take my
son?

Long shot of father throwing glass at bar tender.SMASH...


Then a closeup of him breaking down and reducing to tears.

BAR TENDER
Didn't realise you had a child. You
must go to the police.

FATHER
No. No police, I must do this myself.

BAR TENDER
You need a hand looking for your son,
I know some people that could help.
Where was the last time you saw him?

FATHER
At the park.

BAR TENDER
What park?

FATHER
ST.Johns Park.

BAR TENDER
Great... there's security camera's

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there, we can find him. I'll drive you


to my guy he'll 100% have the footage
he works in ... well he has access to
certain government footage.

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INT. CAR (NIGHT)

POV shot from drivers perspective in conversation with LOAN


SHARK (SHARKY). Dialogue continues in a SHOT REVERSE SHOT.

SHARKY
U got that p my bro?

CUT

DRIVER
Yeah Yeah of course g. Take this bro.

CUT

SHARKY
Say nuttin i'll catch you in a bit.

CUT

EXT. ROADZ (NIGHT)

OVER SHOULDER shot into a POV SHOT of SHARKY admiring the


money that he's just received, as he then holds it up in the
sun he clocks that the money isn't real.

FADE TO BLACK

EXT. ROADZ (NEXT DAY)

MID SHOT of SHARKY walking on phone to Close up of DRIVER


driving his car. Dialogue continues in SHOT REVERSE SHOT.

SHARKY
What you sayin bro?

DRIVER
Just chillin at yard g.

SHARKY
You down to link up at spot.

DRIVER
Yeh say nuttin be there in 20 g.

SHARKY
Calm. Shout me when your 5 mins away
bro.

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INT. CAR (DAY)

DRIVER begins to drive to spot and proceeds to ring SHARKY.


Dialogue continues in a SHOT REVERSE SH0T.

DRIVER
Yo 5 mins away bro... wait hold up
there's some gyal broken down imma
give her a two two hand.

SHARKY
AGHH... just hurry up my g.

EXT. TUNNEL (DAY)

Birds eye view shot of the car driving with intent. Cuts into
a close up shot of the hands controlling the steering wheel
as he passes through a tunnel. POV of DRIVER as he spots a
girls broken down on the side of the road. The DRIVER starts
to slow down and pulls up beside her car. He rolls down the
window.

DRIVER
You need a hand with that b?

GIRL
Yeah I don't know what the problem is?

DRIVER
Say nuttin b. Lemme just pull up
quick.

The DRIVER then pulls in front of the GIRL'S car and gets
out. DRIVER walks up to the GIRL who disappears out of shot.
Instantly fulfilled with fear as a MS of three men with
balaclava's and weapons approach him. Dialogue continues in a
SHOT REVERSE SHOT.

SHARKY (IN DISGUISE)


We know what you did g?

BALI MAN (2)


Your dun out ere!

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